SHE BRINGS ME JOY UP-DATED - TuneDef

8th Apr 2014 10:42 - 12 years ago
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Description : Irvbeats (Dreams of Love) DJSLTUK made a couple of suggestions to enhance the listening pleasure of our looper fam. I heeded his suggestions, at least the ones I was capable of handling myself.

Comments (8)

If you have time take a listen and give TuneDef some feedback.

GalanticMusic
GalanticMusic 21st Aug 2016 00:39 - 10 years ago
beats are nice! singing is okay especially if your freestyling, if you could just take the time, you would have an amazing product!
TuneDef
TuneDef replied 22nd Aug 2016 - 10 years ago
Yeah, I tend to freestyle everything, I sing when the moods hits no matter time, or place and have lost more gems than I dare to admit, but it's the emotion that drives the outcome...
soundhound
soundhound 29th May 2014 00:47 - 12 years ago
I see it is not truth you want, just accolades of grander...

Forgive me for being honest, I try my best not to lie for trivial matters
so I guess, I won't be commenting on any of your Music any more...

Have a Nice Day...

Peace.....TG.
TuneDef
TuneDef replied 29th May 2014 - 12 years ago
To you mister I can say what I want..... I am learning the dynamics of recording, and although that track really wasn't professional, there's a reason....I'm not a professional....so far as not being able to hold a note,
Listen to my track Urluvgetsmehi...that's without a true mic, just singing into an old compaq onboard mic, so it's not that i can't...the question is what makes you think I owe you that? Are you one of those individuals whom cliams other peoples property as your own?

Regardless of the situation you are neither a highlight or downfall to my
Day...vut amusing none the less.....
Enzotic
Enzotic 28th May 2014 23:51 - 12 years ago
I think that more needs to be done with the recording and mixing of the vocals. I'm not an expert on recordings, but I would try looking up some techniques on reducing the effects that a room has on a recording because that seems an issue in my opinion. Also, it is very difficult to make out what you are saying at times. With more work on the recording it will definitely be a better track. Good luck!
TuneDef
TuneDef replied 29th May 2014 - 12 years ago
Yes . someone who knows...finally... I'm new to recording, just got my first mic months ago...although I'm not try'n to be a singer I do need to get my work across as best I can...just a day or two ago I found the room I was recording in was receiving too much reverberation from bouncing off the walls....yeah I know, no shielding, no pop filter.....but I never said I was some superstar, I'm here to gain the knowledge i,'m interested in not what others think I should have....it's silly to give blind recommendations without learning circumstances. Sometimes its simple!

Thanx 4 tha listen, your feedback is justified!

Tune D
soundhound
soundhound 28th May 2014 16:30 - 12 years ago
Can't nobody be that out of tune, without wanting to be.... :-)

A suggestion if I maybe so bold, it is clear that you know talking sounds
way better then your singing...So why not just tell your stories by talking
because at times, I'm sure it is even painful for you to hear yourself sing... :-)

Track smokes Man Musically and I truly see your intent...Lyrics are strong..

Peace....TG.
TuneDef
TuneDef replied 28th May 2014 - 12 years ago
Songwriters need not be singers just able to get the mood and feel across, but since you've sold over a billion copies, pay 4 me a coach!!! Yeah just what I thought A-hole...not time don't stop keep it moving slick!

Tune D
TinyFinger
TinyFinger 28th May 2014 15:10 - 12 years ago
Hi. Nice track. I love calm music.
TuneDef
TuneDef replied 28th May 2014 - 12 years ago
Once again a person of few words, but says so much....thanx 4 allowing me to occupy some of your day in a non-threatening way! LOL

Tune D
RealProblemShuckers
RealProblemShuckers 27th May 2014 21:53 - 12 years ago
It's a good song, and sure, the vocals are sometimes off-pitch, but it's hardly noticeable.

Keep up the good work!

- RealProblemShuckers
TuneDef
TuneDef replied 27th May 2014 - 12 years ago
RealP. thanks 4 the time given to this creation, your input is welcomed and valued. I'm try'n to get to a place on the engineer side where I can confidently help others got a good ways to go, but by getting feedback on my own miscues can reinforce my knowledge base to help others!

Learning 4 a higher goal!

Tune D
Joyce
Joyce 13th May 2014 20:15 - 12 years ago
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Bathers
Bathers 9th Apr 2014 20:19 - 12 years ago
Hi TuneDef

I think you still can sing better .
Or maybe it needs a better mix
I've heard some of your tracks and know you can do better.
The Instrumental is very nice and sounds great

All the best
Bathers
TuneDef
TuneDef replied 7th May 2014 - 12 years ago
Yeah, u r rite in that sense the vocals could be improved, but all my tracks are Freestyles, no written Lyrics, no rehearsals, I start the track grab the headphones and what comes out, comes out.....and that's what you get! It's not my intention to offer perfection are even attempt perfection on a site that's geared to gain knowledge, not seek sales...I do not aspire to be a professional vocalist, or to perform in public...my expertise is lyrically gifted! Being able to do what rappers do, in verse form, I do for the whole song!

Tune D

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