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Tags : | RnB | 3.60 MB

Description : this track was inspired by a loop "hypnotize" by Danke. I downloaded and arranged it by adding drums, chords, arpeggiated lead and bass to it. Although it is not close to being finished, I thought I would get some early feedback from you guys. Please let me know what you think... I am experiencing with arpeggio as you can tell. :)

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  1. PDMuzak
    PDMuzak on Wed 19th Aug 2015 - 5 years ago

    Fantastic use of arpeggio . I still don't have the patience to work with sequencers yet. I think I'm tech disadvantaged. Beyond that the instrumentation is also great. Keep up the great work. PDMuzak

  2. ThaTruth1
    ThaTruth1 on Fri 1st Aug 2014 - 6 years ago

    This is too good. The structure, the arrangement. And especially that drum pattern. Nice one

  3. Bessy10
    Bessy10 on Mon 17th Mar 2014 - 7 years ago

    I like it bro :}

  4. EricMilligan
    EricMilligan on Fri 14th Mar 2014 - 7 years ago

    Yeah. I kind of play by ear as well. I usually do know what key I'm in, but with complex chord progressions I just do what sounds right and I have no idea of what the chords are. Unfortunately, I'm now finding it hard to play the kind of stuff that you can do. I sold my 76 key Korg and got a little 37 key Virus Polar. The Virus sounds fantastic, but the keyboard is really too small to play good fat chords and melody lines with two hands. Your Yamaha would be much more suitable. I think I took a wrong turn, at least for some types of music.

  5. EricMilligan
    EricMilligan on Fri 14th Mar 2014 - 7 years ago

    Hey, Ronabo. I'm back, taking a break from working on my latest track. Am working through all yours and liking what I'm hearing a whole lot. I agree with many of the comments posted already on this one. First of all, this one, like your other tracks is crying out for R&B vocals. I love the chord progression in the middle section. I'd cut back on the arpeggios and keep them for the middle section, but it kind of depends on how things fit with a vocal. If I could sing, I'd be working up something on this one for sure, but I can tell from your tracks that you have a better sense than I do about how to craft a soulful melody line. I expect to learn from your examples. I think the drums need tightening, both in terms of applying some quantizing and also compression. I'm not sure if you've shifted kick and snare timing, but I'd play around with that to get the groove more locked in. Might want to drop the drums levels down in the mix, particularly the snare. Bass line is great. OK. That's my 2 cents worth. I'm off to listen to your next track!

    ronabo
    Reply by ronabo

    Hey Eric,

    I play by ear so I do not know really what key I am playing or what chord progression I am using. I appreciate the comments though and the constructive feedback. Thanks again.

    Ronabo

  6. bartofficialmusic
    bartofficialmusic on Sun 19th Jan 2014 - 7 years ago

    Nice. I sing to your track. Love it.

    ronabo
    Reply by ronabo

    You should record yourself singing to this track and share it with me. :) I am glad that you love it.

    Ronabo.

  7. Alan3w3
    Alan3w3 on Sat 18th Jan 2014 - 7 years ago

    I like it, good grove, would sound good with vocals and a little more low frequencies

    ronabo
    Reply by ronabo

    Thanks for you comments and I am glad that you liked it. I hear that a lot about my tracks .... that I need more low freqs. I will pay attention to that going forward. Thanks.

  8. Polyfronetic
    Polyfronetic on Fri 17th Jan 2014 - 7 years ago

    I love the tunes from Dane and i also love your work.
    Just relax and listen to the vibes... good job!

    ronabo
    Reply by ronabo

    Thank you Polyfronetic... I am glad that you can vibe to it.

  9. mrwolf14
    mrwolf14 on Thu 16th Jan 2014 - 7 years ago

    Very good tune!
    Like the epiano: simple but builds the right carpet for the vocals (really looking forward to hearing it completed).
    I like the drums, but maybe the snare could be a bit more "dry", not sure though... and since this is your song I'll let you decide :-)
    I also second the idea of Ed: let the listener wait for the arpeggio 'til the first chorus. Maybe you could just serve smaller chops of it as appetizer in the intro.
    The track is also well mixed.
    Good job!
    Ciao, Domenico

    ronabo
    Reply by ronabo

    Mrwol14, Thanks a lot for these great comments. I really like the idea of chopping up the arp and giving the listener just a taste of it in the intro. I am definitely going to try that. I am glad you think that the track is mixed well... I try but that is my weakness.

    Ronabo

  10. crucethus
    crucethus on Thu 16th Jan 2014 - 7 years ago

    Very, very nice composition. I enjoyed the bass line as well as the arps. keep at this one this is a cool tune my friend
    Steve

    ronabo
    Reply by ronabo

    Thanks crucethus for the comments. I will hopefully finish it soon. :)

  11. mackit
    mackit on Thu 16th Jan 2014 - 7 years ago

    Can't wait to here this when i'ts done. Smooth RnB track. Danke is a true musician. PEACE. THE MACK MAN OUT.

    ronabo
    Reply by ronabo

    Thanks Mackit.

  12. Tumbleweed
    Tumbleweed on Wed 15th Jan 2014 - 7 years ago

    Oh yeah....Danke is good musical company for sure...I can hear a nice R&B vocal on this one ronabo...but gotta say its just good listening even as it is...I think I might consider taking the arps out of the intro..and bringing them in for the chorus parts as you did...kind of gives the show away right off the start rather than letting it build a bit...just an idea...and certainly not a criticism..enjoyed it...dm good job....keep on...Ed

    ronabo
    Reply by ronabo

    Thanks Ed. I appreciate the comments. I like the build up idea. I may play with that intro and see what how it sounds.

  13. BabyBrady
    BabyBrady on Wed 15th Jan 2014 - 7 years ago

    Fresh n clear drums.... sounds good!

    ronabo
    Reply by ronabo

    Thanks. I am trying every day to get better at my drums and blending it in with music better.

  14. husny
    husny on Wed 15th Jan 2014 - 7 years ago

    amazing piano...

    ronabo
    Reply by ronabo

    Thanks. You should check out the rest of my tracks and comment. :)

    I listened to your track that you posted years ago. I like it a lot even though i didnt understand the language. The vibe was cool. When are you creating more tracks?

  15. anthonyabutler32
    anthonyabutler32 on Tue 31st Dec 2013 - 7 years ago

    I enjoyed this track a lot. Real nice melody.

  16. benjizo
    benjizo on Mon 30th Dec 2013 - 7 years ago

    i feel some soul in here.I LIKED IT.

    ronabo
    Reply by ronabo

    Soul indeeed Benjizo. I am glad you liked it. Hope to hear from you soon.
    Ronabo

  17. ScottFranco
    ScottFranco on Mon 30th Dec 2013 - 7 years ago

    I really like it, Ronabo. You've got a good start and am looking forward to the completed product. Very arpeggio work. That's something I need to look into more.

    Cheers,
    Scott

  18. sashmaster
    sashmaster on Mon 30th Dec 2013 - 7 years ago

    new lead and a good rnb singer/writter the rest is ready to b something

  19. evilarmy83
    evilarmy83 on Mon 30th Dec 2013 - 7 years ago

    very nice, danke is the sheeeiiiittt.

    ronabo
    Reply by ronabo

    Yes... Danke create some good music too

  20. pepestar
    pepestar on Mon 30th Dec 2013 - 7 years ago

    with this track i could fly between stars, alone or not... :) thanks

    ronabo
    Reply by ronabo

    I am glad you enjoyed it. Keep your head up, aim for the moon, and if you happen to fall at least you will be amongst the stars. :)

  21. danke
    danke on Sun 29th Dec 2013 - 7 years ago

    Hahh...brilliant track...so special, made for vocs and that's cool...really have space for it, I imagined a good RnB voice for it...May I suggest stg? Thank you! :-) That sharp synth tone is a bit strange in this song...If this is want to be a vocal theme, that's ok, but if not, would you please find another tone for it? Just an idea...

    Best for 2014, Danke

    ronabo
    Reply by ronabo

    Yes.. I do not like the lead either :) ... just thought I would try it and see what happens. I'll come up with a much better lead and post it. Thanks.

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