Melodic Synth Draft - Doudei

IT's got a nasty drop to the groove, big bass drum on the 1 if you get my drift
drop that in and everything will stand on that, with a solid foundation...
Cool intro that last 17 well almost 18 bars would be a groundbreaking
direction it has stability groove wise with a simplistic feel-Very Real....
Slap a guitar on that to complement the melody, and you'd have a winner..

I like it a lot...Well Done...

This is an optimistic piece of music. I wonder if you managed to develop it more?

Hey, thanks for getting back to me eventually. I only saw it because of getting the email notification. Would have missed the reply if it hadn't been for that. When I was listening to Dance for the Morning, I was thinking "Hey, I wonder what happened to that guy's cool short track he posted a couple of months ago? I'd like to hear that".

So, Dance for the Morning is the full version, right? I guess I should have recognised it though it sounds quite different now. I still think a short, instrumental version of this would be cool. Lots of people have already enjoyed this short piece so I think two versions would work out really well. Not exactly like Orbital's wonderful The Box, but a little bit like that.

I'll comment again on Dance for the Morning, which may be just a little too long (maybe not) so worth thinking about a short version, which could be cool on an album before hearing the full length masterpiece.

Yo. Didn't see this when you first posted it but glad I've now found it as it's excellent work.

Really majestic movements in those synths and surely the best thing I've heard from you.

I sometimes find it quite daunting when I come up with a particularly cool riff or collection of parts as sometimes doing great initial ideas justice does not come easily. Sometimes it's very easy but I've heard loads of songs with cool parts in them that just weren't that great and should have been better (I guess we all have).

Anyway, I actually think this works well without drums or extra bass or guitar etc.

So, I suggest making a purely drumless version lasting, say, 3 mins.

At the same time, make a grooving beat-heavy version. If it were me, I'd spend ages playing around with loads and loads of different acoustic drumming grooves and kits as well as drum loops.

I'd probably decide quite a few different ones worked and then would spend ages working out how to transition between those different grooves. But that's me so maybe you'd prefer to choose a good, fairly simple hip hop groove (for instance) and just stick with that and not move to double time swinging jazz or d'n'b or whatever.

Good luck with it and let us know how you get on. Definitely consider the two versions as I think you're nearly there with this (drumless) version.

Oh, and maybe make the intro a bit simpler - perhaps go with the coolest, most distinctive and memorable part so it's a memorable intro.

could i sample this sir ????

Yeah, what DJSLTU said - some big drums kick in and the song takes off. I can hear that with a big guitar riff taking that to outer space.

Def love the feel of this for sure!

Hello ....

Beautiful harmonies deployed throughout your track. A little short, but it could be the beginnings of a original concept ....

Dan

Ugh, this is sooo nice, I love it. Ha, unfortunately I am not knowledgeable enough to give suggestions however just wanted to give a heads up that I very much enjoyed it! Whatever you do with it, can't be wrong. Cheers!

Awesome sequencing and arpeggiation. I can see a sort of mixed syncopated beat working with this. curious to hear the end results.

This is some fabulous synth harmonization! I can definitely see a slightly hard analog bass coming in at some point with very minimal drums. This has a nice build up! May I ask what tempo this is? Good one!

Firstly, this is an awesome intro...in my opinion it could be a chill out or maybe a find funky pop song, too...get a good drum groovy, maybe some guitars and IF YOU FIND A GOOD PELLA, WOULD BE THE TOP OF THE MOUNTAIN... :-)

Best, Danke

cool,I can imagine hiphop style beat using electro sounds look forward to hearing the finished piece.