Oriental Opression - XmafaX

9th Oct 2013 20:56 - 12 years ago
Description : Another track from XmafaX.
Please leave your comment and I hope you enjoy it
Vocals needed.
Thanks
Paulo

Comments (6)

If you have time take a listen and give XmafaX some feedback.

deciBel
deciBel 18th Oct 2013 01:56 - 12 years ago
Well , Paulo it's a great work U've done .
I liked everything in this . speciallY drum line was
very good in this one .as Kevin have told in first commenT various changes about drum makes listener don't feel tired & this give a varietY to track .also Domenico has been a heavy metal serious player in a Band (if U may know ) & I'm agree abouT more distotion for lead guitar ,also some kind of delaY can make it more groovY.
also I personalY think U can increase tempo .
I guess your Power chord progressio would sound more agressive & impressive if U increase tempo .
best wishes in the end for U my dear friend.
__Behnam
XmafaX
XmafaX replied 18th Oct 2013 - 12 years ago
Hi my friend, I am glad that you liked.
And thanks for your sugestion. YOur comments are very important to improve the tracks
your friend
Paulo
SikStyle1
SikStyle1 17th Oct 2013 15:27 - 12 years ago
a great metal track so fast and awesome
XmafaX
XmafaX replied 18th Oct 2013 - 12 years ago
Hi, thanks for your nice comment
Paulo
captainjim
captainjim 16th Oct 2013 22:02 - 12 years ago
hey great! ;)
XmafaX
XmafaX replied 18th Oct 2013 - 12 years ago
Hi, Thanks for comment!
Paulo
mrwolf14
mrwolf14 11th Oct 2013 16:15 - 12 years ago
Hi Paulo, we have tons of good ideas here!
First, I basically agree with the other two comments: given the "speed" of the song, maybe having a more distorted guitar would be better.
I like the initial riff: it makes you shake your head... good!
Maybe here you could work on getting a "tighter" sound (not sure how though, maybe increasing a bit the volume of the bass, which could give some definition to the sound... just wild guesses).
The solo is good: good sound and interesting melodies.
Well done!
Looking forward to seenig this song with a vocal part!
Ciao, Domenico
XmafaX
XmafaX replied 12th Oct 2013 - 12 years ago
Hi Domenico, many thanks for your comment and sugestions.
I am waiting for some vocals colabaration :)
Best regards
Paulo
Burtsbluesboxes
Burtsbluesboxes 10th Oct 2013 20:50 - 12 years ago
Yeah a little more distorted guitar, otherwise Great!! :D Maybe a second more heavily distorted guitar behind the existing one be good :D
XmafaX
XmafaX replied 11th Oct 2013 - 12 years ago
HI.
Tahnks for your sugestions
Regards
Paulo
evilarmy83
evilarmy83 10th Oct 2013 16:31 - 12 years ago
The drums had alot of change up which keeps it interesting. My only suggestion would be to get more crunchy overdrive on that guitar dude! Well done though!!!!
XmafaX
XmafaX replied 11th Oct 2013 - 12 years ago
Hi thansk for your nice comment and sugestion.
Paulo

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