Pieces Ft Devyn Rose REMIX - SeriouslyJoking

Now this is different...and in a very good way...I can hear the tought that you put into the composition SJ...that widening on the kick is a bit unusual but really effective in this track...really nice job of the way you have the vocals and music interacting and the way the sounds are placed around the vocal...I`m listening with reasonable good earphones and the mix sounds fine to me ...SJ never stop doing the kind of music that appeals to YOU...and dont give a dm about what genre it seems to fit...The music innovators who have influence the world of music didn`t accomplish anything by trying to sound like everybody else...I love your musical imagination....keep on doing it...and a big well done to you on this one...Ed

Sublime work on this, really loved it. But the fun really starts when the piano kicks in

HI! Man, you are developing like crazy! :) I really, really like the first 'chorus' and comes back at 1:40 I believe. That's just awesome. The changeups I'm not so sure about. After the chorus i think you still need some glue. I mean extra chords to make it less of shock if u know what I mean. No problem to go to another key. But maybe a 'pivot' chord will do the trick. I'm not pro in arranging, but I use some basic schemes to help me write. I decide which rootkey a track is gonna be and write around that.

http://www.musictheory.net/lessons/57

this scheme was really helpful to me, wish someone gave it to me earlier. :) Then when you decide another key is going to be the root note in a break for instance, (I) I think chord II and IV of your first choice key are used mostly to pivot it.

If you have an Smartphone I use an app called 'suggester'. Search chord progression in the app store. In this you can choose certain keys and build reaaally easy some chord progressions. Hope I've helped a bit! Maybe you can find some extra chords here!

All this is just a help, you're absolutely not bounded to such theory. Cheers!

Hi it's me again. Your English is fine. Yes it's very hard to master with a Daw. what I recommend is mix down to wave or aiff file an good but kind of neutral mix. than purchase a mastering program to pump up the mix.
If you go to :
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you can get IZotope Ozone Advanced 5.0 or other mastering tools . It's only $15 so it's an amazing deal
Kate Bush http://www.katebush.com/home
Keep it up it's a great song in need of a little dressing up. Keep me posted

Nice job on this, the music really compliments the vocals very well. Good job on this and keep up the good work.

Kyle

I was just wondering about modest tweeks. One thought is less reverb on the vocal and maybe a little too much limiting on the overall master???????????. What did you use to master it?

first 15 second i was like "another boring track" but then,.....

great work, vocal is awesome :)

Tremendous work you made incorporating these vocals so well into a very uncommon and interesting instrumental !
I like it a lot, it's so unusual !
Bravooo !
xo

Hello ....

"my own ears feel very unreliable" ?

Honestly I do not think, because, what you have produced here is very original: Instrumentation, Rhythmic, integration of voice ..... and effects.
In summary, it's unexpected, pleasant to listen to, a good concept.

Your ears are still good ....

Dan

Reminds me of the chord changes of the ATB tune Your not alone. very eclectic work from you! And I see your developing your FL piano style. 2:58 is not out of tune per say but just in the wrong key. Has potential though!
Steve

Oh Yeh Kate Bush anyone???????

WOW I just LOVED THIS SONG. Some tweeking in the mastering???