Description : (Prod. O.Zed)This is old news now, will be uploaded re-mixed and recorded at a later date. Positivity and feedback is always appreciated. Peace..

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  1. inklewinkle2
    inklewinkle2 on Fri 28th Feb 2014 - 6 years ago

    Good Flow on this one!

    Reply by Heklah

    Cheers man, I'd say this track marks my development as an MC and writer. Peace..

  2. Orlando51
    Orlando51 on Fri 28th Feb 2014 - 6 years ago

    Good musical idea underpinned with inventive vocal combinations! Congrats!:)


    Reply by Heklah

    Cheers man, your positive comments mean a lot. Peace..

  3. mrwolf14
    mrwolf14 on Thu 27th Feb 2014 - 6 years ago

    Nice flow.
    You deliver a really good vocal part here. Respect.
    The only part which is not 100% convincing me is the 2-nd voice in the beginning, the yo-yo-yo-no should be less "clean" IMHO: it sounds too similar to the main voice, I would prefer to have it with a totally different tone (some filtering, maybe some phaser or flanger, not sure)
    Very good track: thanks for sharing it with us.
    Ciao, Domenico

    Reply by Heklah

    Yo! Really appreciate the comment man. I agree 110% with you; as far as the mixing and stacking goes with this, it was a very amateur attempt (I've been set for a while on re-doing it at some point) After spending time practicing on other projects, coming back to this is like ehh.. haha

    Thanks for the positivity, hope to see your feedback on future uploads. Peace..

  4. PatternsofPerfection
    PatternsofPerfection on Fri 17th Jan 2014 - 6 years ago

    Good work man. Very insightful. I could definitely hear this track being longer, but it sounds good anyway. -Peace

    Reply by Heklah

    Appreciate the positivity man. Got to keep it short, as to leave you wanting more from me. *haha* Still, I respect your feedback, and I hope to see more on future uploads. Peace..

  5. JamesDavies
    JamesDavies on Sat 26th Oct 2013 - 6 years ago

    interesting bars & flow and i like the english accent ya gave to it ! much respect ^^

    Reply by Heklah

    Respect to you too man, I appreciate the positive comment. Peace bro..

  6. OdotZED
    OdotZED on Wed 7th Aug 2013 - 7 years ago

    Nice job man,never heard this beat wiv vocals so nice someone used it.

    Reply by Heklah

    Cheers man, was a mad beat. Would definitely like to use some of your others, I need to improve with some shit but I enjoyed writing and spitting on this.

  7. crucethus
    crucethus on Tue 6th Aug 2013 - 7 years ago

    Apologies for misunderstanding the lyrics. And yes I listened thoroughly!(ahh) I appreciate your wise and thoughtful approach to my misnomer and hold a deep respect for your calm and mature response. I grew up in NY on Long Island. But I now live in Canada, Montreal to be exact. I am as Lilly white as they come(Irish, German), but I have to say I am so impressed with how it is here in Quebec , Race is just not an issue. And it's awesome. The only disparity is do you speak French or English. You live here and you see the silly differences people have are just plain stupid. To me Religion, especially southern baptist evangelical just perpetuates racism in America. After reconstruction in the south, poor illiterate white people were still looking to belong to something that made them feel superior. They chose Evangelical Christian baptists. They provided the social engine and the delusion that they were better than everyone else. This is still perpetrated by the silly ideas of
    Racism, Homophobia,Misogyny and downright rejection of scientific proof of evolution. Other Religions as well follow a similar delusional path, and occasionally I call them out on it. In this case I was wrong, so I apologize. Let the good music flow!

  8. crucethus
    crucethus on Tue 6th Aug 2013 - 7 years ago

    Yeah you did a nice job, musically, and lyrically (consonants on the beats), but metaphorically I am an Atheist and all of this would not even register on my radar as intellectually sound, so you get 2 out of 3. ;-) (psst, we were not created!)

    Reply by Heklah

    Yo, hows it going? I'm so glad you're questioning the content (means you listened), but which bar are you referring to? I think you may have misunderstood it, I never say we were created. "Created to build the social condition", if its this bar, the meaning is surrounding the term social conditioning, i.e making people believe their skin colour is relevant to their ability to do certain things, or be whatever they want. I hope this clears it up, if you have any other comments on my lyrical content please ask away, that's what this music is all about. Peace...

  9. GoldenOokami
    GoldenOokami on Mon 5th Aug 2013 - 7 years ago

    This soundtrack made me chuckle. I was bobbing my head the whole time, listening to the words. It all flowed together and the lyrics are pretty chill as well. Nice work.


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(Yo) Grab a pen and paper,
(Yo) Make the rhyme get paper,
(Yo) Write in a small caper,
(No) Do a tune bring good vibes to the youth,

(Yo) Only raw can keep true,
(Yo) You must keep cool stay blue,
(Yo) Leave when the fool walks in the room,
(No) Stand for the metaphysical food,

(Yo) We can be sure whats real,
(Yo) The news should keep us thrilled,
(Yo) The truth must always stay sealed,
(No) The medias yield will keep us tilled,

(Yo) Set to be sown more lies,
(Yo) Who cares if one of them dies,
(Yo) Keep shy fall into line,
(No) I will stay strong opposed to the racial divide,

Cut a knife through the tension,
Go up batter Robinson,
Islamophobic speeches intervention,
Show up the invention,

Created to build the social condition,
Implementing the Babylonion vision,
Ever making that small incision,
Into your mind to maintain this division,

You spend to long eyeballing the TV,
Stuck to that box like an NG,
But we don't need a tube of Sky or BBC,
To feed you or feed me,

So don't be dumb grab a book read some,
Learn some facts about Malcolm,
X-ray history follow the trail of crumbs,
Get off the game but keep using your thumbs,

But know when I say read,
I don't mean a Closer magazine,
Or a 50 shades of grey trilogy,
Instant-ly ignorant-ly using your eyes insufficent-ly,

Easily lead by the man with a staff,
Hooked at the end told when to laugh,
Just as a young calf,
Grown with one purpose simply fill up the graph,

With the creation of math,
You can work with the years of the past,
To tell me how long ago,
2000 BCE was from now,

So say how far have we gone,
From the times of Sargon,
I'd say ours were the years that dawned,
This dystopian setting to abscond,



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