Listen To Do Better Electro Song By Auralincarnation | Looperman

30th Jul 2013 06:19 - 12 years ago
Description : One of my latest tracks and i feel like i finally got the mix right. this is more testing the mp3 conversion and online playback for quality then anything but would love feedback

Comments (5)

If you have time take a listen and give auralincarnation some feedback.

Mosestone
Mosestone 1st Aug 2013 07:00 - 12 years ago
"Yeah, loved it - funky stuff, man" :)

Music Video Movie Score ,, Really that good. Folk/Rock Vocal, Electronic & classical ellements.. very creative and You have a real passion for your music .. I feel it :) I like how you keep it very interesting by flowing the layers about on the panning table and keeping to the vibe and feel of the vocalist. a fav for sure :)
StaticNomad
StaticNomad 31st Jul 2013 17:14 - 12 years ago
"static, where have you been all my music creating career? this is exactly what I was looking for as far as feedback!" Yes, know what you mean. Comments such as the one I left are the kinds of things I look for rather than just "Yeah, loved it - funky stuff, man"

This is because I am always looking to improve and do so all the time. I'm also quite often in denial about little bits of tracks that don't work and so sometimes need to have them pointed out to me. I think that sort of thing is really what sites such as Looperman should be all about rather than just telling people that their stuff is great. I also like to hear evaluation of what I do because, while I think it's good, I'm obviously just a little biased and cannot have the objectivity that I would like to have. I also don't play in a band and have almost no regular music friends so it's a very isolated musical existence that I have.

Yes, it's the arp patch that I would change. Just spend a while choosing a different patch as I know it can be better. Great programming and notes and groove will still probably sound not great on a crap patch.

Yes, know what you mean about fudging the flow. Again, it doesn't have to have a more repeitive vocal hook - I just think it would make it more accessible with it but it's a different mood without. Yes, glad you agree about the end section. I wasn't afraid to be bold in saying that it has to go because I thought you might agree. It so obviously stands out as being unnecessary but can see why you would leave it in for mixing in to next track live.

Sure, PM me if you want though I'm not sure how to see PMs (will check now). Yes, check out my stuff though I have much higher quality tracks on other sites that allow hosting of longer stuff (mine are typically between 12 and 18 mins though I do have shorter ones on here. Many of the tracks I have on this site are out of date and have been surpassed by better versions. So, the ones I would recommend listening to are: Lord Of Misrule, Circular Motion, Way Beyond Wrong, Knee Deep In The Cosmic Overwhelm, Tribal Warfare and Untitled Ethereal Daisy Jazz Funk though the others are also pretty decent. Glad that you appreciated my words.
Danke
Danke 30th Jul 2013 09:03 - 12 years ago
Hi!!!

I love your song, gotta special mood. Superb vocs, would you please tell me who is the owner of this singing?

Respect, Danke
auralincarnation
auralincarnation replied 30th Jul 2013 - 12 years ago
hey Danke!

Thanks... All parts of the track including the vox is all me!
evilarmy83
evilarmy83 30th Jul 2013 08:25 - 12 years ago
Sounds good, the voice and the directions it gos when harmonizing with the music reminds me of Mike Patton.
auralincarnation
auralincarnation replied 30th Jul 2013 - 12 years ago
rock thanks
StaticNomad
StaticNomad 30th Jul 2013 07:42 - 12 years ago
I like what the intro arpeggiator is playing but I don't like your choice of synth sound. Excuse the pun, but I think you can do better. Just spend a while choosing a different synth patch. It can be a really boring thing to do but I think you need to. I was really surprised on 1 min when the main song came in. Track really took off. I think vocally it's a decent song, actually, and pretty well sung. Some effective FX on those vocals from time to time (especially the call and response delay bits) I can imagine this being quite a popular song. Would probably be more popular if it had a more distinctive vocal hook that repeated, though the lack of it is not necessarily a criticism. The main thing I really do not understand is that incessant bass drum ending. You've got to get rid of that as it serves no purpose. Also, I don't think that's a great bass drum sound so you either need to replace it with a better one or process the one you've got to improve it. Hope these suggestions help as I'm sure you can do better and hope you will make it happen. Let me know when you post a better version.
auralincarnation
auralincarnation replied 30th Jul 2013 - 12 years ago
static, where have you been all my music creating career? this is exactly what I was looking for as far as feedback!

thank you so much!

my questions about your comments;
which patch are you thinking needs changing?
the arp'd patch?

as far as a vocal hook, artisticially i was going for more of the unorganized sadness of the topic of the song but I'll look at it with different eyes and see if I can arrange one without fudging the flow.

Lastly your completely correct that ending section has to go, it was my mistake for I was being short sighted and only thinking of my next gig and how this track was going to be mixed in...when I should have left it alone and do that arrangement for my live set and not what I posted here.

really thsnks... I'm gonna hit you up via personal message if you dont mind...maybe i can do the same kinda thing for you?

either way.... rock on and thanks again!

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