Listen To Time-featuring Patricia Edwards RnB Song By Dansjoy4 | Looperman

19th Jul 2013 05:36 - 12 years ago
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Description : This is my first R&B tune. So please be kind. Patricia I hope I did you some justice with this tune if you get a chance to hear it. You have such a great voice! Shout out to Enzotic for the drum loop and Chitex for the synth. I also added my own special effects to the mix. Hope everyone enjoy this piece.

Comments (8)

If you have time take a listen and give dansjoy4 some feedback.

FullCapicityMuzic
FullCapicityMuzic 26th Jun 2014 03:37 - 11 years ago
What they said, hehe. And I like the mystery here.
ElectronBlue
ElectronBlue 23rd Jul 2013 15:20 - 12 years ago
Great effort. I think people have already pointed out what I wanted to say. Add some piano and a little strings and it will be great
Burtsbluesboxes
Burtsbluesboxes 19th Jul 2013 18:06 - 12 years ago
Good things come from experimentations :) Good job! A piano melody would be cool to add. you got a great base to build on. What did u bake for Darkreine? I want some too!
dansjoy4
dansjoy4 replied 19th Jul 2013 - 12 years ago
lol...Thanks bro!
mrwolf14
mrwolf14 19th Jul 2013 13:01 - 12 years ago
Not bad man!
The music fits pretty well the vocal part, and I know that the "reverse engineering" process of finding the right chords for an already existing pella is not easy at all.
Well done!
Domenico

PS: one technical note.
You have some clipping in your track, nothing too bad anyhow.
But as general recommendation, if you don't have enough time to recheck all the channels one by one, try to keep some free headroom on them, this will avoid clipping.
And you can do the same for your "master volume": you don't have necessarily to reach "0db" on your output meter.
Most tools will normalize for you while "bouncing" your mix, thus bringing the levels to a nominal 0db.
For sure not the best workflow, but it ensures that you don't have any clipping.
And sorry for the ramble...
dansjoy4
dansjoy4 replied 19th Jul 2013 - 12 years ago
Cheers Domenico! Your comments are always one the most thoughtful. Appreciate the advice as well and thank you for listening. ^____^
brillbilly
brillbilly 19th Jul 2013 12:27 - 12 years ago
lol...hey dont worry..im always kind!

Love patricia's vocals,beat n sounds work fine.!

I think the tip about maybe adding a bit of piano is ideal,as this track has room for that,or some soft strings.!

But as it is,it's still real smooth and enjoyable so nice work!
dansjoy4
dansjoy4 replied 19th Jul 2013 - 12 years ago
Thanks brill billy. Always a pleasure reading your comments. Much thanks for the compliment. =B-)
Darkreine
Darkreine 19th Jul 2013 12:20 - 12 years ago
Sorry, the baking was fine and very tasty, I meant the backing lol!! for fit, see fir!! Emphasizing!! I should aslo get a spell checker!!
dansjoy4
dansjoy4 replied 19th Jul 2013 - 12 years ago
LOL...Thanks bro. I knew what you meant. Appreciate the suggestions and taking time to listen. I'll be doing another version of this soon! Cheers!
Darkreine
Darkreine 19th Jul 2013 12:18 - 12 years ago
It's a good start, but needs a little work to make it great. I found the baking a little repetitive. You need to pad it out with more instruments. Timing and composition fir really well. Keep doin it and don't stop believing in yourself!!
SeriouslyJoking
SeriouslyJoking 19th Jul 2013 12:03 - 12 years ago
It's a match! Definitely working with that haunting synth and the rhythm but from 1:20 I'm thinking it could fit in with some more texture - maybe a piano coming in and emphasing the melody or something?
dansjoy4
dansjoy4 replied 19th Jul 2013 - 12 years ago
Thanks SJ! Hmmmmm.....didn't think about adding a piano in this piece. You might be on to something. I'll see if I can come up with a nice piano progression in a remix. Cheers! =B-)

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