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The bass shouldn't be panned left. Disorienting. There's not alot of clarity in the guitars either. The drums, while off in parts, were very good. Nice double bass. Not to complain, but I feel you put your stuff on here for constructive criticism, just like me. Keep it up!

away from the fact that that ain't really my kinda music, I was a tad... confused.
The Bass seems to only play from the left side, while the distorted guitare sits in the middle... to get a better sound you could try panning the guitare hard left and hard right (to seperate them you could add a slight non-feedback delay set to 100% wet and around 10 to 30 ms to one of the channels, instant seperation... or you could record the guitare a second time (possibly changing the effects slightly) and then pan the first hard left/right and the second record hard right/left, aka, double-track...)
The Bass on the other hand: put it directly in the middle... especially the sub just needs to be there, you could pan the things above say 200 Hz a tad, but everything below should really stay in the middle. you would get a better sound instantly oO also, since the vocals seem to be center panned, this should give them a tad more space as well

the track itself sounds good thought, just not really my kinda music, as said.

also: I just try to be helpfull, not dissing you or something. xX

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