Tags : | Rock | 5.99 MB | Has Lyrics

Description : The genre is new wave/post punk I think...This is a collab with Behnam Zandi who played the bass and guitar parts...I did all vocals using an English translation of an old poem by Nikola Vaptsarov.Let me know what u think...

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  1. mrwolf14
    mrwolf14 on Tue 26th Nov 2013 - 5 years ago

    Wow... I have no words.
    This qualifies as the most beautiful song I have heard in a while (and not only on looperman).
    It really touched me: the poem is intelligent and sad. Very sad. I could almost hear that front gate banging. And its sound didn't leave any place for hope.
    As Stefano pointed out, the sung counterparts add another dimension to the song. Beautiful.
    The light bass builds a kind of "ostinato". Simple and beautiful.
    The guitar from Behnam is like a fly trying to escape away. Again: beautiful.
    Thanks for this wonderful song.
    And thanks for letting me know the verses of this beautiful poem (unfortunately I will not be able to read it in the original version, but the translation is very touching).
    Respect.
    Ciao, Domenico

  2. Samina
    Samina on Mon 12th Aug 2013 - 6 years ago

    Dear DJshemszee

    This is a nice musical representation of fear, fury, and remorse, ..... eternal remorse

    Thanks for sharing your collaboration.
    Bests, Mina

  3. janis71
    janis71 on Sat 27th Jul 2013 - 6 years ago

    Very interesting and original . It has a weird feel that I like a lot .
    ;)

  4. SeaDog
    SeaDog on Thu 4th Jul 2013 - 6 years ago

    A very refined arrangement and playing.

    I liked the sung countervocals on the spoken words: a very smart idea!

    Cheers,
    Stefano

    DJShemZee
    Reply by DJShemZee

    thank u stefano

  5. Sherris
    Sherris on Thu 4th Jul 2013 - 6 years ago

    Wow ! yyyyuuuuuuuup! I liked it alot ! specially when guitar western funk line begun was wonderfully nice !thank you very much for sharing.

    DJShemZee
    Reply by DJShemZee

    Thank you very much for listening and commenting:)

  6. MStokes
    MStokes on Wed 3rd Jul 2013 - 6 years ago

    torn sheets, silk knots - is this an escape or is it a garrote?
    i think both - a wonderful collab. all respect

    DJShemZee
    Reply by DJShemZee

    thanks for the cool review:)

  7. evilarmy83
    evilarmy83 on Wed 3rd Jul 2013 - 6 years ago

    This track is the perfect example of how powerful music can be without the use of speed and volume. I'm sayin', the track is awesome!!!

    DJShemZee
    Reply by DJShemZee

    Thank you for your review.

  8. topvega
    topvega on Wed 3rd Jul 2013 - 6 years ago

    I like it bro, it has a stripped down apocalyptic feel to it. Cool vibe going and things are well mixed. I would like to hear your vocals processed a little more and boosted in the mix a bit. I think from 2:30 to 2:50+ could use a change or some new texture added but Overall a nice track. I dig it.

    tv

    DJShemZee
    Reply by DJShemZee

    Thank you for listening and reviewing.

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Now the quiet full of fear
lowers in our little shack.
Over is the fight, my dear,
but you don't come back.

And I wept, and did implore;
why would you not hear?
So you went. Within our door
close it grew and drear.

All I heard was the alarm
of my heart that beat in pain,
and softly I put out my arm
hoping to find you there again.

I am jealous, Fernandez,
there's a word I hate -
"freedom", - for it did obsess
all your thoughts of late.

Maybe you are right, who knows?
Maybe you are right, my dear,
but the pain still tears and gnaws
and I fear, I fear

that dreadful emptiness that hangs
in our room and seems to grow.
There, I hear, the front-gate bangs. -
But you won't come back, I know.

 


 

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