sometimes that happens, You just can't get finish with the song so you start another one. I'll be in tune for the full track.

i like this track.

i guess the track is cool, but it can still become supercool. its befitting to say its a dance track, but when the beat comes in its like hiphop beat.if you give it that dance feel it should raise some eyebrows.keep going SJ

the problem with the drums is that they aren't very well fitted in the mix, they should come a bit more forward instead of being to the left. they are very far away, especially when the dry female vox kicks in
keep them in the centre, and maybe add a more defined snare and percussion
other than that - it's a masterpiece! love the vox, the chilled atmosphere

hope this helps

HI! Please!

i'm liking the combination of vocals and piano's going on here. It's very chilled. I can't help thinking that this would translate really well into a banging trance tune.
It was a pleasure to listen to.
FR

I really like the piano, is it yours or a loop from here? :)

Hey RockMom :)
Im impressed by the use of vocal samples - youve mixed them perfectly. Brilliant intro (Im on my 4th replay as I write this) Keep it up - Bravo !

Cheers
/Peter

wonderful.. and mixed very well..

Good Job, well put together.

wow,dear colleague ''SJ'' , due to some issues about connection ,just today I've seen your reply to my frist comment. my appologize if I'm alittle careless about description below trax in looperman and have made such mistakes about singer and... about your track .best wishes & regards again.___Behnam

needless to say what ... just awesome .. keep going

great vocal work! the way it comes together i believe compliments the very essence of the song in its entirety. great job

First obvious thing is yur good mix .combination of varous layers of sound takes much skills in counterpoint rules and carefull attention while composing.besides I want to admire you,for it's the first time that I've seen some female vocal has used any of male vocal acapella in her track (specially I should admire your choice,Cause that experienced man sings really lovely & welldone).about drum line I liked every thing(also that considered stop between measures) just think you could boost drum line volume about 1decibel.if I want to be honest I should tell you it's an innovative drum beats which I really adore it in various moments & parts. also your usage from various intervals in vocal melody attuned in this one is more professional than your other tracks which I've heard in looperman. and a remarkable point which seems is one of your strong point in your music(beside your Impressive voice) in considered lyrics,& set words which makes a perfect package & is remarkable. totally I should say I really enjoyed,& I prefered this one to the otherone which I'd commented on(from your tracks) last time,althought no doubt both show your worthwhile abilities & tallent & skils .totally I should say you're admirable for being a perfect package about your various tallents in music. regards & best wishes.___Behnam

Hey Serious:

I have to slightly disagree with my esteemed colleague on about the drums. I actually like them. I think I would add more percussion building throughout the song to make it's mark. Overall what an amazing improvement in loop control and sounds, and you still get to include your signature echo-verb sound on the vocal, which gives the mix a Jamaican dub feel. (check out, Sly & Robbie, and Osbourne "King Tubby" Ruddock, Lee "Scratch" Perry, Errol Thompson ) and you will see that you are emulating some of there style. Great Job , keep looping your getting better by the day! :-)