Crave - LightAs1Feather

This is a really nice track, full of warmth and love. Yes the vocals are off in places, but that can be fixed. You need to run through it a couple of times, before you record the vocals. Then get one track down. If you don't like it, but the timing is good, keep it, mute it and record it again.

Sheeeet that almost sounded like I know what I'm talking about!!

Really great piece of work, thanx for sharing.

holy cow, benham is a scientist - dam i respect that! this poor listener is just left watching spoons bend and flowers springing from the ice - now that's not a good technical review but i remain your second candle

well, It's Second track which I've listened to from you .
your Improvement is undeniable , & I'm listening to your more dominance while singing .your sound is more impressive in this track & such Notation & chords ,& I guess some reverb could smooth & add a gloss on your voice which seems forgotten & your voice has not enough reverb .
your improvement rate is admirable ,I mean if you enumerate your mistake rate in this one ,you'll see false moments have decreased to 1.4 than your first track rate ,& obviously more solfeggio trainings will solve such thnigs as soon as you can't believe . & else in the end I wanna tell you I enjoyed your text & your harmonized notes for singing your words in accompaniment of music notes & beats & your proper & good selected notes to harmonized vocal melody & Instrumental chordation were one of the most important reasons which made me to listen your track from first till ending . & think you should appreciate such a melodist mind in yourself brain & pay attention your tallents & skills balance . just may I know if you (yourself) write this lyrics or not ? by the way may I know How do you practice to sing ?have you ever test any machine vocal to sing your harmonized melody instead of your sound before singing & record it ?
+appologize for such long commenting,regards & best wishes.
_Behnam