OverNight - BordumBeats

you can hear your hip hop influences in here for sure.... I would say that the track needed to go else where to remain interesting... maybe a vocal snippet or something in order to mix it up..

the drum sound needs thickening abit maybe layering one shots of both your kick and snare to get a fuller rounded sound.... you can also thicken those sounds with EQing and sidechaining your compression of the bass..

as for the bass I would also say you need to thicken it... you might want to try putting your bass into a combinator and using a spider you can split it off into three EQ's and get your thickness by one being sub, one mid one and one top end... it does work..

some nice ideas just need some work on the post production side

keep 'em coming brother