Essential Javstar Remix - Thefly94

20th Mar 2012 03:17 - 14 years ago
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Description : A cool song that I felt the need to alter.

Comments (2)

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Barakuda
Barakuda 22nd Mar 2012 06:42 - 14 years ago
Yepp! I have agree with wongkishoo.
There was was a bit of clipping there!, as for the kick it strikes above every element but still impressed as far as the whole sequence is concerned.
Filling out space inbetween there n there with melodic synthesisers definetly would spice up the tune!
Im loving the tune!!....
But going back wouldn't be such a bad idea afterall.

Keep it up boss!!!...(kings)
Thefly94
Thefly94 replied 22nd Mar 2012 - 14 years ago
Thanks alot!

Yeah, I'll definitely be taking another look at this one.
WongKiShoo
WongKiShoo 20th Mar 2012 13:38 - 14 years ago
Whoooa that kick really hits ya on the intro lol..

My initial thoughts: I'm drawn straight to the mix and how muddy it is.. plenty of clipping going on as well.. maybe something that needs more work? It actually sounds like you have a bit crusher on the master channel in places..

You don't need to have everything *really* loud when you mix.. it just destroys the stereo image and isn't so pleasant to listen to.

As to the track it's self - some pretty cool ideas going on man, everything's in tune lol.. maybe a bit of variation on the melodies would enhance the track as well.

Just some food for thought :)

Keep Jammin' man

WongKi
Thefly94
Thefly94 replied 20th Mar 2012 - 14 years ago
Thanks for the tips.

Yeah, as far as the mixing goes, I really messed up this one. :/

I tried to find a balance between the song I was remixing and my original material, but in the end I guess I ended up making them both too loud...

I'll definately keep your words in mind when I go back to fix it.

Thanks for taking the time to critiqe my work, it really means alot. I love getting feedback from people who actually know what they're doing (in case you couldn't tell, I'm pretty new at this. This was only the second remix I've ever done.)

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