Pure Evil - Jiberish

got tha makings of a dope beat
here bro~
just add a couple more layers
on tha beat and you'll have
a hit...

Peace from LA

nice... not sure if that sub is just too much maybe if you used a filter to cut the top end off from about 150hz maybe even lower remember that sub is most meant to be felt rather than heard.

after a while the track did get a little mono tone and that piano gets a bit almost hypnotic .. so for me it needs a bit more of a change up... and maybe a cut away from the piano.

the drum track you have in there although it creative does lack power ..now... that maybe because of the sub or it may just be it needs layering up... create three or four instances of the snare using different sounds maybe even layering it with a clap or a rim shot to add texture. your kick I would do the same...layers brother..

having said all of that the track has some interesting ideas..with a bit of tweaking it could be a banger..

keep 'em coming brother