Everyone has great feedback for you. For me, at 2:20 is when it hits it's stride.
After a few listens it really grows on you.
If you've ever seen The Other Guys with Will Ferrel and Mark Walhberg, there is a scene where it's just a montage of 3D images of them partying at a bar, that is exactly how i imagine the music video for this, but instead, mix in a MASE & Puff Daddy video from 1997, and add the graphics of Tron Legacy -- that's this.
yo, yo, yo
this is willbraham about to spam your review section. it ain't up for election. democratic? asiatic, and hemertic like odb said it, let me speak...
I turn my game on like nintendo
I burn corners like enzos
I got benjis, euros, and pesos
Come with me and you'll feel so dope
Up against the leather
while we driving on the deadliest roads
but we be the deadliest foes
they can't fuck wit me
and can't fuck wit my hos
fo show
I got a show in about half an O
so pass the o and I'll pack a bowl
hold the wheel as I seal the deal
leaving the rest in the dust
in their rusted ass busted ass
but you and me girl going to last on the finest things
you need a ring on it
you can have about 15 on it
you need a new scene
you can be the producer in the editing suite
hooking me up with the phat beat and turning the bass up
like we're turning up cups after hitting multi-platinum
I turn my game on like nintendo
burning corners like enzos
I got benjis, euros, and pesos
You need a ring on it
you can have about 15 on it
lol - basically, it's a straight up hip-hop track for me. barrows heavily from rap, but ultimately is about the part pleasing the female and making to shut up and dance - hell, ain't nothing wrong with that. I'm nodding my head ahaha.
You just went HAM on this review. What you should do: Record that verse so I can hear how you would flow it! Damn bro I gotta get flowers for my page now cuz you killed it!
I think if you threw some brass...would livein it up.
it's not that it sounds a different genre...you can make anythin into hiphop.....but to some it might sound boring.or doesn't have enough fiya .even doesn't sound to hiphop'ish..just gotta remember that vocals change a track....Bone thugs n harmony.
not everythin they made was hard hittin hiphop....but that's what some expect...heavy kicks..or it's not considered hiphop
Thank you for that Brass Idea. I think if anyone wants the track and I hear vocals I will definitely add a brass part. Im gonna play with it just incase that comes to light. I get what you mean tho, the track is not crazy complex as some may need it to be, your dead on about the vocals and thank you for the bone thugs n harmony reference (this should inspire some new ideas). Feel free to comment however long you like, don't let this be the last track you review. I will be listening to your work in a moment. Stay Safe Stay Serous.
I certainly wouldn't have thought to put the piano with the synth, I found that a very original idea , complex melody form which sounds very logic though, the piano adds a jazz sort of feeling behind the more dance part making me think of a game of cards or something, maybe poker; really good track;
See you've put the voices at the end again for the ending, really like that sound.
Thank you for your review. Sometimes I just pick random instruments but I always start with the piano. Good 2 see you checked out some more tracks I uploaded. I will definitely check you out again.
Description : Hello everyone! EYEDYE back again with a rap track! I think I outdid myself on this one. I tried a more modern style of vocals, stacking them up and adding my own style and I love it. A little short for my taste, but I've just got so many projects. Solo stuff, My metal Band, and providing vocals for other loopers. (I didnt forget about you Danke!!!) So, for now, take it as is and maybe I'll return to it one day. Let me know what you think!
Since yall showed so much love, i uploaded a cleaner version.
Prod.by v3rsitile
BPM 147
Sample by Nofuk
Free NON-COMMERCIAL ONLY.
Tags:
Nav, Lil Uzi Vert, Trap, Lil Keed, Dababy, Nocap, Tm88, Polo G, Roddy Ricch, Quando Rondo, Gunna, Lil Baby, Juice Wrld, Lil Gnar, Ynw melly, Drake, Lil Tecca, Southside, G Herbo, TM88, Murda, Metro Boomin, Pierre Bourne, Playboi Carti, Tarentino, 808 Mafia, sizzle Travis Scott, voice of the heroes
Description : The rapper is BadgaNFK. One of the drum loops is cg5music. The rap is about Genghis Khan when he was a young man known only as Temüjin, living on the steps of Mongolia. These were rugged tribal peoples living as part of nature in what could be a very hostile environment. I tried to capture that in this, hence all the nature sounds.The ending is Mongolian people singing.
Description : in recognition of the King's coronation just reminding him there is another King in the UK :)))
cant publish lyrics because there's more than 3000 characters. :((
its a banger, all bars. 6 mins+ seatbelts needed.
Description : To make up for my absence, I decided to upload something you've never seen from me before. For the first time on this site, I did not make the instrumental of this track. The instrumental is a generic rap instrumental I found on youtube. I wanted to focus my energy and time solely on the rap and its lyrics. Hopefully, in doing so, the track is better off for it. Let me know what you think.
Description : Hey just produced this 100% ORIGINAL hip hop/rap beat. Haven't given it a title or cover pic (you can choose both). Would love it if any rappers spit fire over it. Free to use how ever you like, just add (Prod. Equinox) or something to that extent in the title. If you do use it, definitely send me a link. Would love to hear some of the talent within the rap community.
Description : I'm just having some fun with this Hip Hop track by Kryptic. It's FREE to use and I just loved the beat because it's a Tupac type beat. No I don't rap but I sure know how to rhyme & Keep in Time :) wanted to try something & exercise my vocals/All vocals By Me (Except For The Tag Of Course goes without saying) The lyrics I wrote lil while ago, I just made them fit the track. Not perfect just having some fun here & I had a blast! maybe too much fun!! :P
Description : Dark Piano like NAV, Lil Baby, Metro Boomin, Future///
Hit me on IG to work and send me anything u make with this mel/!
Hard Dark Melody
Dark NAV
Dark Piano Melody
Description : I heard a synth loop by Keishh (see link below) and liked it. I though I would add some piano, trap beat, and other instruments to it. What do you think?
After a few listens it really grows on you.
If you've ever seen The Other Guys with Will Ferrel and Mark Walhberg, there is a scene where it's just a montage of 3D images of them partying at a bar, that is exactly how i imagine the music video for this, but instead, mix in a MASE & Puff Daddy video from 1997, and add the graphics of Tron Legacy -- that's this.
yo, yo, yo
this is willbraham about to spam your review section. it ain't up for election. democratic? asiatic, and hemertic like odb said it, let me speak...
I turn my game on like nintendo
I burn corners like enzos
I got benjis, euros, and pesos
Come with me and you'll feel so dope
Up against the leather
while we driving on the deadliest roads
but we be the deadliest foes
they can't fuck wit me
and can't fuck wit my hos
fo show
I got a show in about half an O
so pass the o and I'll pack a bowl
hold the wheel as I seal the deal
leaving the rest in the dust
in their rusted ass busted ass
but you and me girl going to last on the finest things
you need a ring on it
you can have about 15 on it
you need a new scene
you can be the producer in the editing suite
hooking me up with the phat beat and turning the bass up
like we're turning up cups after hitting multi-platinum
I turn my game on like nintendo
burning corners like enzos
I got benjis, euros, and pesos
You need a ring on it
you can have about 15 on it
lol - basically, it's a straight up hip-hop track for me. barrows heavily from rap, but ultimately is about the part pleasing the female and making to shut up and dance - hell, ain't nothing wrong with that. I'm nodding my head ahaha.
MOAR
You just went HAM on this review. What you should do: Record that verse so I can hear how you would flow it! Damn bro I gotta get flowers for my page now cuz you killed it!
Benton McKenzie
Sound quality is clean and crisp.
VOCALS!!!
Great work keep it up.
Preciate your review. Thank you for listening. Im interested in hearing vocals over it as well. Going over to your page after this. Keep It Pure!
Benton McKenzie
it's not that it sounds a different genre...you can make anythin into hiphop.....but to some it might sound boring.or doesn't have enough fiya .even doesn't sound to hiphop'ish..just gotta remember that vocals change a track....Bone thugs n harmony.
not everythin they made was hard hittin hiphop....but that's what some expect...heavy kicks..or it's not considered hiphop
ok to much ramblin..i'm outa here
but I like it
keep on that grind homie
Thank you for that Brass Idea. I think if anyone wants the track and I hear vocals I will definitely add a brass part. Im gonna play with it just incase that comes to light. I get what you mean tho, the track is not crazy complex as some may need it to be, your dead on about the vocals and thank you for the bone thugs n harmony reference (this should inspire some new ideas). Feel free to comment however long you like, don't let this be the last track you review. I will be listening to your work in a moment. Stay Safe Stay Serous.
Benton McKenzie
See you've put the voices at the end again for the ending, really like that sound.
Thank you for your review. Sometimes I just pick random instruments but I always start with the piano. Good 2 see you checked out some more tracks I uploaded. I will definitely check you out again.
Benton McKenzie
I sounds well ballanced and full.
I would make it more 'agressive'
Thank you for listening. I would be interested in knowing what you would do to make it aggressive. In the meanwhile, Keep It Pure!
Benton McKenzie