Beginners Luck - Psykodelic

Wow. This is certently not bad for your second track ever. Well let me help you a little bit. First thing I think you need to focus on is the lay-out of your track. Now its a very busy track and the dance factor on the whole track is kinda equal. Try to build up to a climax; maybe make breaks if you prefer. Try to use filters to cut off the high passes or low passes now and then. Try to use compression on your claps/kicks/snares to make them more heavy.

In this one you used loads of samples. I should focus on a few ones. Pick the ones you like the best and play around with them. But now it sounds way to crowded. Alot of times: less is more.

At last. You make alot transitions. It's like I'm listening to 3 or for tracks in 8 minutes.

But like said. I can here your talent. And I'm sure you will develope yourself very quick. Keep it coming man! Cheers, Erik