Description : hey my 2nd track in FL studio.
not to sure about genres at the moment, just trying to get going, so just made lots of little riffs in fl studio, few sound fx samples, trying to make something melodic, and interesting.
feedback most welcome as a complete beginner.
peace
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Wow. This is certently not bad for your second track ever. Well let me help you a little bit. First thing I think you need to focus on is the lay-out of your track. Now its a very busy track and the dance factor on the whole track is kinda equal. Try to build up to a climax; maybe make breaks if you prefer. Try to use filters to cut off the high passes or low passes now and then. Try to use compression on your claps/kicks/snares to make them more heavy.
In this one you used loads of samples. I should focus on a few ones. Pick the ones you like the best and play around with them. But now it sounds way to crowded. Alot of times: less is more.
At last. You make alot transitions. It's like I'm listening to 3 or for tracks in 8 minutes.
But like said. I can here your talent. And I'm sure you will develope yourself very quick. Keep it coming man! Cheers, Erik
wow thanks for taking the time to give such a thorough review :o) and yes totally agree, track is too long, too many transitions, so gonna redo but like you say, build up more for the dance floor element, and not so long, not so many samples.
So much to learn, but so much fun!
peace
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Looking for some feed back, constructive criticisms or even just your thoughts if you liked it or not. This is just a rough cut on this current WIP, just the bones of it if you will.. If you have some cool title suggestions, would love to hear those too.
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-B
In this one you used loads of samples. I should focus on a few ones. Pick the ones you like the best and play around with them. But now it sounds way to crowded. Alot of times: less is more.
At last. You make alot transitions. It's like I'm listening to 3 or for tracks in 8 minutes.
But like said. I can here your talent. And I'm sure you will develope yourself very quick. Keep it coming man! Cheers, Erik
So much to learn, but so much fun!
peace