Tags : | House | 7.41 MB | Has Lyrics

Description : I wasn't sure what to really put this under because it changes a lot. So this song, Melancholy Life, describes my vision of life, being afraid of dying, the bad influences and etc.. In the song I show a little realization showing "Live your life" and boosting the song up a bit towards the middle. The point I'm getting across basically is a sad beginning( a bit depressing...) and sudden boost in the middle, then towards the end I present a sort of rap feel beat with the music box tune kind of describing the end and how it was a long road but there's still a bright future. So as you can see a lot went through my mind with inspiration for this beat. Enjoy !

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  1. Soligen
    Soligen on Tue 14th Jun 2011 - 11 years ago

    You seem to really like the musical box sound, I like this song, I did feel the guitar did come in a little abrupt.
    I think we should have a chat about collaborating, I'll produce for you one song and you sing on it? i think I have a couple of things that would work well with your voice!
    Let me know if you feel the idea!

    MeganONeill
    Reply by MeganONeill

    Thank you and yes I do like the musical box sound a lottt. i'll probably fix the abruptness and post the track re-done. thanks for the critique, and that would be lovely to do a colab with you. Match me up with a beat and you can send it to me through "sendspace.com" to email: and I will see what I can do ! thanks !

  2. chrisgreece
    chrisgreece on Tue 14th Jun 2011 - 11 years ago

    Nice try cutie ! Cool melodies ! Keep it up! :)

    MeganONeill
    Reply by MeganONeill

    haha thank you

  3. Skhul
    Skhul on Tue 14th Jun 2011 - 11 years ago

    Very well done. Singing fits in well with the kinda dark atmosphere of it and i liked the music box tune thing. However, the piano comes in at a kinda wierd time so i would probs say line it up a little bit more. Probs just cut a second or 2 off. Then reverse a crash and put reverb on it to make it come in a little less bluntly. 1 more bit of ranting and ill finish, the hip hop kinda bit at the end could be a seperate song to be honest, doesnt fit too well in with the middle bit. Either way both parts sound very good. Nice one.

    MeganONeill
    Reply by MeganONeill

    thank you for your critique ! appreciate it !

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