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Tags : | Hip Hop | 1.45 MB | Has Lyrics

Description : Hey Alcraine here. This little number is a Dr.Dre inspiried beat enjoy.

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  1. DonnieVyros
    DonnieVyros on Tue 21st Jun 2011 - 12 years ago

    Art's such a funny thing. The critique/review process is almost as complicated as its creation. Don't say enough and the art doesn't improve, say too much and things get lost in translation (info overload), be too light with ones words and they are oft blown off or overlooked, be too hard with the words and they can be taken the wrong way (out of context & offensive). And perhaps the most frustrating part of it all is that its all opinion (and are as varied as the cloths we wear, food we eat). I've grown to take it all in stride these days, taking in the bad with the good. I also don't let myself fall into arguments as its a simple matter of considering the source (either the item-in-review or the reviewer).
    Sorry for the rant/ramble there, let's talk about the track.
    As I see it, this def has potential. On its own it does sort of miss the mark (because of its brevity). For that I'd suggest stretching it out by about 3x its current length. Won't talk about the mix-down process as I've discussed it enough already IMO. Work on both of those things (and maybe consider adding a vocalist, though I dunno, I kinda like this instrumental as is) and you'll be golden. Keep bangin on mate. Lates!

    Alcraine
    Reply by Alcraine

    Thanks for the review. I love rants lol good info. Btw the track you went over after this thats the remake of this

  2. LuckyFlaush
    LuckyFlaush on Sat 28th May 2011 - 12 years ago

    This is how I get a real review from people. Thank you for being onest with me, I know I was a little annoying and I am realy sorry for that. Also I know it is not right to judge people when you're not that good, which fits me. I am not good, so I don't have that right. Sorry again for being an a$$hole...

    Alcraine
    Reply by Alcraine

    Wait this was a game? Mind blowing. I'm not mad to be honest. I even took something from this. At least give me a real review on my "This is how I do " instrumental that resulted from this.

    Keep Hustling

    Valdo (Alcraine)

  3. JohnBoutilier
    JohnBoutilier on Sat 28th May 2011 - 12 years ago

    Sounds more like a cinematic track to me, but then I'm not hearing the other elements you hear. I like the track.

    Keep them coming

    John

    Alcraine
    Reply by Alcraine

    Defiantly agree it sounds very cinematic. That's the style on Dr.Dre style beats. Thanks for the review. I will check you out. Hey i remember you :)

  4. LuckyFlaush
    LuckyFlaush on Fri 27th May 2011 - 12 years ago

    I always apreciate the composition. You dont have a composition. I dont look for the technical skills (mastering etc). this sounds like is your last track, like your music is dying... Man, I saw your comment on my track, at least I have composition, you dont have NADA. really, reviews are to be reviews. I don't like this one and I 'll try to never listen your music again. this is not hate, i am just a music maniac and when I see monstruosity, I feel bad, really bad.

    Alcraine
    Reply by Alcraine

    Geez not you again ... Thx for putting the time to review this track... This is like a 10 minutes lately you've just been reviewing raw tracks.... Tracks that I made to be thrown away... Theirs unfinished..... You've seen one when it was featured or on the main track list.... Then you look at this one the top.... I know .... I know ... It's my fault that I upload really unfinished tracks.... To see if people get the vibe of it .... ( I'l never do that again.... What exactly you mean by composition?? You mean intro chorus verse bride outro etc.... Or do you mean Music theory like on the start of this track it was a c minor with the 5th on the start insted .,. Then it's a g minor... Going into a F major.... You don't look for technical skills ? I feel real bad for you... The snare hits on the 2 and 3rd point of the bar. Idk maybe we have doffrent taste in music.. No composition? Way to generalize . Your compositions seemed a little cramped. You can stop loops at certain times in Flutenbass...Serpentine.. The repeat melody really bored me aplomb with your drum track the only part I thought seemed cool was in 1:46... I thought tha Just a beat was pretty cool.. For me you ruined it adding the brass. I mean it sounded cool but it's not really fitting ..Vsti song noise maker... It was all over but it was a good mash up over a.. This is my fav track. Only cuz I see you as an electronic producer... That's all... Your really not that much better than mine. Your just lashing out on something unrelated to me that is all..

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