Candy Girl - Squeak

13th Apr 2011 06:58 - 15 years ago
Description : this is a rough copy of a song ive started putting together but would love some feed back for. the vocals are a lil scratchy but you can hear it. i still have no chorus yet but as i said its aa work in progeress, let me know what you think

Comments (6)

If you have time take a listen and give squeak some feedback.

KIRL
KIRL 10th Jan 2012 00:04 - 14 years ago
tight track work on your delivery all in all not bad at all
GEOram
GEOram 17th Aug 2011 19:56 - 15 years ago
Delivery and content of lyrics are well chosen..never strayed of topic which is something most tend to do..I would really like to hear this after you recorded it on a studio mic, add some subtle effect a hook and it should be good to go....real nice track
squeak
squeak replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
hey thanks for the feed back. i have just recently re recorded it using better equipment. and uploaded it. check it out. also i have Zenia working on the hook so i will hopefully have a full track soon.
Zenia
Zenia 14th Aug 2011 23:22 - 15 years ago
The instrumental is amazing!!!! Seriously, amazing. And you are great at rapping, and I can hear that touch of 50 cent skills. Definitely you have the skill and the voice, but I think you should edit your voice a bit so it doesn't sound like you're in a bathtub, because the instrumental is so deep. I'm sure this could be done really easily!! I'd love to collab sometime, this could use a nice vocal chorus of some singing, seriously... your instrumentals are fab. You're awesome. haha. :D Keep them coming!!!!
squeak
squeak replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
thanks for the feed back. yeah i know the vocals are a lil off. this copy was recorded using the mic built into my webcam. i cleaned it up the best i culd. i have just recently boought my recording equipment so ill upload a better recorded version soon. i have been looking for a female vocalist for this track so if your keen to jump on board id love to hear what you can come up with. ill try post a better recorded copy in the next couple days.
JamesDavies
JamesDavies 5th May 2011 20:06 - 15 years ago
Have you heard "Down On Me" by Jeremih ft. 50 Cent ... Very much like this; I know it's still in progress but it's looking good,
Me as well I rap but I wish I could rap as well as you, If you've got any tips I'd love to hear them...
squeak
squeak replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
wow being compared to 50 cent is a pretty big call thanks. the only tips i could really give you is practice. its taken me years to rap like i do now but i probably still got a long way to go to. also if you need help with writing there is a free program available called "verse perfect" its designed to help write tracks and gives you a syllable count per line but can help out with rhymes as well if you get stuck. hope this helps
CFactor
CFactor 28th Apr 2011 21:44 - 15 years ago
great instrumental on this track. i like the bass and the drums and the vocal flow is tight. keep it up. C
rollx
rollx 20th Apr 2011 19:14 - 15 years ago
I love ya your way of choosin' instruments and the emotion really shows.Nice werk..

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