Begining Of The World - NINJAHAHN

Not really my kind of stuff this ... bit like the last track I put together not my kind of stuff but my kids were into it so I thought I'd give it a go.
Had a listen and noticed that five people have downloaded it but no one has commented ... very strange.
Had a listen to your other tracks too.
It's obvious you're putting the effort in but I'm suspecting you may well be a little to experimental.
To experimental with a genre that's already faded I think.
People are expecting certain turns phrases spaces ups and downs and because you throw caution to the wind and don't do what's expected it's not grabbing anyones attention long enough.
That's my take on it anyway.
Conform you rebel or .... get experimental in your own creative original kind of stuff maybe.
I think if you want to do this kind of stuff you'll have to conform to certain restraints or completely reinvent it.