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toastedavalanche

Kent, United Kingdom
Joined : 26th May 2013 - 12 years ago
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toastedavalanche has posted 207 comments on other peoples tracks.

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toastedavalanche
toastedavalanche 26th Feb 2016 21:33 - 9 years ago

on Melancholy by denyjanuary ft mildperil by mildperil
This is really great. Your voice works well with the piano and you don't hold back on the performance. As has been mentioned, you may need to turn the vox down a tad so that the piano has a little more room in the mix. But other than that it's fantastic.

TA
mildperil
mildperil replied 27th Feb 2016 - 9 years ago
Thank you very much :)

I may have to adjust the vocal and re-upload it though, as a few people have mentioned it now.
toastedavalanche
toastedavalanche 26th Jan 2016 13:41 - 9 years ago

on Payday - KoeKaine Prod By MisterVibes by MisterVibes
I like it! It's dark and get's under your skin. Kinda reminds me of Mushroomhead's QWERTY just without the metal chorus.

Cool track,

TA
toastedavalanche
toastedavalanche 24th Jan 2016 13:47 - 9 years ago

on Abandoned Sanctuary by Orlando51
This is a lovely minimalist track. The sound evolves naturally and tells your story of the abandoned sanctuary very well. It gives the feeling of something frozen in time, mixed with memories of both joy and sadness. It's a beautiful first song of the day for me to listen to. Made me feel calm and pensive. So thank you :)

TA
Orlando51
Orlando51 replied 25th Jan 2016 - 9 years ago
Yes, "something frozen in time"...very intelligent observation and I'm glad you recognised all those mixed sentiments. So thanks alot for listening and for this
lovely feedback!:)

With much appreciation_____orlando
toastedavalanche
toastedavalanche 15th Jan 2016 20:03 - 9 years ago

on 28 Levels Above Top Secret by StaticNomad
Dude, save some genres and chord progressions for the rest of us! The complexity of this track is amazing. It never stays static and although I know you must have put a lot of effort into the changes, 9/10 it seems effortless.
Although throughout it's chaotic length, there are some parts that are weaker than others, it really is an impressive piece of work. Exhausting and brilliant. Thanks for recommending.

TA
StaticNomad
StaticNomad replied 18th Jan 2016 - 9 years ago
Greetings, Toasted A.

Thanks for giving this a go. I get what you mean about saving some genres and chord progressions for everyone else. I was in some crazy, rich vein of form making this and most stuff that I threw at it seemed to find its way in.

" It never stays static"

That's because it's a nomad working it, moving it here, there and everywhere.

"I know you must have put a lot of effort into the changes, 9/10 it seems effortless."

Yes, loads of effort in carefully trimming and automating everything but good to know it all seems to fit together and, I guess, flow smoothly.

"there are some parts that are weaker than others"

That's inevitable as it's hard to make every section a highlight. Many exist just a means of getting from one existing section to another. And then they keep getting extended as the ideas flow. But feel free to point out any particular problem sections and I'll see if I can make improvements.

"Exhausting"

Yes - there's a very welcome break at 3:24. Before that, I felt it was wave after wave of intense madness.

This track has two sister tracks (this is perhaps the best) ie same project so same tempo, many shared sounds etc. I could have made them all as one 40 min track but it's much better for them to be separate. They are:

Right Place Wrong Century

http://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/146210

Three Miles Late

http://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/150919

Take care and happy listening...
toastedavalanche
toastedavalanche 14th Jan 2016 19:13 - 9 years ago

on AZ So Sincere Beat by Buda by budalhoco
Hi budalhoco. I'm not really into rap music, but this is really well executed. Those little guitar lines are infectious and the drums are perfect. It's a joy to listen to. Great stuff.

TA
toastedavalanche
toastedavalanche 14th Jan 2016 14:15 - 9 years ago

on Chronos by 7venth12
Hi 7evnth 12.
I like the way this track builds and the samples are great. The ticking clock on the break is a really nice touch. I can really appreciate how much thought you've put into the composition. The horns are different and quite catchy as well. So it's a full package of musical goodies. It's a like from me :)

TA
7venth12
7venth12 replied 14th Jan 2016 - 9 years ago
Thank you so much for the kind words, it means a lot :D
toastedavalanche
toastedavalanche 13th Jan 2016 16:48 - 9 years ago

on 2 Souls by Minor2Go ft mildperil by mildperil
Beautiful melodies and composition. You've created a very strong and emotive track. You have a wonderful voice. It's very suited to the track.
As has been mentioned, you may need to bring down the highest frequencies when you EQ. It will cut some of the microphones fuzz. Also, fade the track to near silence when you finish a line. It will clear up any static noise in between. Oh and make more beautiful music. You are very talented.

TA
mildperil
mildperil replied 13th Jan 2016 - 9 years ago
Thank you very much :)

And as for the EQ, I'm a complete amateur, so this kind of advice is gold to me. I have actually invested in Alloy2 and am putting some time in to learn, so hopefully any future songs will be better mixed.
toastedavalanche
toastedavalanche 13th Jan 2016 13:56 - 9 years ago

on The Inoki Horror Picture Show by superultramegaok
Well it certainly isn't the Time Warp! But I really enjoyed the grittiness of this track. It makes no apologies, it just does it's things and screams "f00k y0u!!!", whilst biting the head off a drug-addled bat... Or something.

Wish I had the kind of vocals that could work for this. But I'm not a metal vocalist. I look forward to hearing more.

TA
toastedavalanche
toastedavalanche 12th Jan 2016 23:35 - 9 years ago

on The wild warrior by joecramer
This is very trippy and hypnotic. Your voice really grounds the madness. It's obviously not recorded with the best microphone, but it somehow works! I like how your tracks never sound the same, there's always something enigmatic about them. I enjoyed this very much.

TA
joecramer
joecramer replied 13th Jan 2016 - 9 years ago
Thanks TA for your friendly words.
Always nice to know that there are people around who listen to my music and like the way i do my stuff.
Sounds maybe a bit strange but i never own any good instrument or mic or recorder or computer or or or . I call myself the real low teck man but now, after 35 years of makeing music, i think i should invest just a few euros into a better mic :)

stay tuned
joe
toastedavalanche
toastedavalanche 12th Jan 2016 20:09 - 9 years ago

on Slide of Emotions by Fl4zh
I don't usually like this genre, but I think you're really onto something here. It's like someone gave Trap a Xanax and told it to chill the F00k out. And it worked and everyone was happy :p

Great stuff, keep it up.

TA
Fl4zh
Fl4zh replied 12th Jan 2016 - 9 years ago
Lol man xD..

As usual i'm thankful for your comment.
toastedavalanche
toastedavalanche 12th Jan 2016 20:06 - 9 years ago

on Rodeo by RAFZTAR
Haha! This is so much fun. I really enjoyed listening to this. Thanks for uploading :)

TA
toastedavalanche
toastedavalanche 6th Jan 2016 16:03 - 9 years ago

on Uncle Johns Boogie by ScottB55
Wow, you've really captured the genre's joyful feelings of nostalgia. I bet uncle John will be tapping away to this with a grin on his face. I know I was :)

TA
ScottB55
ScottB55 replied 6th Jan 2016 - 9 years ago
Many thanks for your complimentary words, TA. It's really appreciated.

Yeah, unk has always been polite when listening to my music and he would say, "that's nice," but he actually liked this track.

Cheers,
Scott
toastedavalanche
toastedavalanche 5th Jan 2016 22:21 - 9 years ago

on The Quickie by musiclover38
This was a fun little jam track. As the others have said, we don't get this a lot on LM. But it's much appreciated. I look forward to hearing more.

TA
musiclover38
musiclover38 replied 6th Jan 2016 - 9 years ago
Thank you for the appreciation. More will be coming :-)
toastedavalanche
toastedavalanche 5th Jan 2016 22:05 - 9 years ago

on Troubled waters by benjizo
Nice ambient, soulful hip-hop track you have here. It's the kind of song that gives you a sense of ease and well being. I enjoyed it very much.
benjizo
benjizo replied 6th Jan 2016 - 9 years ago
Thanks homie
toastedavalanche
toastedavalanche 24th Dec 2015 05:08 - 9 years ago

on SOLITAIRE X BASSONTRAP X PRO BY AESYNC by TayaliJeffrey
I'm loving the mix and sharp production. The lead melody does get a little repetitive though; It's basically "Making Christmas" from The Nightmare Before Christmas. Differentiating the motif will help this track come alive. Other than that, it's really good.

TA
TayaliJeffrey
TayaliJeffrey replied 25th Dec 2015 - 9 years ago
Much appreciate cheers to the mix as for the repetitive melody i try to not have to many things happening the idea might stray away will take your point in to consideration on another piece Listening to other trap tracks but still like my arrangement more than what u get most guyz doing out there cheers
toastedavalanche
toastedavalanche 11th Dec 2015 01:37 - 9 years ago

on Marnie Grant - Flying Away by MarnieG
Those synth strings are so beautiful. It's like silk for the soul. And you've mixed the bass wonderfully; keeping it humming away underneath the other instruments. The progression is perfect, sorrowful refrains give way to uplifting moments of hope. This really was a pleasure to listen to.

TA
MarnieG
MarnieG replied 11th Dec 2015 - 9 years ago
hello toastedavalanche,

great to receive a comment from another great composer here. well, most of the comments I get are from great composers but you share the same genre!

Thank you for your comment, I'm glad you enjoyed this.

- Marnie x
toastedavalanche
toastedavalanche 8th Dec 2015 02:54 - 9 years ago

on Walking In The Rain by MGproduct
I was marveling at how clean and expansive your sound was, then that acoustic guitar drifted in and I swooned! This is all kinds of epic. Really great stuff.

TA
MGproduct
MGproduct replied 8th Dec 2015 - 9 years ago
Im happy to hear it ...
Thx TA
toastedavalanche
toastedavalanche 8th Dec 2015 01:33 - 9 years ago

on saha navavatu by clindsay
Cool track. Very nice production. I always enjoy hearing something that is familiar, but has it's own voice (this most literally). I would like to have heard a little reverb on the vocals. Just to really blend them in with the soundscape. But that's just personal taste and some would strongly disagree. I loved listening to it either way. Thank you for sharing it.

TA
clindsay
clindsay replied 8th Dec 2015 - 9 years ago
Thanks TA - I did try it with more reverb but it got muddy. Appreciate you listening and your kind comments.
-clindsay
toastedavalanche
toastedavalanche 8th Dec 2015 00:36 - 9 years ago

on Chasm by StaticNomad
I love time-stretching guitars. It creates a haunting "shimmer" that can really make a track come alive. I love the opening melodies and the feeling of sheer joy you seem to feel when just rocking out. The psychedelic doom fusion works surprisingly well and keeps the track feeling fresh. It's gonna take afew listens to capture everything that's going on here. So I shall have to favorite it and keep coming back!

TA
StaticNomad
StaticNomad replied 8th Dec 2015 - 9 years ago
Yo.

Have you got any tracks with extremely stretched guitars in them that I could hear?

You're right about the timestretch shimmer effect. It's amazing.

It seems to work particularly well with slide guitar parts. Something to do with the fact that the slide is moving through each microtone as it moves up or down a string. And then that gets seriously elongated, producing some haunting sounds. But the vocal qualities produced here I still don't understand!

"the opening melodies"

I guess you mean the lead melodic guitar starting 0:21. I used a section of that guitar playing for timestretching (and sprinkling throughout the track) as the chords are so pleasant. Strange to put that kind of melodic chill vibe over this powerful doom-like stuff. I think it actually stops it from being doom.

I'm working on a chillout ambient funk remix/continuation of this track right now though it's not going too well.

"the feeling of sheer joy you seem to feel when just rocking out."

Very pleased to hear you feel that too as my instrument playing is mostly about joy and groove and melody. Even when hard rocking or playing metal it's very rarely aggressive but about luxuriating in powerful, psychedelic sounds and fun grooves.

"It's gonna take a few listens to capture everything that's going on here"

Always the aim with every track I make. I look to make deep stuff that offers more and more and that is unlike throwaway pop music.

Thanks again.
toastedavalanche
toastedavalanche 8th Dec 2015 00:16 - 9 years ago

on The Darkness ft SkwishFish by GoldenOokami
I think you're very right to be proud of this track. It has a wonderful magic that allows you to float somewhere between the bassline and the high piano line. I particularly enjoyed the moment at 2.45 when the bass begins to bounce around playfully. Great work.

TA
GoldenOokami
GoldenOokami replied 12th Dec 2015 - 9 years ago
Thank you! I am very happy with how this came together. The keys and bassline made this track so amazing, I believe. I'll definitely stick with this style more. Thank you again!

~GO
toastedavalanche
toastedavalanche 1st Dec 2015 14:35 - 9 years ago

on Tripcore - Royal Hardcore by Tripcore
I feel like I've taken ecstasy with a group of hyperactive fauns. That's another thing I can tick of my bucket list. Thanks :)
Tripcore
Tripcore replied 1st Dec 2015 - 9 years ago
haha thank you
toastedavalanche
toastedavalanche 16th Nov 2015 03:49 - 9 years ago

on The thrill is back by Rhodesy
I'm glad the thrill is back, I always miss it when it's away. This a very uplifting tune which struts about the place cool and confidently. I thoroughly enjoyed listening to it.

TA
Rhodesy
Rhodesy replied 16th Nov 2015 - 9 years ago
You are so right,when its not happening it drags you down.Many thanks for your comments.Good luck.
toastedavalanche
toastedavalanche 15th Nov 2015 05:24 - 9 years ago

on Awakenings by wordybum
That was incredible! Impeccable flow, sharp words and neat rhymes. I'm guessing you cut the track before the mic hit the floor.

TA
wordybum
wordybum replied 16th Nov 2015 - 9 years ago
hahahaha yeah man, definitely cut the track before the mic hit the floor. I'm so glad you were able to vibe to this one. it really was a pleasure to spit over that beat.
toastedavalanche
toastedavalanche 10th Nov 2015 18:18 - 10 years ago

on Glaciers -Ft Jodie Cannon- by skwishfish
Loving this track. Very chilled and easy to listen to. The vocals sound great and the staccato bassline that comes in after the chorus really livens the track. The spritely pads are a really nice touch, they play a lovely catchy melody.
My only criticism is the claps in the second chorus. They're not quite snappy enough to punctuate the beats as they should do. However, It's a small qualm in an otherwise brilliant track. Thanks for sharing.

TA
skwishfish
skwishfish replied 11th Nov 2015 - 10 years ago
Thanks TA! :D Definitely one of my better pieces!

You should give Ice House a shot! Only good things come from experimenting!!
toastedavalanche
toastedavalanche 10th Nov 2015 13:41 - 10 years ago

on Gritty Deeds by SubChief
Hi Subchief. I'm liking the sounds, it's got a nice chunky groove to it. I get the feeling that you've taken a lot of time and care to get the sound you wanted from the guitar and it's paid off. Now you need to work on expanding the arrangement. Maybe some higher guitar leads, like a cleaner guitar with lots of delay, would give the track a kind of Tool feel. If you wanted to be experimental you could also try playing a synth through a VST amp. That would make the track even grittier.

Best of luck in developing the track, I look forward to seeing where you take it.

TA
SubChief
SubChief replied 10th Nov 2015 - 10 years ago
TA,

Thanks for the advice, I will take it on board and see what I can come up with.
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