Evisma

Better Than You Since 82

Middle America, United States

Joined : 1st Apr 2013 - 12 years ago

Last Online : 4th Apr 2025 - 6 months ago

Evisma comments on tracks

Evisma has posted 351 comments on other peoples tracks.

Comments 326 - 350 of 351

Evisma 10th Sep 2013 02:53 - 12 years ago

on Dark Sky by Spivkurl

The Killers is what this reminded me of. It's in your vocal tone more than anything. Even if someone is not into The Killers, the resemblance gives it subliminal credibility. Your vocal timing and phrasing gets better after the two minute mark. I agree that the drums and the synthie thing don't work perfect, the synth has an extra beat or something.
Overall, like it a lot. The NIN thing got me interested in your work and I'm liking it all!

Evan

Spivkurl replied 12th Sep 2013 - 12 years ago

Thanks for listening and leaving your comments! The synth/drum timing was mostly intentional, I was trying to induce some syncopation. I deleted that NIN cover, because I thought the verse vocals were pretty weak, it was more of an inspiring experiment. Thanks for coming back for more though!

Evisma 6th Sep 2013 03:40 - 12 years ago

on Daily Press by M4ruFaQ

Came across this on Random, and that is a good description of this.

I feel you need something else going on in the background to not get incredibly repetitive.

Evisma 4th Sep 2013 04:52 - 12 years ago

on Motion by Sherris

There is a very nice "Nightwish" feel to the middle that I liked very much. It almost sounds like the low frequencies are maxing out for some of the track. Like what you have here.

Sherris replied 10th Sep 2013 - 12 years ago

yuppp?i wonder ! i don't denial about being a fan of nightwish , but i find no relevance to nightwish in this track .anyway i am happy to read you have liked this music .i really appreciate it.

Evisma 31st Aug 2013 06:23 - 12 years ago

on MisanthropY Cycles by deciBel

I truly wish this one was downloadable. The middle is a mindblower! Love the lead guitar as well.

Evan

deciBel replied 31st Aug 2013 - 12 years ago

Evan , my friend , I'm so glad to see your possitive idea abouT iT , and man , for sure it's downloadable for U & U can have iT .Evan , almosT 80% of these 23 comments before U are my friends who We have email swap & I used to send all my traX which are noT downloadable for my friends .even there are friends whom U may don't see their comment buT I'm glad to send them my trials & ask their worthwhile idea about my trials . and no doubT when someone let me sing in my moherhood language on his track , there's no track of mine which he/she can't have iT .& for sure I'll be honoured to can send any trials of mine which my unseen friends like them to them .even if U were noT this new unseen friend whom I think is almost as old as myself too , there was no track of mine which someone like to have it & he/she can't have it ( this is something like a self rule for me ).. take a look to comments & my answers in any of these links below & U'll underestand me better :
http://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/138325#comments
I mean Colleague Adiere & Noelle Comments...or in this one too:
http://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/139714#comments
or last coment i this one :
http://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/141793#comments
.......
Best wishes Evan. & thnx for your presence , attention & commenT .
______Behnam

Evisma 30th Aug 2013 21:09 - 12 years ago

on an Example of my misknowings by deciBel

You should not stress so much about the genre. Music is the universal language. I am not a fan of hip-hop, dance, trance, techno, dub-step,....and I don't really know the defining characteristics of any of them. What you have put out, every time, has been enjoyable. Your songs are "Behnam" genre, and it's becoming one of my favorites! You keep things interesting and sounds don't get tedious. Thank you.

deciBel replied 1st Sep 2013 - 12 years ago

thank U my friend for kind words in commenT . Evan ,personalY I think '' stress'' is not true world which describes abouT my
sensitivity about the genres . buT I'm reallY minded to know & learn what are these new genres in musiX . I live where in which all such musiX are called electronic music & graduallY I'm knowing what is the difference of various electronic musiX . merci Evan for attention & commenT .best wishes.__B

Evisma 30th Aug 2013 20:57 - 12 years ago

on Spivkurl 24K by Spivkurl

This almost has a Devo vibe going on, with Ramones style lyrics. Nice to hear the voice, and I agree with alientapeplayer. Take care.

Evan

Spivkurl replied 30th Aug 2013 - 12 years ago

Hmm, that's a happy comparison to Devo, and I'll take the comparison to the Ramones as a positive one. Ha ha! Thanks for your support!

Evisma 30th Aug 2013 06:46 - 12 years ago

on Leave Me BE by njwglass

Can totally hear what the idea is, and there are some nice lead lines within. The issue is the timing of the drums and the rhythm guitar track. Try moving the drum track over a 1/4 note later. Like where you are going with this.

Evisma 29th Aug 2013 04:51 - 12 years ago

on Pop Idol ft Tumbleweed by Darkreine

One of the best I've heard on here! Favorited.

Evisma 27th Aug 2013 14:17 - 12 years ago

on Faster by DeejayDo

Trance or dance, one of the two. Usually don't like this kind of thing but you kept it simple and not too flashy.

Evisma 26th Aug 2013 14:13 - 12 years ago

on VIIXIIV by Audiotism

Simple yet effective. No blasts of sound or wandering parts to make it disconnected. Like it.

Audiotism replied 1st Sep 2013 - 12 years ago

Thanks for you time, listen and comment. Im glad you think its a whole piece without loose ends.

Evisma 20th Aug 2013 06:42 - 12 years ago

on talking to a brick wall by evilarmy83

The tone at 1:52 seems out of place but the rest is solid. Would like to hear some bass doing it's own thing under it. I like the choppiness at the end.

Evisma 18th Aug 2013 04:37 - 12 years ago

on Its Like a Loop Machine by yampaja

Never would have thought to blend those two elements in a million years but you made it work nicely.

yampaja replied 18th Aug 2013 - 12 years ago

Thanks. I was trying not to bore myself.

j.a.

Evisma 16th Aug 2013 20:37 - 12 years ago

on The Only One by TheElectricNote

Sounds like the vocalist is afraid of the microphone. Vocal phrasing needs help, along with the general execution of the vocals. Music is not bad at all, needs clarity. Vocals are what broke this one. Lyrics are passable, it's the phrasing, notes and delivery that hurt this so much. I hear what you are trying to get at here, just have someone else with more experience do the vocals. Not wanting to hurt feelings, but coddling only hinders us after age 3.

Evisma 16th Aug 2013 00:29 - 12 years ago

on Guitar Heroes by Darkreine

The percussion is just a tiny bit off in parts and a little too repetitive. The funkiness is great!!

Darkreine replied 16th Aug 2013 - 12 years ago

Thanx for listening

Evisma 15th Aug 2013 20:30 - 12 years ago

on FOOLING WITH MADNESS - Bilbozo by Bilbozo

Friggin sweet! The aggressive guitar is something I've always wanted in my tracks but it doesn't translate to my hands. Your solo tone was about as perfect as it can get. Great feel and flow, Like it a lot!

Evisma 15th Aug 2013 05:37 - 12 years ago

on Thief In The Night by MWRatridge

Very nice. Reminds me of some Davenport Cabinet with a voice like Drive-By Truckers. Solo's have an awesome tone as well. I have nothing but good things to say about this track.

MWRatridge replied 15th Aug 2013 - 12 years ago

Evisma,
TY for the listen. Very glad you like it. The guitar I am using on this song is my PRS semi cut...using both pickups for a fat sound.
Mark.

Evisma 12th Aug 2013 03:53 - 12 years ago

on Terminator 2 by guitarguy316

Always loved this theme song. Very nice interpretation.

guitarguy316 replied 26th Aug 2013 - 12 years ago

Thanks for the comment evisma !

Evisma 12th Aug 2013 02:57 - 12 years ago

on Thief In The Night by MWRatridge

The music is great, drums could be louder. Lyrics are sound, but the vocals feel out of place. Would have liked to hear a cleaner sounding voice on top of this music, but still a great expression. Has a Drive-by Truckers vibe. Nice.

MWRatridge replied 12th Aug 2013 - 12 years ago

ty man

Evisma 12th Aug 2013 02:51 - 12 years ago

on Faded My Battle with the Bong by topvega

Reminds me of some Govt Mule. Your guitar riffs seem very set and not an off the cuff attempt. Sounds weird, but I appreciate a guitarist who can play the same thing 8 times and not change it. Diggin it.

topvega replied 14th Aug 2013 - 12 years ago

Funny you say that, I have to try real hard to repeat a riff over and over again. I tend to get bored easily and wind up with a more off the cuff take. I appreciate the kind words and your taking the time to listen.
Thanks again.

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Evisma 10th Aug 2013 03:53 - 12 years ago

on SalaD by deciBel

Like the offset guitars. They're the only thing that sounds "Country". Horn parts at the end are nice, love horns, they didn't seem to go over each other in parts, though. When the effects came through, I was surprised. Wasn't expecting that. Nice.

deciBel replied 15th Aug 2013 - 12 years ago

dear Colleague evisma ,first appologY for latency in replY and then regarding your true analysis I'm agree with U & abouT Horn usage of mine glad if U've liked iT . best wishes._____Behnam

Evisma 9th Aug 2013 07:02 - 12 years ago

on Trust by the47

Excellent guitar work. I want to hear it again with vocals.

Evisma 9th Aug 2013 03:47 - 12 years ago

on Wheres god at now by TheElectricNote

The bass shouldn't be panned left. Disorienting. There's not alot of clarity in the guitars either. The drums, while off in parts, were very good. Nice double bass. Not to complain, but I feel you put your stuff on here for constructive criticism, just like me. Keep it up!

Evisma 9th Aug 2013 03:22 - 12 years ago

on PeteJonTebar Doing the best I can by Soap

Good music. Good vocals. Need more of the music in the mix. Wavelengths are very short so you have plenty of headroom. Enjoyed listening to this one. Please proceed.

Soap replied 9th Aug 2013 - 12 years ago

Thank you for listening and for this kind comment and advice. I'm about to work this mix again... Peace. ;)

Evisma 8th Aug 2013 03:52 - 12 years ago

on She Sails Beyond The Mists FT Janis71 by brillbilly

Awesome. A few clips and a few abrupt notes that sounded like they should "swell" instead of "hit" ,but I could never do such a free formed expression like this. Very impressed.

brillbilly replied 12th Aug 2013 - 12 years ago

Thank you very much for your kind comments!

Life love n unity to you! ;)

Evisma 8th Aug 2013 03:40 - 12 years ago

on metaled-MFer-IN THE END by MetalEd

Like it alot. The phaser or whatever modulation you have on the drums is a bit distracting. The guitar at 2:53 has a very good tone for this track, sits well with the rest. The effect on the vocals at the beginning was a bit too much, like the drums, but once it got heavy you couldn't notice. Like it alot, please continue!

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