Hi MrEvan,
Once more I have to repeat myself... very good track.
Brilliant arpeggio in the intro: very effective.
Then the song starts and it has a good drive: good solid rock. Liked
The first stop is very interesting: at 1:47 we have a "main" bass line which steals the show, good. The guitar work is good as well, but the bass is the "champion" here.
A second iteration of the first "verse": it really goes well. I like that you did not "overdo" it and you quickly go back to the "funkier" groove... and from here to the end.
Good song.
Ciao, Domenico
If you were repeating yourself saying "very bad track", then I would worry.
I wanted to get back to the bass guitar. Ever since I got the six-string, it's been my Sirenum Scopuli. I've been drawn to it every day, and the bass has been a bit neglected.
Glad to not have overdone it. I was right on the edge of that.
Wonderful song... very hard to decide which instrument did a better job... guitar? drums? sax? piano? ... I forgot to mention Patricia's voice...
I would just say "kudos to the team"!
Ciao, Domenico
Thank you so much, Domenico. Always a pleasure to receive your comments. So glad you can appreciate our little team as we all enjoy working with eachother.
what a wonderful bass line!!!
Loved it!
My personal highlight: the intro (the first bars with bass & drum at fulls steam are a real killer!)
Ciao, Domenico
Really glad you like it and took the time to comment. Being a drummer, I have always loved a bass and drum break-down in a good funk or rock song. Glad you do also.
Hi MrHLowe,
Good work with the guitar... it adds a nice layer and makes the song a bit more "pop-rock" than dub-step.
At 2:28 and 3:08 we can appreciate the sound you have: good! Very good! (just out of curiosity, is this a VST-amp?)
If possible, you made the wonderful voice of Carole shining even more.
Thanks!
Ciao, Domenico
Hi Carole,
So good to hear again your wonderful voice!
So ... dubstep is not my cup of tea... but I love the chord progression and the melody that you sing on it.
Good ... very good.
The change at 1:58 is a real nice touch. And from there the 3 vocal tracks that work together... Loved it!
Thanks again for sharing your talent with us.
Ciao, Domenico
Hi MrNomad,
Again...you surprise me with something different.
I would say that the Nomad's-Touch in this one is mainly on the bass lines... they are really "distinctive".
My favorite moment: ~3:00 ... this is very 80s
The "string-solo" in the end is also very tasteful and totally unexpected from you. But good.
Liked this song.
Ciao, Domenico
PS: you know that the last "unwanted notes" fit nicely in the fade-out?
Yes, something a bit different for me, as is always my aim Probably because of the use of all these drum loops and more of a focus on chillout dance music. But still some of my signature sounds in there eg the slide solo.
The filtered, arpeggiated (bowed) violins you can hear in quite a few of my tracks. Pretty much the same sound but always playing different melodies. Some of the very best are in here, especially in the last 90 seconds - my favourite section. That's just a return to violin parts heard earlier in the track but this time I do more with them.
"My favorite moment: ~3:00 ... this is very 80s"
Aha, I think you have chosen the funk section as your favourite. I'm not hearing it as being particularly 80s but I did enjoy playing that delicate clean funk stuff. Lots of chopping up and reordering of the bass and guitar parts but the end result is good, though not perfect.
"you know that the last "unwanted notes" fit nicely in the fade-out?"
I still haven't got round to removing those export error notes. Here's what they are:
Listen to 3:15 and you will hear some gentle high notes come in. That's an arpeggiated sequence heard a few times afterwards. It plays all the time, I just fade the volume up when I want it to be heard.
On export, the last second had the volume of that part mistakenly turned up so that's why it's heard. Yes, that sequence could easily fit in the outro but I'm not sure it's necessary. I have since thought of a way I could include those notes but I don't think I need to. That sequence is heard enough in other parts of the track so it's important not to overdo it.
Yes, the distinctive basslines probably do have the Nomad touch. That same bass synth patch can be heard in lots of my tracks but it doesn't seem to get boring. It's really just a very useful bass sound and it's the main bass in the jazz metal track I'm still working on (it used to be part of this track).
Bassline starting at 5:45 keeps reminding me of New Order's Blue Monday - probably one of the greatest club tracks ever made. And it's by a proper band so it's much more interesting than most dance tracks.
Glad you liked this one as I thought maybe it wouldn't be your sort of thing. I thought maybe there was too much synth and not enough guitar for you.
It may be a while till my next upload as I'm working on a few difficult tracks right now and am far off completing any of them.
Hi Spiv,
So good to hear something "made from you" ... and this time in all senses!
It is funny how "pop" is this song: I think this is one of your "easiest" tracks, it is really musical and "pleasant" while reading your description (and knowing you) I was expecting something more "extreme".
Of course, the sounds you used can be defined "harsh" but once put in your mix they get very enjoyable.
Liked it.
Liked it a lot.
Ciao, Domenico
For some reason, I thought that I had replied to this comment already. I must have been just thinking about your words a lot since you posted this. I'm actually pretty pleased that you found it somewhat pop, as I don't think most people would agree. I think mostly I've just been getting a more trained ear, as well as trying new things each time I bring a song to completion. I really appreciate harsh sounds in a clear sounding final product. Thank you so much for the feedback!
Very well done.
As someone already mentioned, wonderful guitar sound.
The vocal track is clear and "on spot".
Good dynamics.
What can I say? This is a very well made pop song.
Good job!
Ciao, Domenico
I have to quote Alex on this: "very stylish production"
You did wonderful job with the mixing: even my humble work sounds better in this context. THANKS!
Ciao, Domenico
Domenico I could have not done it with out you. Your Bass playing is great!, and it fits so nicely with the tune.
I can not thank you enough for your assistance with this tune.
Your bass track made the song.
Hi Rico,
This song has a good and pleasant flow.
I like the choice of the synth sounds and the usage of different melodic elements to keep the interest of the listener.
Well done!
Ciao, Domenico
Hi MrEpic,
Very "enjoyable" song: lot of potential of becoming a real chart hit.
Simple yet very effective arrangement.
On the mix... I think the guitar is a bit overpowered during the verse: the singer has a good dynamic and he (you?) delivers a very good chorus, but during the verse the instruments should leave some more space to him (IMVHO).
But this is a minor thing.
I liked the song: very well done!
Ciao, Domenico
I actually agree with you, Mr. Wolf. It's just a hair too loud, but I don't have my old rig anymore so I can't change it haha. Appreciate the feedback.
Hi Alex,
The guitar is veeeeery good! Credits to MrZank for playing it and to you for bringing it to "life". Very good!
I like a lot the way you build keys counterparts to keep the track "bouncing" around, never boring. Excellent!
Genius touch: the idea of a short pause after the first part ... simply beautiful!
A song I really liked.
Ciao, Domenico
Hi MrEvan,
I really like this new song of yours!
The title is "ironic" and well fitting the track.
Not so fond of the synth sound starting at 1:49.
Some typical Evisma signature "riff" around 1:37 (very KingCrimson-ish ... liked it a lot!)
Not a big fan of the marimba, but it feels good on this track.
Lot of things going on for such a short track... but this is good!
Ciao, Domenico
Hi MrAlex,
A wonderful relaxing track:
- everything is simply "perfect"
- the guitar is tasteful and works very well in this context... kudos to MrFranco...but this is nothing new ;-)
- good work on the keys: they keep the song "moving" and interesting
Are you planning to release this song somehow?
Very good work.
Ciao, Domenico
Thank you Domenico for a nice comment. Yes, for sure I will be releasing complete albums in a long perspective at some point in the future. I have many tracks ready to go but they are stylistically very different. If you want to have this song contact me via my lm profile. I can send you also my newest song, unlike this smooth jazzy one here it is a bit more aggresive and changing: https://soundcloud.com/promenade2239/wave-blues-feat-toneart-and-taratoxic
Hi MrShawn,
Killer vocal track with very little assistance from the beat... but honestly your flow is so smooth that you don't need any embellishment to make it working.
Good!
Ciao, Domenico
Hi MrPromenade,
Great track.
I like the 70s feeling on the drums...nice touch integrating some percussions as well (without overdoing it).
The work on the key and way it "interact" with the guitar, together with the usage of the sound FX is amazing.
It remembers me a bit of Jaffa's Elevator.
Of course, MrFranco is "at high level" as usual.
Again, really a great track.
Ciao, Domenico
Thank you MrWolf for some nice words.
I will check out Jaffa' Elevator. Happy you liked the production and it is really nice to hear such a kind feedback.
I have a new song with ferryterry - with even more interesting guitar and piano playing: a minor blues jam track. I will post it later today.
Thanks again for listening and very nice review. It is appreciated. Best, Alex
Hi MrRadical,
Good track! I know that we must credit a lot to the bass loop from MrF... this is soooooo funky.
But we cannot ignore the wonderful job you have done here: everything works very well and the resulting track is really a mixture of the genius of two good musicians.
Very well done!
Ciao, Domenico
PS: I really like the "moving synth" phrases you build (e.g. 4:02)
Interesting... bizarre but interesting :-)
Actually this is not so "bizarre": very good sounds and good orchestration.
Have you used loops or synths?
Either way, good track, some cinematic moments (e.g. 1:00) and good change of mood throughout the song.
Ciao, Domenico
Hi MrEpicRecord,
Nice pop song.
I like the vocal part: good voice. Maybe not too "original" lines, but they work well.
The only part that was not "on par" according to me is the beginning of the rap section (1:54) ... a couple of words seem not to really fit the "flow".
Lovely piano arpeggio: simple yet effective. Liked.
The overall sound quality is definitely not bad.
So, this one shows some talent!
Ciao, Domenico
Yeah, this was an early work that I did several years ago so my writing skills weren't sharpened and this was our first-ever attempt at rapping of some sort haha. It was kind of our "test song" that my brother and I made :P
Hi MrNomad,
I will keep my comment short(er) on this one: lot of words already spent.
1:52 this section is the quintessence of MrNomad.
If I was ever going to join the "sound like somebody else" contest I would definitely choose this as my inspiration for a MrStaticNowolf song :-)
Now, while this sentence might not hold true for everyone, this is what I really like in your music: here we have a powerful chorused bass which builds some "liquid" lines, on a simple yet solid drumbeat, with the guitar as main actor, taking the liberty of "jumping" from beat to beat in a kind of self-indulging but very interesting manner.
That said, I of course liked a lot all the rest of the song.
Only exceptions may be:
- the synth around 8:30, a bit too "pop-ish" for this context, but we can consider it a "divertissement" and then it has all the right to stay here
- not a big fun of the laser-drome around 10:00 ... but the killer guitar/bass riff that follows makes me forgive everything.
The level of your compositions is very high.
Still waiting for the official announcement of a Nomad's album coming out.
I may even be willing to spend some of my hard earned money to buy it :-)
Take care,
Domenico
1:52 may be quintessential me. That guitar riff was the foundation for the grooving here. Before I came up with it, I just had that chillout intro, which was a leftover from my drumless, romantic cinematic track Visible Aura.
That track had no drums so I decided the continuation of its leftover parts should get back to my usual drum-obsessive grooving mode.
" taking the liberty of "jumping" from beat to beat"
Yes, I like the movement of the guitar around the beat. It's mostly three finger-plucked chords (plus some other fills) but is all about how I move around the simple drum groove, with fat synth bass pumping away underneath.
No problem you didn't like the 8:30 trance lead. I had to include it as it really inspired me when working out where to take the second half of this. I loved the sound of the bass guitar with the lead trance and I realised I could make some sort of unusual version of delta blues trance, which I think I've done.
As it inspired me so much, I wasn't going to get rid of it. I've tried to control the filtering so that it doesn't sound too cheesy or "pop-ish". I think it's a surprise in the track and you know I like to do that.
Same goes for laser stuff around 10:00. I don't love that sound but think it takes the track somewhere interesting and new for me.
It's hard to keep coming up with new and interesting tracks (I'm trying to make a piece of music unlike any other almost every single time) so don't be surprised if I sometimes do slightly weird stuff. Or choose some sounds you don't like. That's got to happen sometime.
However, I try not to include something purely for intellectual reasons ie "Oh, it's not a very good sound but I was just trying to show I can also make a bit of trance". I try to only keep things I think sound good (I trust my musical opinion) or do something else with them if they just don't fit the track I've first tried them in. You could say that all sounds have their place, right?
" the killer guitar/bass riff that follows makes me forgive everything"
That's just one distorted bass guitar. Didn't need to double it up with a guitar part though the 1:52 clean guitar does return very near the end of the track.
I don't like that distorted bass riff as much as I first did. Not sure why.
Thanks for your continued support and praise. I try to keep the standard high though it's hard so best if I don't think about it too much as it can place too much pressure on me. Better to just free my mind and create with no expectations, for no purpose other than making something cool and unusual.
Yes, I've produced many albums in the past couple of years so much get round to turning them into real, publicly available albums. Lots of little things to go back and fix in various tracks plus the problem I always have of great mastering.
You'll get some Nomad albums some day, I promise. A heavy one, an electronic one, a blues one, a jazz/funk one and so on...
Hi MrEvan,
Good track (as usual).
I really like the bass work in the initial part: it has some "melodic" properties, which one would not expect from such a driving bass line. Good!
The tempo changes are "spectacular": this is one of the most difficult things to "plan on a DAW" and in this case they sound so natural. Very Good.
marimba... now this is original, but it works very well.
I am not so fond of some synth sounds (e.g. 2:20) but this is a matter of taste.
The final bass riff is really "powerful" ... I love when the drums go away and the bass gains the "front position" (2:26)
Drumkit sounds a bit "fake": using a stereo spread plugin may help (as per MrNomad suggestion...after he pointed this out I started using it more on my tracks and in some cases it really improves things, but your mileage may vary here...)
Again: GREAT TRACK!
Ciao, Domenico
PS: I would have downloaded it if download was allowed.
"The tempo changes are "spectacular": this is one of the most difficult things to "plan on a DAW" and in this case they sound so natural. Very Good."
Thank you. Like I mentioned to Mr. Nomad, I just let the part I had play out and when it went to silence, I played some palm-muted guitar hits and got the tempo(down 20bpm), cut and changed the Tempo Track, and was able to turn on the click and play from the verse into the chorus very naturally. Getting the tempo let me set the tempo track and then the click followed it. Kinda hard to explain the process because I wasn't really paying much attention at the time.
I will address the drums soon. Thank you again for your feedback and honesty. It is the most important aspect of this site for me. I appreciate you.
Wow. You have a very interesting voice.
Good song: your vocal part is by far the best thing here. The loops are "brutal" and they work well together, but your voice is really outstanding.
Ciao, Domenico
PS: I read you are a Type-o-Negative fan. We have all their albums at home (my wife was a big fan)
I think that Black-no1 is probably the best goth-rock song ever written.
And I see some traces of Peter Steele's in your vocals.
You have the same way of building vocal melodies which contrast the music (and you work in the "deep" zone, the same as he used to do).
Now you have to learn to play bass ;-)
PPS: Of course I cannot forget to send a thought to one of the most inspired musicians our planet has ever seen.
Hopefully Peter found some peace.
Nice warm sounds. I am always surprised (and pleased) to hear some real synth-sounds.
Little track that works very well with the picture.
Ciao, Domenico
This is a very well made "pop" track.
The bass is a bit in the background, but this fits well the song.
The work on the guitar chords is very convincing. Well done!
Keys are also a bit "in the back": they are more a carpet for the vocals than a real "solo melody". By the way, I like them a lot (good work from your friend Paul).
Drums are also good: maybe the open hi-hat is a bit overused in the section around 3:30 (but this is a minor thing).
The only possible improvement I see, you could work a bit on the levels of the different guitars, but this is something you will need to define once you have the vocal part done.
I think this song deserves a *good* vocal part.
Liked!
Ciao, Domenico
To be truthful the mix is just a rough, at the time I was deep in other
projects...
And have sense remix it but thought, this was good enough for playing
on site...Why give the Master away...
on So Long Bound by Evisma
Once more I have to repeat myself... very good track.
Brilliant arpeggio in the intro: very effective.
Then the song starts and it has a good drive: good solid rock. Liked
The first stop is very interesting: at 1:47 we have a "main" bass line which steals the show, good. The guitar work is good as well, but the bass is the "champion" here.
A second iteration of the first "verse": it really goes well. I like that you did not "overdo" it and you quickly go back to the "funkier" groove... and from here to the end.
Good song.
Ciao, Domenico
If you were repeating yourself saying "very bad track", then I would worry.
I wanted to get back to the bass guitar. Ever since I got the six-string, it's been my Sirenum Scopuli. I've been drawn to it every day, and the bass has been a bit neglected.
Glad to not have overdone it. I was right on the edge of that.
Thanks for the listen and the kind words.
Evan
on You Make Me Fall In Love Again - Feat Patricia E by Musicante
I would just say "kudos to the team"!
Ciao, Domenico
PS: Veramente una bella canzone!
Ciao,
M.
on Funky Thide of Sings by ScottB55
Loved it!
My personal highlight: the intro (the first bars with bass & drum at fulls steam are a real killer!)
Ciao, Domenico
Really glad you like it and took the time to comment. Being a drummer, I have always loved a bass and drum break-down in a good funk or rock song. Glad you do also.
Cheers,
Scott
on If Ever Ft Janis71 by HLOWE
Good work with the guitar... it adds a nice layer and makes the song a bit more "pop-rock" than dub-step.
At 2:28 and 3:08 we can appreciate the sound you have: good! Very good! (just out of curiosity, is this a VST-amp?)
If possible, you made the wonderful voice of Carole shining even more.
Thanks!
Ciao, Domenico
on If ever by janis71
So good to hear again your wonderful voice!
So ... dubstep is not my cup of tea... but I love the chord progression and the melody that you sing on it.
Good ... very good.
The change at 1:58 is a real nice touch. And from there the 3 vocal tracks that work together... Loved it!
Thanks again for sharing your talent with us.
Ciao, Domenico
on A Little Bit Of Infinity by StaticNomad
Again...you surprise me with something different.
I would say that the Nomad's-Touch in this one is mainly on the bass lines... they are really "distinctive".
My favorite moment: ~3:00 ... this is very 80s
The "string-solo" in the end is also very tasteful and totally unexpected from you. But good.
Liked this song.
Ciao, Domenico
PS: you know that the last "unwanted notes" fit nicely in the fade-out?
Yes, something a bit different for me, as is always my aim Probably because of the use of all these drum loops and more of a focus on chillout dance music. But still some of my signature sounds in there eg the slide solo.
The filtered, arpeggiated (bowed) violins you can hear in quite a few of my tracks. Pretty much the same sound but always playing different melodies. Some of the very best are in here, especially in the last 90 seconds - my favourite section. That's just a return to violin parts heard earlier in the track but this time I do more with them.
"My favorite moment: ~3:00 ... this is very 80s"
Aha, I think you have chosen the funk section as your favourite. I'm not hearing it as being particularly 80s but I did enjoy playing that delicate clean funk stuff. Lots of chopping up and reordering of the bass and guitar parts but the end result is good, though not perfect.
"you know that the last "unwanted notes" fit nicely in the fade-out?"
I still haven't got round to removing those export error notes. Here's what they are:
Listen to 3:15 and you will hear some gentle high notes come in. That's an arpeggiated sequence heard a few times afterwards. It plays all the time, I just fade the volume up when I want it to be heard.
On export, the last second had the volume of that part mistakenly turned up so that's why it's heard. Yes, that sequence could easily fit in the outro but I'm not sure it's necessary. I have since thought of a way I could include those notes but I don't think I need to. That sequence is heard enough in other parts of the track so it's important not to overdo it.
Yes, the distinctive basslines probably do have the Nomad touch. That same bass synth patch can be heard in lots of my tracks but it doesn't seem to get boring. It's really just a very useful bass sound and it's the main bass in the jazz metal track I'm still working on (it used to be part of this track).
Bassline starting at 5:45 keeps reminding me of New Order's Blue Monday - probably one of the greatest club tracks ever made. And it's by a proper band so it's much more interesting than most dance tracks.
Glad you liked this one as I thought maybe it wouldn't be your sort of thing. I thought maybe there was too much synth and not enough guitar for you.
It may be a while till my next upload as I'm working on a few difficult tracks right now and am far off completing any of them.
See you around...
on PB And Grace by Spivkurl
So good to hear something "made from you" ... and this time in all senses!
It is funny how "pop" is this song: I think this is one of your "easiest" tracks, it is really musical and "pleasant" while reading your description (and knowing you) I was expecting something more "extreme".
Of course, the sounds you used can be defined "harsh" but once put in your mix they get very enjoyable.
Liked it.
Liked it a lot.
Ciao, Domenico
on Keep You Close by BradoSanz
As someone already mentioned, wonderful guitar sound.
The vocal track is clear and "on spot".
Good dynamics.
What can I say? This is a very well made pop song.
Good job!
Ciao, Domenico
on Funkmachine by ZankFrappa
Good! Very Funky!
Ciao, Domenico
on Could it Be - Featuring Chip Jenkins by midiman007
You did wonderful job with the mixing: even my humble work sounds better in this context. THANKS!
Ciao, Domenico
I can not thank you enough for your assistance with this tune.
Your bass track made the song.
on Otonoha Final Edit by 15ludwicke
This song has a good and pleasant flow.
I like the choice of the synth sounds and the usage of different melodic elements to keep the interest of the listener.
Well done!
Ciao, Domenico
on Wont Stop Loving You by BradoSanz
Very "enjoyable" song: lot of potential of becoming a real chart hit.
Simple yet very effective arrangement.
On the mix... I think the guitar is a bit overpowered during the verse: the singer has a good dynamic and he (you?) delivers a very good chorus, but during the verse the instruments should leave some more space to him (IMVHO).
But this is a minor thing.
I liked the song: very well done!
Ciao, Domenico
on V O Q T A Y Y featuring ZankFrappa by promenade2239
The guitar is veeeeery good! Credits to MrZank for playing it and to you for bringing it to "life". Very good!
I like a lot the way you build keys counterparts to keep the track "bouncing" around, never boring. Excellent!
Genius touch: the idea of a short pause after the first part ... simply beautiful!
A song I really liked.
Ciao, Domenico
on The Farcical Aquatic Ceremony by Evisma
I really like this new song of yours!
The title is "ironic" and well fitting the track.
Not so fond of the synth sound starting at 1:49.
Some typical Evisma signature "riff" around 1:37 (very KingCrimson-ish ... liked it a lot!)
Not a big fan of the marimba, but it feels good on this track.
Lot of things going on for such a short track... but this is good!
Ciao, Domenico
"Not so fond of the synth sound starting at 1:49"
I believe that is the accordion and marimba combo. I've wanted to use accordion for a while. Sorry, but I've been diggin the marimbas lately.
I appreciate the feedback. Hope all is well with you.
Evan
on High Communication feat Ferryterry by promenade2239
A wonderful relaxing track:
- everything is simply "perfect"
- the guitar is tasteful and works very well in this context... kudos to MrFranco...but this is nothing new ;-)
- good work on the keys: they keep the song "moving" and interesting
Are you planning to release this song somehow?
Very good work.
Ciao, Domenico
Thanks again! Alex
on Flow Poetic by ShawnLat
Killer vocal track with very little assistance from the beat... but honestly your flow is so smooth that you don't need any embellishment to make it working.
Good!
Ciao, Domenico
on Joyful Magnification ft ferryterry by promenade2239
Great track.
I like the 70s feeling on the drums...nice touch integrating some percussions as well (without overdoing it).
The work on the key and way it "interact" with the guitar, together with the usage of the sound FX is amazing.
It remembers me a bit of Jaffa's Elevator.
Of course, MrFranco is "at high level" as usual.
Again, really a great track.
Ciao, Domenico
I will check out Jaffa' Elevator. Happy you liked the production and it is really nice to hear such a kind feedback.
I have a new song with ferryterry - with even more interesting guitar and piano playing: a minor blues jam track. I will post it later today.
Thanks again for listening and very nice review. It is appreciated. Best, Alex
on Mr Funk by FreeRadical
Good track! I know that we must credit a lot to the bass loop from MrF... this is soooooo funky.
But we cannot ignore the wonderful job you have done here: everything works very well and the resulting track is really a mixture of the genius of two good musicians.
Very well done!
Ciao, Domenico
PS: I really like the "moving synth" phrases you build (e.g. 4:02)
on Elegy by ZankFrappa
Actually this is not so "bizarre": very good sounds and good orchestration.
Have you used loops or synths?
Either way, good track, some cinematic moments (e.g. 1:00) and good change of mood throughout the song.
Ciao, Domenico
on A Song I Recorded with an iPad by BradoSanz
Nice pop song.
I like the vocal part: good voice. Maybe not too "original" lines, but they work well.
The only part that was not "on par" according to me is the beginning of the rap section (1:54) ... a couple of words seem not to really fit the "flow".
Lovely piano arpeggio: simple yet effective. Liked.
The overall sound quality is definitely not bad.
So, this one shows some talent!
Ciao, Domenico
Yeah, this was an early work that I did several years ago so my writing skills weren't sharpened and this was our first-ever attempt at rapping of some sort haha. It was kind of our "test song" that my brother and I made :P
on Honey Mango Heaven by StaticNomad
I will keep my comment short(er) on this one: lot of words already spent.
1:52 this section is the quintessence of MrNomad.
If I was ever going to join the "sound like somebody else" contest I would definitely choose this as my inspiration for a MrStaticNowolf song :-)
Now, while this sentence might not hold true for everyone, this is what I really like in your music: here we have a powerful chorused bass which builds some "liquid" lines, on a simple yet solid drumbeat, with the guitar as main actor, taking the liberty of "jumping" from beat to beat in a kind of self-indulging but very interesting manner.
That said, I of course liked a lot all the rest of the song.
Only exceptions may be:
- the synth around 8:30, a bit too "pop-ish" for this context, but we can consider it a "divertissement" and then it has all the right to stay here
- not a big fun of the laser-drome around 10:00 ... but the killer guitar/bass riff that follows makes me forgive everything.
The level of your compositions is very high.
Still waiting for the official announcement of a Nomad's album coming out.
I may even be willing to spend some of my hard earned money to buy it :-)
Take care,
Domenico
1:52 may be quintessential me. That guitar riff was the foundation for the grooving here. Before I came up with it, I just had that chillout intro, which was a leftover from my drumless, romantic cinematic track Visible Aura.
That track had no drums so I decided the continuation of its leftover parts should get back to my usual drum-obsessive grooving mode.
" taking the liberty of "jumping" from beat to beat"
Yes, I like the movement of the guitar around the beat. It's mostly three finger-plucked chords (plus some other fills) but is all about how I move around the simple drum groove, with fat synth bass pumping away underneath.
No problem you didn't like the 8:30 trance lead. I had to include it as it really inspired me when working out where to take the second half of this. I loved the sound of the bass guitar with the lead trance and I realised I could make some sort of unusual version of delta blues trance, which I think I've done.
As it inspired me so much, I wasn't going to get rid of it. I've tried to control the filtering so that it doesn't sound too cheesy or "pop-ish". I think it's a surprise in the track and you know I like to do that.
Same goes for laser stuff around 10:00. I don't love that sound but think it takes the track somewhere interesting and new for me.
It's hard to keep coming up with new and interesting tracks (I'm trying to make a piece of music unlike any other almost every single time) so don't be surprised if I sometimes do slightly weird stuff. Or choose some sounds you don't like. That's got to happen sometime.
However, I try not to include something purely for intellectual reasons ie "Oh, it's not a very good sound but I was just trying to show I can also make a bit of trance". I try to only keep things I think sound good (I trust my musical opinion) or do something else with them if they just don't fit the track I've first tried them in. You could say that all sounds have their place, right?
" the killer guitar/bass riff that follows makes me forgive everything"
That's just one distorted bass guitar. Didn't need to double it up with a guitar part though the 1:52 clean guitar does return very near the end of the track.
I don't like that distorted bass riff as much as I first did. Not sure why.
Thanks for your continued support and praise. I try to keep the standard high though it's hard so best if I don't think about it too much as it can place too much pressure on me. Better to just free my mind and create with no expectations, for no purpose other than making something cool and unusual.
Yes, I've produced many albums in the past couple of years so much get round to turning them into real, publicly available albums. Lots of little things to go back and fix in various tracks plus the problem I always have of great mastering.
You'll get some Nomad albums some day, I promise. A heavy one, an electronic one, a blues one, a jazz/funk one and so on...
on Scalpel Chowder by Evisma
Good track (as usual).
I really like the bass work in the initial part: it has some "melodic" properties, which one would not expect from such a driving bass line. Good!
The tempo changes are "spectacular": this is one of the most difficult things to "plan on a DAW" and in this case they sound so natural. Very Good.
marimba... now this is original, but it works very well.
I am not so fond of some synth sounds (e.g. 2:20) but this is a matter of taste.
The final bass riff is really "powerful" ... I love when the drums go away and the bass gains the "front position" (2:26)
Drumkit sounds a bit "fake": using a stereo spread plugin may help (as per MrNomad suggestion...after he pointed this out I started using it more on my tracks and in some cases it really improves things, but your mileage may vary here...)
Again: GREAT TRACK!
Ciao, Domenico
PS: I would have downloaded it if download was allowed.
"The tempo changes are "spectacular": this is one of the most difficult things to "plan on a DAW" and in this case they sound so natural. Very Good."
Thank you. Like I mentioned to Mr. Nomad, I just let the part I had play out and when it went to silence, I played some palm-muted guitar hits and got the tempo(down 20bpm), cut and changed the Tempo Track, and was able to turn on the click and play from the verse into the chorus very naturally. Getting the tempo let me set the tempo track and then the click followed it. Kinda hard to explain the process because I wasn't really paying much attention at the time.
I will address the drums soon. Thank you again for your feedback and honesty. It is the most important aspect of this site for me. I appreciate you.
Take care
Evan
on now what by MetalEd
Good song: your vocal part is by far the best thing here. The loops are "brutal" and they work well together, but your voice is really outstanding.
Ciao, Domenico
PS: I read you are a Type-o-Negative fan. We have all their albums at home (my wife was a big fan)
I think that Black-no1 is probably the best goth-rock song ever written.
And I see some traces of Peter Steele's in your vocals.
You have the same way of building vocal melodies which contrast the music (and you work in the "deep" zone, the same as he used to do).
Now you have to learn to play bass ;-)
PPS: Of course I cannot forget to send a thought to one of the most inspired musicians our planet has ever seen.
Hopefully Peter found some peace.
on luminous sunset by DanGoldstein
Little track that works very well with the picture.
Ciao, Domenico
on What My Heart Needs--Instrumental by soundhound
The bass is a bit in the background, but this fits well the song.
The work on the guitar chords is very convincing. Well done!
Keys are also a bit "in the back": they are more a carpet for the vocals than a real "solo melody". By the way, I like them a lot (good work from your friend Paul).
Drums are also good: maybe the open hi-hat is a bit overused in the section around 3:30 (but this is a minor thing).
The only possible improvement I see, you could work a bit on the levels of the different guitars, but this is something you will need to define once you have the vocal part done.
I think this song deserves a *good* vocal part.
Liked!
Ciao, Domenico
To be truthful the mix is just a rough, at the time I was deep in other
projects...
And have sense remix it but thought, this was good enough for playing
on site...Why give the Master away...
Never the less I'm glad, you enjoyed the track...
Peace...TG.