mrwolf14

mrwolf14

London is drowning and I live by the river
Munich, Germany
Joined : 7th Oct 2012 - 13 years ago
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mrwolf14
mrwolf14 6th Feb 2015 12:46 - 11 years ago

on Otonoha Final Edit by 15ludwicke
Hi Rico,
This song has a good and pleasant flow.
I like the choice of the synth sounds and the usage of different melodic elements to keep the interest of the listener.
Well done!
Ciao, Domenico
mrwolf14
mrwolf14 6th Feb 2015 10:53 - 11 years ago

on Wont Stop Loving You by BradoSanz
Hi MrEpic,
Very "enjoyable" song: lot of potential of becoming a real chart hit.
Simple yet very effective arrangement.
On the mix... I think the guitar is a bit overpowered during the verse: the singer has a good dynamic and he (you?) delivers a very good chorus, but during the verse the instruments should leave some more space to him (IMVHO).
But this is a minor thing.
I liked the song: very well done!
Ciao, Domenico
BradoSanz
BradoSanz replied 6th Feb 2015 - 11 years ago
I actually agree with you, Mr. Wolf. It's just a hair too loud, but I don't have my old rig anymore so I can't change it haha. Appreciate the feedback.
mrwolf14
mrwolf14 6th Feb 2015 10:48 - 11 years ago

on V O Q T A Y Y featuring ZankFrappa by promenade2239
Hi Alex,
The guitar is veeeeery good! Credits to MrZank for playing it and to you for bringing it to "life". Very good!
I like a lot the way you build keys counterparts to keep the track "bouncing" around, never boring. Excellent!
Genius touch: the idea of a short pause after the first part ... simply beautiful!
A song I really liked.
Ciao, Domenico
mrwolf14
mrwolf14 5th Feb 2015 10:57 - 11 years ago

on The Farcical Aquatic Ceremony by Evisma
Hi MrEvan,
I really like this new song of yours!
The title is "ironic" and well fitting the track.
Not so fond of the synth sound starting at 1:49.
Some typical Evisma signature "riff" around 1:37 (very KingCrimson-ish ... liked it a lot!)
Not a big fan of the marimba, but it feels good on this track.
Lot of things going on for such a short track... but this is good!
Ciao, Domenico
Evisma
Evisma replied 5th Feb 2015 - 11 years ago
Greetings!

"Not so fond of the synth sound starting at 1:49"

I believe that is the accordion and marimba combo. I've wanted to use accordion for a while. Sorry, but I've been diggin the marimbas lately.

I appreciate the feedback. Hope all is well with you.

Evan
mrwolf14
mrwolf14 5th Feb 2015 10:52 - 11 years ago

on High Communication feat Ferryterry by promenade2239
Hi MrAlex,
A wonderful relaxing track:
- everything is simply "perfect"
- the guitar is tasteful and works very well in this context... kudos to MrFranco...but this is nothing new ;-)
- good work on the keys: they keep the song "moving" and interesting

Are you planning to release this song somehow?
Very good work.
Ciao, Domenico
promenade2239
promenade2239 replied 5th Feb 2015 - 11 years ago
Thank you Domenico for a nice comment. Yes, for sure I will be releasing complete albums in a long perspective at some point in the future. I have many tracks ready to go but they are stylistically very different. If you want to have this song contact me via my lm profile. I can send you also my newest song, unlike this smooth jazzy one here it is a bit more aggresive and changing: https://soundcloud.com/promenade2239/wave-blues-feat-toneart-and-taratoxic

Thanks again! Alex
mrwolf14
mrwolf14 29th Jan 2015 14:51 - 11 years ago

on Flow Poetic by ShawnLat
Hi MrShawn,
Killer vocal track with very little assistance from the beat... but honestly your flow is so smooth that you don't need any embellishment to make it working.
Good!
Ciao, Domenico
mrwolf14
mrwolf14 29th Jan 2015 14:47 - 11 years ago

on Joyful Magnification ft ferryterry by promenade2239
Hi MrPromenade,
Great track.
I like the 70s feeling on the drums...nice touch integrating some percussions as well (without overdoing it).
The work on the key and way it "interact" with the guitar, together with the usage of the sound FX is amazing.
It remembers me a bit of Jaffa's Elevator.
Of course, MrFranco is "at high level" as usual.
Again, really a great track.
Ciao, Domenico
promenade2239
promenade2239 replied 1st Feb 2015 - 11 years ago
Thank you MrWolf for some nice words.
I will check out Jaffa' Elevator. Happy you liked the production and it is really nice to hear such a kind feedback.
I have a new song with ferryterry - with even more interesting guitar and piano playing: a minor blues jam track. I will post it later today.

Thanks again for listening and very nice review. It is appreciated. Best, Alex
mrwolf14
mrwolf14 22nd Jan 2015 14:56 - 11 years ago

on Mr Funk by FreeRadical
Hi MrRadical,
Good track! I know that we must credit a lot to the bass loop from MrF... this is soooooo funky.
But we cannot ignore the wonderful job you have done here: everything works very well and the resulting track is really a mixture of the genius of two good musicians.
Very well done!
Ciao, Domenico

PS: I really like the "moving synth" phrases you build (e.g. 4:02)
mrwolf14
mrwolf14 22nd Jan 2015 14:39 - 11 years ago

on Elegy by ZankFrappa
Interesting... bizarre but interesting :-)
Actually this is not so "bizarre": very good sounds and good orchestration.
Have you used loops or synths?
Either way, good track, some cinematic moments (e.g. 1:00) and good change of mood throughout the song.
Ciao, Domenico
ZankFrappa
ZankFrappa replied 22nd Jan 2015 - 11 years ago
I have used aspirin after making this. Lots.
mrwolf14
mrwolf14 22nd Jan 2015 14:28 - 11 years ago

on A Song I Recorded with an iPad by BradoSanz
Hi MrEpicRecord,
Nice pop song.
I like the vocal part: good voice. Maybe not too "original" lines, but they work well.
The only part that was not "on par" according to me is the beginning of the rap section (1:54) ... a couple of words seem not to really fit the "flow".
Lovely piano arpeggio: simple yet effective. Liked.
The overall sound quality is definitely not bad.
So, this one shows some talent!
Ciao, Domenico
BradoSanz
BradoSanz replied 22nd Jan 2015 - 11 years ago
Thanks,mrwolf14!

Yeah, this was an early work that I did several years ago so my writing skills weren't sharpened and this was our first-ever attempt at rapping of some sort haha. It was kind of our "test song" that my brother and I made :P
mrwolf14
mrwolf14 22nd Jan 2015 14:19 - 11 years ago

on Honey Mango Heaven by StaticNomad
Hi MrNomad,
I will keep my comment short(er) on this one: lot of words already spent.

1:52 this section is the quintessence of MrNomad.
If I was ever going to join the "sound like somebody else" contest I would definitely choose this as my inspiration for a MrStaticNowolf song :-)
Now, while this sentence might not hold true for everyone, this is what I really like in your music: here we have a powerful chorused bass which builds some "liquid" lines, on a simple yet solid drumbeat, with the guitar as main actor, taking the liberty of "jumping" from beat to beat in a kind of self-indulging but very interesting manner.

That said, I of course liked a lot all the rest of the song.
Only exceptions may be:
- the synth around 8:30, a bit too "pop-ish" for this context, but we can consider it a "divertissement" and then it has all the right to stay here
- not a big fun of the laser-drome around 10:00 ... but the killer guitar/bass riff that follows makes me forgive everything.

The level of your compositions is very high.
Still waiting for the official announcement of a Nomad's album coming out.
I may even be willing to spend some of my hard earned money to buy it :-)
Take care,
Domenico
StaticNomad
StaticNomad replied 23rd Jan 2015 - 11 years ago
Hello.

1:52 may be quintessential me. That guitar riff was the foundation for the grooving here. Before I came up with it, I just had that chillout intro, which was a leftover from my drumless, romantic cinematic track Visible Aura.

That track had no drums so I decided the continuation of its leftover parts should get back to my usual drum-obsessive grooving mode.

" taking the liberty of "jumping" from beat to beat"

Yes, I like the movement of the guitar around the beat. It's mostly three finger-plucked chords (plus some other fills) but is all about how I move around the simple drum groove, with fat synth bass pumping away underneath.

No problem you didn't like the 8:30 trance lead. I had to include it as it really inspired me when working out where to take the second half of this. I loved the sound of the bass guitar with the lead trance and I realised I could make some sort of unusual version of delta blues trance, which I think I've done.

As it inspired me so much, I wasn't going to get rid of it. I've tried to control the filtering so that it doesn't sound too cheesy or "pop-ish". I think it's a surprise in the track and you know I like to do that.

Same goes for laser stuff around 10:00. I don't love that sound but think it takes the track somewhere interesting and new for me.

It's hard to keep coming up with new and interesting tracks (I'm trying to make a piece of music unlike any other almost every single time) so don't be surprised if I sometimes do slightly weird stuff. Or choose some sounds you don't like. That's got to happen sometime.

However, I try not to include something purely for intellectual reasons ie "Oh, it's not a very good sound but I was just trying to show I can also make a bit of trance". I try to only keep things I think sound good (I trust my musical opinion) or do something else with them if they just don't fit the track I've first tried them in. You could say that all sounds have their place, right?

" the killer guitar/bass riff that follows makes me forgive everything"

That's just one distorted bass guitar. Didn't need to double it up with a guitar part though the 1:52 clean guitar does return very near the end of the track.

I don't like that distorted bass riff as much as I first did. Not sure why.

Thanks for your continued support and praise. I try to keep the standard high though it's hard so best if I don't think about it too much as it can place too much pressure on me. Better to just free my mind and create with no expectations, for no purpose other than making something cool and unusual.

Yes, I've produced many albums in the past couple of years so much get round to turning them into real, publicly available albums. Lots of little things to go back and fix in various tracks plus the problem I always have of great mastering.

You'll get some Nomad albums some day, I promise. A heavy one, an electronic one, a blues one, a jazz/funk one and so on...
mrwolf14
mrwolf14 22nd Jan 2015 14:04 - 11 years ago

on Scalpel Chowder by Evisma
Hi MrEvan,
Good track (as usual).
I really like the bass work in the initial part: it has some "melodic" properties, which one would not expect from such a driving bass line. Good!
The tempo changes are "spectacular": this is one of the most difficult things to "plan on a DAW" and in this case they sound so natural. Very Good.
marimba... now this is original, but it works very well.
I am not so fond of some synth sounds (e.g. 2:20) but this is a matter of taste.
The final bass riff is really "powerful" ... I love when the drums go away and the bass gains the "front position" (2:26)
Drumkit sounds a bit "fake": using a stereo spread plugin may help (as per MrNomad suggestion...after he pointed this out I started using it more on my tracks and in some cases it really improves things, but your mileage may vary here...)
Again: GREAT TRACK!
Ciao, Domenico

PS: I would have downloaded it if download was allowed.
Evisma
Evisma replied 23rd Jan 2015 - 11 years ago
Mr. Domenico! How are you?

"The tempo changes are "spectacular": this is one of the most difficult things to "plan on a DAW" and in this case they sound so natural. Very Good."

Thank you. Like I mentioned to Mr. Nomad, I just let the part I had play out and when it went to silence, I played some palm-muted guitar hits and got the tempo(down 20bpm), cut and changed the Tempo Track, and was able to turn on the click and play from the verse into the chorus very naturally. Getting the tempo let me set the tempo track and then the click followed it. Kinda hard to explain the process because I wasn't really paying much attention at the time.

I will address the drums soon. Thank you again for your feedback and honesty. It is the most important aspect of this site for me. I appreciate you.

Take care

Evan
mrwolf14
mrwolf14 13th Jan 2015 12:36 - 11 years ago

on now what by MetalEd
Wow. You have a very interesting voice.
Good song: your vocal part is by far the best thing here. The loops are "brutal" and they work well together, but your voice is really outstanding.
Ciao, Domenico

PS: I read you are a Type-o-Negative fan. We have all their albums at home (my wife was a big fan)
I think that Black-no1 is probably the best goth-rock song ever written.
And I see some traces of Peter Steele's in your vocals.
You have the same way of building vocal melodies which contrast the music (and you work in the "deep" zone, the same as he used to do).
Now you have to learn to play bass ;-)

PPS: Of course I cannot forget to send a thought to one of the most inspired musicians our planet has ever seen.
Hopefully Peter found some peace.
mrwolf14
mrwolf14 13th Jan 2015 12:10 - 11 years ago

on luminous sunset by DanGoldstein
Nice warm sounds. I am always surprised (and pleased) to hear some real synth-sounds.
Little track that works very well with the picture.
Ciao, Domenico
DanGoldstein
DanGoldstein replied 25th Sep 2022 - 4 years ago
Regards. I sell on pond5.com these days if you have interest - Dan
mrwolf14
mrwolf14 9th Jan 2015 12:59 - 11 years ago

on What My Heart Needs--Instrumental by soundhound
This is a very well made "pop" track.
The bass is a bit in the background, but this fits well the song.
The work on the guitar chords is very convincing. Well done!
Keys are also a bit "in the back": they are more a carpet for the vocals than a real "solo melody". By the way, I like them a lot (good work from your friend Paul).
Drums are also good: maybe the open hi-hat is a bit overused in the section around 3:30 (but this is a minor thing).
The only possible improvement I see, you could work a bit on the levels of the different guitars, but this is something you will need to define once you have the vocal part done.
I think this song deserves a *good* vocal part.
Liked!
Ciao, Domenico
soundhound
soundhound replied 9th Jan 2015 - 11 years ago
Domenico...

To be truthful the mix is just a rough, at the time I was deep in other
projects...
And have sense remix it but thought, this was good enough for playing
on site...Why give the Master away...

Never the less I'm glad, you enjoyed the track...

Peace...TG.
mrwolf14
mrwolf14 9th Jan 2015 10:08 - 11 years ago

on Palotas Napsugar - Vegre latom mar a fenyt by aNytta
Lovely voice and nice guitar play.
Well done!
Ciao, Domenico

PS: I can't say much on the lyric :-)
mrwolf14
mrwolf14 9th Jan 2015 10:01 - 11 years ago

on Instant Reaction - Featuring - Sanna Hartfield by midiman007
Shame on me for having not listened to this before.
This is a wonderful song!
I really like the "scratch-like" build up on the keys (1:04 we hear it for the first time).
Nice work on the bass, simple but very effective.
Piano is outstanding... and of course the guitar is my favorite here.
You have a killer sound (I know...I have already told you several times...but I really like it)
Loved it...it's a pity that we cannot download it: you need to make an album of your music soon.
Ciao, Domenico
mrwolf14
mrwolf14 9th Jan 2015 09:47 - 11 years ago

on Stormy stepper by Prelude
I liked this track a lot.
My personal highlights:
- the powerful bass riff (seen first time 0:17)
- the overlay of instrumental (loop?) with the choir
- good use of the "harp" sound, to build an additional layer
What maybe could be improved:
- the sound used for the melody starting at 0:50
(I am not so fond of this very synthish sound, but this is completely a matter of taste...I am sure others will love it)

Overall: Great track! Liked it a lot.

You have a great talent ... but you probably already know it :-)
Ciao, Domenico
Prelude
Prelude replied 12th Jan 2015 - 11 years ago
Hello Domenico.

I respect and appreciate your feedback .
:)
Cindy
mrwolf14
mrwolf14 9th Jan 2015 09:32 - 11 years ago

on The Man You Use To Be - Feat Patricia Edwards by Musicante
What to say... this is simply perfect!
Loved everything: wonderful voice and wonderful musicians put together a very good song.
Special mention to the outstanding guitar work, but everything is really on the highest level.
Thanks for sharing it with us!
Ciao, Domenico
Musicante
Musicante replied 9th Jan 2015 - 11 years ago
Wow...Thanks so much for your kind words, Domenico.

I thank Franco (ferryterry) for the fine guitar work.

We all appreciate your time and comment.

Ciao,
M.
mrwolf14
mrwolf14 8th Jan 2015 15:47 - 11 years ago

on january by promenade2239
You had me at the word "suite" ... I like the idea of several movements that belong together. Typical concept for progressive rock but why not export it to other genres as well?

Coming to the music...
- The first part, the Ground Basse, works very well.
I like this syncopated keys "fighting" against the flowing bass. Only remark: I would raise a bit the level of the bass and if possible, use a more "grinding" sound.
- Second part, The Blues.
What can I say on the organ? really beautiful.
I like the sound and the light bluesy mood. Liked it.
Of course the piano is also good, but the organ is
my favorite (strange: I usually prefer the piano,
but I like too much what you played on the organ here).
Also the drum loop works very well.
- Third part, One Step Closer
Again, nice syncopated keys, but this time in an
almost "industrial" context (due to the drums).
Not so fond of the special fxs running in the background.
Again ... you know how to play these keys :-)
Liked a lot the solo going on.
Light and perfect for the atmosphere.
Special mention for the bass sound: I like it, few notes
but in the right place. Good.
- Fourth part, Nuclear Sunset
This is now something totally different.
Strange pads at the beginning (maybe the looping point
could use a better "cross fade" at 9:33)
Weird, but hey,
we are going for a nuclear sunset, arent we?
Around 10:30 the track really gets "chilly" with nice
pads and good work on the piano
(I would be curious to hear this piano line with an
echo... a huge echo set on 1/4 and lot of feedback...
not sure it would work, just curious).
Probably you could also make the ending a bit longer,
but I assume that at 12:07 you didn't want to extend it
too much.

So the final question: is this really a suite or are these 4 tracks assembled together?
Hard to say. I personally think they could work as single tracks but I see how you wanted to offer the listener a different experience by abutting them to form a single song.
And of course I also recognize common elements across the 4 parts: your keyboards playing could be seen as the fil-rouge that connects the various movement.
It's a bit feeble as link, but you are the boss and you decide what has to be done :-)

Final word: LIKED!

I am happy I decided to listen this.
Ciao, Domenico

PS: be ensured that the fact that you recently commented one of my tracks doesn't play any role in my post.
I am *always* looking for new music here, even if I have no "featured track" to promote. And I always try to be as honest as possible with my comments.
promenade2239
promenade2239 replied 8th Jan 2015 - 11 years ago
Thanks a lot Domenico for nice words. I appreciate that. Yes, there's a problem with the 'suite' label in here - honestly it is just my way to post more of my current work on looperman. Agreed, the tracks are different (and the last one stands out for sure). I think I have uploaded one better and much more consistent suite some time ago. The pieces were made almost in one take and shared the same sound image. Here it is just a compilation of my current work from last 2 weeks. Basically looperman it is a nice place for posting single tracks not the full albums.

I agree that the first 3 songs are quite similar combining the e piano playing with ezdrummer grooves. Nuclear song is based on the Am7FM7 progression from midisparkss snippet. I do not make any so called illustrative music and that nuclear title is from midisparks as well. I think I managed to blend loops much better and quite smoothly on my other tracks. Here I was looking for a proper chord progression from the midisparks audio so it is just a weird combination of an ambient and some strange jazzy piano chillout.
Actually Ive made already a song adding delay effect to the piano line, I know it may sound quite chilled or just interesting when played in a real time even. This is some nice concept.

I am happy you had a chance to listen to my current work. I enjoyed your track as well.
Thanks again for such a nice and detailed review! All the best to you, Alex
mrwolf14
mrwolf14 8th Jan 2015 15:21 - 11 years ago

on I m Lost by Darkreine
What a nice surprise to see a new track from our Dark Lion!
And a superb song!
I already said it some time ago, your voice is warm and well suited for these sad melodies. Liked it a lot.
Kudos to Megapaul for the gtr solo: perfectly fitting the mood!
And as usual, the Darkreine touch in the mixing/production is a guarantee for good taste.
An instant classic!
Ciao, Domenico
Darkreine
Darkreine replied 8th Jan 2015 - 11 years ago
Ah thank you Domeinco, you've always been so kind to me. Congratulations on your new family, you must be over the moon!!

Kenny
mrwolf14
mrwolf14 5th Jan 2015 16:14 - 11 years ago

on Woodoo Child by Nightingale
Great trippy song. Enjoyed every second of it: cool vocal part with one of the "simplest yet greatest" psy-sensual beats here on the looperman.
Great work Nightingale!
Ciao, Domenico

PS: thanks to MrValve for pointing this in MrNomad's forum's thread.
Nightingale
Nightingale replied 6th Jan 2015 - 11 years ago
Thank you very much Domenico.
Great to hear it from you.

The best.
mrwolf14
mrwolf14 5th Jan 2015 15:46 - 11 years ago

on A Little Patience by JohnnyHunter
what a light and delicate piece of music.
Liked it a lot.
Thanks to GramoChopin for pointing this out in MrNomad's forum's thread.
mrwolf14
mrwolf14 5th Jan 2015 15:35 - 11 years ago

on Coffee at Angeliques by DrvanLansberg
Very smooth and chilly.
Enjoyed it: my personal highlight are the guitars, the jazz one (~1:45) and the more funky rhythm one that follows (~2:25) and opens a very interesting more "complex" section of the track.
The synth-bass sound is "on-spot".
Well done!
Ciao, Domenico

PS: big thanks to MrNomad for pointing this out in his forum thread!
DrvanLansberg
DrvanLansberg replied 5th Jan 2015 - 11 years ago
Hi Domenico,

Many thanks for taking the time to check out the track and your compliments. Actually, most credits go to the "real" musicians like Franco Quadroni and Slap Johnson. Without the solo´s it would be just another little chill out track. So you can imagine how happy Looperman makes me all the time :-).

The bass sound was quite a puzzle to be honest. I got some feedback on the first try and that really helpd me in creating the perfect sound to lead this track.

And yes, many thanks to Nomad for creating the extra platform and to Promenade for listing my track!

Best, Doc
mrwolf14
mrwolf14 5th Jan 2015 15:21 - 11 years ago

on After Midnight by Pillow
Liked the energy in this simple (yet not boring) track.
Good choice of sounds and well mixed.
The bass line is a bit "obsessive" with the two notes repeated over-and-over-again, but this is not a bad thing: it makes the song "darker" and I think this was your intention.
Beautiful trumpet solo.
Overall, I song I liked.
Ciao, Domenico

PS: I have to thank MrNomad for pointing me to this little gem.
Pillow
Pillow replied 12th Jan 2015 - 11 years ago
Thank you for listening and commenting on this track! I think it sums up nicely what this song is all about and it also confirms my opinion that sometimes less is just more. I’m glad you liked it. Thx und Servus
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