mrwolf14

Wonderful song! The voice of Bonnie is a perfect match for your "easy jazz" style.
Kudos to Franco for the guitar work: amazing! Subtle but very refined.
And Scott on the drums is a guarantee. Loved the fills and the fact they never clashed with the vocal line. Good!
Enjoyed your tune guys!
Ciao, Domenico

I have to use an adjective I never used before... sublime!
This song is simple and straight at the heart: pop of the finest.
No doubt that our friend Soap is a very talented songwriter and his composition works perfectly with your voice Carole.
I am delighted.
And I am really looking forward for your next collaboration.
Ciao, Domenico

PS: I think you should follow Steve's advice and work a bit on the "fine-tuning" of the mix (you have already a very good starting point). He already gave you a couple of good hints (and the man knows the game).

Liked!
Ciao, Domenico

Agree with DJMurderer: everything is well placed, piano and bass are really outstanding.
Not much you have to change hear ... we just hope that one of the talented singers here will help you with this.
(I know that we have a very gifted french singer among us, but don't you feel a bit limiting to have your message directed to french speaking persons only?)
Ciao, Domenico

This is great man!
You have so many good elements here. Love the initial guitar riff (I would like to have it doubled by the bass in the break around 1:00 ...I can really hear it in my head).
The brasses are very well done. The rhythm guitar is a classic but you never go wrong with classic.
Really loved this small piece of music.
Ciao, Domenico

Wonderful atmosphere. And full of subtle little things that keep things moving (like the lovely "ReBirth" bass around 2:00 ... simply loved it)
And of course, I love the way you incorporated the speech: I think the "dreamy" waves of this song are a good background for these words.
Definitely a good song.

Interesting track.
You are right, we can hear some of the drum loops "skips" but that's not a problem.

The main bass riff is very catchy. Good!
I think you need to be careful when adding a guitar on top of it: don't let the guitar hide this very nice groove.

And please, in case you add/change anything, post the new version: I would be interested in hearing how this song develops.
Ciao, Domenico

Simple and wonderful: I love the sound of the guitar (thanks to 12Strings for sharing the details of his setup with us) and the vocal part is very "well done".
Nothing to say: very controlled singing and clear tone.
I don't know the original, so I cannot say anything on that point, but I can say that like what I hear!
Good job!
Ciao, Domenico

What a wonderful track Carole!
Perfect! Only one remark: please make more of these!
I think this relaxed and chilly atmosphere is a perfect environment for your voice to fly.
I loved this track. Really.
Take care, Domenico

Wow! This felt like time travelling... the spirit of the 70s is all around this track.
I liked everything. Probably it could work well with a good vocal part.
The solo-guitar parts are perfect: not a single rough edge. Good!
The rhythmic part is solid and pleasant. I liked the chord progression.
Overall, a really good song.
Ciao, Domenico

Great track Spiv!
I think the comparison to Talking-Heads is more due to the "experimental nature" of the track rather than a real musical affinity (I agree with you, they used to be very good but I never heard something like this from them).

The vocals are good: I like the way you "ignore" the tempo and the tuning. And I am not joking: this song conveys a sense or urgency, it's like your voice desperately needs to say something and you don't have time to care of what's around you.
It's like you have to follow your "intention" and you have no time for "reading the signs" which brings you to "cross the line".
I have to say it: this is brilliant!
You are a f***g genius!
Could this song be improved?
Yes maybe you could polish something here and there, but I simply *LOVE* this track as it is.
Thanks for sharing it with us.
Take care, Domenico

Wonderful. The drum is very funky and works definitely well (fits your description, the love of a mother... even more: a grandmother :-)
Beside the outstanding drums, the bass is perfect: short sentences, but full of wisdom.
An instant classic.
Loved.
Ciao, Domenico

Very interesting. I like a lot the idea of the hunting voice panning from one side to the other (I am listening with headphones).
I think you have some "distortion" on the voice (I know that you have added a "chopped-white-noise" sound in background, but I think you have some additional clipping in the vocal track).
The distorted guitar is a nice touch: well done!
Enjoyed this little gem.
Thanks.
Ciao, Domenico

Wonderful Song. I have to repeat myself: the vocals from Carole are simply wonderful and you have used them in a beautiful way. Maybe it could have been interesting to hear a more "complex" text but repeating the bits you have worked pretty well.
The drums are perfect: love the fill at 2:05
The overall drum sound is incredibly tight and "professional".
Kudos to Franco as well: his guitar work is very balanced and subtle. Exactly what the song needed.
The arrangement deserves some good notes as well. Maybe some more variations on the keyboard pattern could help, but it's a minor thing.
In one word: superb!
Ciao, Domenico

The music is funky and well arranged. Like the bass and guitar work. Clean and straight to the target. Good.

The vocals are outstanding. Very good.

The mix can be improved I think: sometime it is a bit "thin". I wouldn't change anything on the vocals, but the rhythm section needs some sonic-reinforcement.

Overall: a superb track!
Thanks.
Ciao, Domenico

Really love the vocal part. Beautiful. Simply Beautiful!
I am not so fond of the "weird-fx" but the rest is really perfect. I also liked the reverse-voice. Nice touch.
Ciao, Domenico

The song is good, even if it sounds like a 4 minute intro.
It could work very well as first song of an album.
Ciao, Domenico

Very "professional". Good work.
It deserves to be used in a movie...and thanks toBehnam we already have the storyboard...we just need a producer willing to put some money in it :-)
Ciao, Domenico

I see that you are following MrNomad's comments, so you are in good hands
Anyhow,I will still add my two cents: intro is perfect.
The quick part does not sound as powerful as it should, but honestly I think it is a matter of mix: you have all the elements you need but the powerful ones are not loud enough.

Keep on the good work: we have some really interesting stuff here.
Ciao, Domenico

PS have you thought of a vocal part for this song?
Don't know why but I could imagine something like Marilyn Manson going on....

You have definitely an interesting voice.
Good. Looking forward to hearing more from you.
Ciao, Domenico

Very interesting track, professionally produced.
The mix is very well balanced and the arrangement is good.
I am not a dance music expert, but I think your product could compete with a lot of the "big" releases.
Good work!
Ciao, Domenico

Soft, very chilly, warm. I felt really embraced by your music.
Good song.
Domenico

It took me 26 seconds to like this song.
You are a genius!
Brilliant use of the vocals, very good mix, good song.
Looking for more (and I usually don't listen to dance music...)
Domenico

Great song evisma! Enjoyed every bit of it.
I like the section at 2:52, good darkish bass progression with a good interaction with guitars. Liked.
My favorite moment is the final section, starting around 4:16. Again good bass work and a very interesting piano section.
Well done!
Ciao, Domenico

Hi Kenny!
Really good energetic dance track!
As usual, I really like the way you choose your sounds.
The "fragmented" sound that kicks in around 1:30 is really wonderful: I know it is only a sound, but it is so "unrelated" to the mood of the rest of the song that it creates a beautiful contrast.
Liked it!
Ciao, Domenico