silverman

Hi Joe not seen you around for a while.
To the English ear especially one who doesn't understand German there are two effects;
One is the language sounds very harsh.
Two it sounds fantastic to music especially modern day electronic music.
You have the perfect voice for modern music.

I think you'll find it very difficult to put vocals on this with the almost endless choir and suynth voices that are there.
Just my opinion.
Based on the fact I find it very hard to put vocals in busy tunes.

The drums don't work for me or the choir being endless.
Needs some breaks.
Needs mastering.

Very very cool on this warm stuffy night with my glass of Irish in hand with crushed ice ....

At 0.8 is a big production entrance.
The bad news with entering like that is the rest of the track might sound a little limp in comparrison.
This didn't.
This just steamrollered along with great energy.
Vocals sound spot on.
The whole mix sounds great.
Great track.
The ending though sounds like you had a power cut!

Sounds nothing like Yello but for some reason it reminds of Yello.
I've tried removing that experience but it just won't go away.
By the way I loved Yello in their time.
Sounds very neatly put together from here.

https://www.songtradr.com/user is where people and organisations are looking to purchase music for pop film games ads and so on.
Just had another listen to this and it's near perfect.

I think this has great potential.
Reminds me of the early 80's.
Not to keen on the percussion and crackles near the end.

Starts so sad.
Then hope appears and light too the future can ... can be ... can't it?
I like it but don't like the volume of that drum.
It pushes the guitar and organ to far back.
Wouldn't be that loud in real life.
Not sure it's even the right drum but these things are a matter of taste.
It's almost hymn like which is good.
I can picture a small church in a bleak place.

If you changed it then I need to listen again. I don't always comment straight away because I'm to knackered to do more than listen so you've obviously changed it since my post.

I agree with Cru.
The side chaining is clawing at the voice.
Otherwise a great track that could have commercial possibilities.

Well done clean sounding piece.
The rappers on here will be better able to advise about lyrics

Needs a rapper and there's a few good ones on here.

Nice tune needs a bit more on the mastering.

This could sound good if everything wasn't playing at the same volume levels and vying for the same spaces.

Wow wow worst thing I ever heard on here!

I think you should seriously be looking at this place ..... https://www.songtradr.com/user

Extremely well done!
My only complaint so far ... I'm going in for a second listen in a moment ... is the synth that comes in as a perfectly nice surprise at 0.56 goes out again at 1.12 in a not quite right way. Leaves me hanging.
It goes out at the wrong point or too quickly or both.
I think I would have faded that out and maybe even experiment with it still having a quiet but still fading presence beyond the 1.12 mark now far behind the vocal.
Had a second sitting and wow.
This is very well done.
Love the ending.
For the life of me I can't get vocals samples in anything I do.
I've tried and tried but nope.
But you have put the vocals in so well I'm inspired to try yet again.
You have given me ideas.
Watch this space.
Great work.

Yes you should try and finish the track
Yes you can sing.
Singing hopefully still isn't only acceptable from cute looking boys and girls with nice twee voices.
Bob Dylan can't sing to save his life yet he's possibly the most successful singer in the last hundred years or one of them.
Some very successful singers who didn't fit the cute voice bit ..... Lou Reed.
Tom Waits.
Johnny Cash.
Willie Nelson.
You can sing Gip.
Plenty of room for you.
I on the other hand can't.
It sounds pretty good now up the game a little with some energy some despair some sorrow some hope some wow factor bollox .... come on boy and belt it out.
You doing okay.

Sounds cool.
Enjoyable tune.

Sorry about that.
I'm struggling with a free version of Ableton that came with my keyboard at the present time and boy I'm finding it complicated. Best I'm managing so far is making loops on it with my MIDI keyboard.

The horns at 127 sound a little loud.
Well done putting this together.
I think I have the same loops sitting idle because I just can never stitch together this kind of stuff.

Oh Mod so much potential and you left it!
Very cinematic indeed.
Great magical sound.

Nice synths.
Nice solid beat but not harsh .... has a softness in its solidity that goes well with the synths.
Nice track mod.