1.23 seems to jump 2.26 another jump maybe but over all this is a very emotional deep cutting track as it should be considering the subject matter.
If this is personal to you I hope you're recovering.
There is a raw cold bleakness to this piece which is absolutely perfect.
Cold and very much alone and hurting.
Thank you so much for your comment. I am not sure about the jump... I will have to give it another listen. As to the lyrics, yes, this was written from my personal experience. It was a long time ago, however, and I am fully recovered with a husband who truly believes I'm the hottest thing walking. The guy from the song is still a single father who lies to everyone. I think I won in the long run. ^_^ I like using personal experiences when I write because I feel like it bleeds through into your song if you don't know what you're writing or singing about. ^_^
I knew this took me back somewhere I've been before ..... Emerson Lake and Palmer!
You might be to young to have heard of them.
I think my fave track by them would be lucky man which has a synth ending that blew us all away at the time. Probably sounds a little old hat now.
Hey Silverman. We used to get stoned after school and play air guitar (and saxophone for that matter) to Lucky Man and other EL&P songs. I'm from that day. Thanks for stopping by. Dan
It's a great production but sounds a little weedy.
That of course can be down to taste and mood.
I'd be putting some base in there and more percussion.
Is that you on vocals?
That's a seriously good voice!
Who's the female too?
sounds pretty good to me.
Vocals could do with lifting or shifting a little.
Hi Silverman.
Thanks for the listen and comment.
Thanks for your kind words regarding the vocals aswell. I played around with a plugin yesterday so the female is me too.
I'll be working onwards with the vocals later today!
This is a very atmospheric track indeed.
I love the almost doesn't make it lazy beats in this.
To be honest I don't get the halloween connection.
Comes across to me as a very aggressive sci fi track.
A go get 'em we're armed and coming for blood .... blood?
Maybe there is a connection after all!
That beat and rhythm are aggressive whilst at the same time give a couldn't care less attitude we're coming whatever.
Great track ... had to listen twice and I suspect I'll be listening some more.
I love spotting a Spivkurl!
I never know what to expect.
I read the description and still never know what to expect.
I press play and .... away we go!
Always a journey of some kind to some place and this time I've time travelled to late 70's early eighties Manchester North West England to the Hacienda club.
This for me is all drugs and guns and alcohol and police raids.
Amphetamine fuelled nights!
Absolutely brilliant.
Can't fault this powerful creation.
I just know you were bouncing about while making this and not wanting the ride to end!
A fave for sure.
"I love spotting a Spivkurl" - I wonder if that's how the locals feel when they are driving and see me pop out of a forest out of nowhere. Doubt it!
I do love the feeling of not knowing what to expect, which adds to the challenge of living life in a city. I used to know what to expect around here, and it was a comfort. Now I know what to expect, and it's a load of bollocks. So I change my perception by expecting sniper fire or a nuclear detonation... sad but true.
The Manchester scene was definitely a big influence on me, especially early on. Joy Division, New Order, Bee Gees all had their place in my heart... in reverse chronological order. Never been too into guns, since if I were to kill I would go all out, Bonnie and Clyde style... good reason not to get started. I've had my love affairs with alcohol (still do) and amphetamine (in the past).
I am a firm believer that "we are all on drugs all the time." Food is either drugs or medicine (drugs). Oxygen gets you high. The water we drink is inundated with various chemical substances, most often including steroids, cocaine, and pharmas. If you eat meat or dairy, then those can have some wild stuff interlaced, most recently ketamine. So, hey, if someone doesn't like drugs, it's probably time to go be a tibetan monk or something.
I'm happy you enjoyed the unusual take on trance. There were points where I was bouncing about and not wanting the ride to end. At a point, when working on songs of this length, it gets a bit taxing. Hearing it all the way through over and over again eats up time like almost nothing else!
Thank you for listening and leaving your consistently entertaining comments!
Trip Hop?
I have no idea how you young people define these things.
Being an old fart this to me is electronic music and very very good electronic music.
Can't fault it.
Hahaha
Yeah your right this is music !
And thx to called me "young people" i appreciate that
I picked trip hop only because it's a slow tempo and get lot's of atmosphere stuff
You've done a great job with Mr.Shammis vocals.
I'm familiar with his stuff and have tried touse his lyrics but never been happy with the reults so they've been binned.
You've insppired me!
Might give it another crack having heard this.
Great work.
Hi silverman,
thank you for your post! Well.....and thank you also for your inspiring word´s ;)
I like to work with Mr. Shammis vocals...it´s always a bit of a holiday-feeling listening to him :)
So, get your stuff ready and give me a pm when your songs ready, would like to check it out!
Keep on going man!
Kraftwerk definitely made the German voice THE voice for electronic music.
This is superb.
My wife came in and said it's years since we listened to Kraftwerk but I don't remember this one!
I really hope you're going to release an album one day Joe I'm sure it would sell well over here.
What a gentle comment. I didn't had this Kraftwerk connection in mind but after your comment i listen to the track again and your wife could be right. Maybe i listen to long to too much Kraftwerk music when i was a young boy.
If there is anyone around who wants to make an album with me and try to sell it, in GB or anywhere else, just call me.
Thanks for your friendly words Mr Silverman
I wish you both all the best
Wow I just watched you old dudes on the tube and you are rocking!
The standard of stuff on here is so high!
Me I'm just an old fart (64) who messes about as a hobby and I know I'm never going to reach such dizzy hights.
Thanks for the kind words Silverman.
We are hobbyists as well and playing music is fun: that's the main purpose of it!
So, keep rocking man!
Ciao, Domenico
Here's one that is installed here in our city... The carillon's largest bell weighs four tons! The video on this page is made featuring the previous musician who played them. Love and I went and heard the debut concert of the new player earlier this year.
on I wish I could ft eSoreni by Pwnihof
Great atmosphere great mood great presence great sound choice well put together.
A really nice experience.
Faved.
on Without You Produced by Adamack of Shadowville by ThatGirlKVR
If this is personal to you I hope you're recovering.
There is a raw cold bleakness to this piece which is absolutely perfect.
Cold and very much alone and hurting.
on Brujita Halloween with Mindhiest by DanGoldstein
You might be to young to have heard of them.
I think my fave track by them would be lucky man which has a synth ending that blew us all away at the time. Probably sounds a little old hat now.
on GHETTO STORY by Mrshammi
Mr Shammi is very popular right now and it's no wonder
on NEON DRIVE by jaythechance
That of course can be down to taste and mood.
I'd be putting some base in there and more percussion.
I appreciate the feedback on the track. You make some good points and I feel like it's never too late to go back and improve on things.
on Bliss by neuromancer56
Sounds great but I do have a problem with the repetition.
Doesn't belong in this kind of music.
on Angel of the North by Nodog
My only criticism is the high synth plays right through without a break.
on Kruusa by Kruus
That's a seriously good voice!
Who's the female too?
sounds pretty good to me.
Vocals could do with lifting or shifting a little.
Thanks for the listen and comment.
Thanks for your kind words regarding the vocals aswell. I played around with a plugin yesterday so the female is me too.
I'll be working onwards with the vocals later today!
on My baby may by avasuzanne
on Inspector Gaget Halloween by Dirtzilla
That was fun.
That was well done.
Great atmosphere.
Dirtzilla
on Ocean- epic psy trance by SLanaB
Nice and atmospheric.
Nice and moody.
Nicely put together.
Nice.
on Mortimus by crucethus
I love the almost doesn't make it lazy beats in this.
To be honest I don't get the halloween connection.
Comes across to me as a very aggressive sci fi track.
A go get 'em we're armed and coming for blood .... blood?
Maybe there is a connection after all!
That beat and rhythm are aggressive whilst at the same time give a couldn't care less attitude we're coming whatever.
Great track ... had to listen twice and I suspect I'll be listening some more.
Steve
on Doing A Thing Will by Spivkurl
I never know what to expect.
I read the description and still never know what to expect.
I press play and .... away we go!
Always a journey of some kind to some place and this time I've time travelled to late 70's early eighties Manchester North West England to the Hacienda club.
This for me is all drugs and guns and alcohol and police raids.
Amphetamine fuelled nights!
Absolutely brilliant.
Can't fault this powerful creation.
I just know you were bouncing about while making this and not wanting the ride to end!
A fave for sure.
I do love the feeling of not knowing what to expect, which adds to the challenge of living life in a city. I used to know what to expect around here, and it was a comfort. Now I know what to expect, and it's a load of bollocks. So I change my perception by expecting sniper fire or a nuclear detonation... sad but true.
The Manchester scene was definitely a big influence on me, especially early on. Joy Division, New Order, Bee Gees all had their place in my heart... in reverse chronological order. Never been too into guns, since if I were to kill I would go all out, Bonnie and Clyde style... good reason not to get started. I've had my love affairs with alcohol (still do) and amphetamine (in the past).
I am a firm believer that "we are all on drugs all the time." Food is either drugs or medicine (drugs). Oxygen gets you high. The water we drink is inundated with various chemical substances, most often including steroids, cocaine, and pharmas. If you eat meat or dairy, then those can have some wild stuff interlaced, most recently ketamine. So, hey, if someone doesn't like drugs, it's probably time to go be a tibetan monk or something.
I'm happy you enjoyed the unusual take on trance. There were points where I was bouncing about and not wanting the ride to end. At a point, when working on songs of this length, it gets a bit taxing. Hearing it all the way through over and over again eats up time like almost nothing else!
Thank you for listening and leaving your consistently entertaining comments!
on Living Lightly by Indieground
I have no idea how you young people define these things.
Being an old fart this to me is electronic music and very very good electronic music.
Can't fault it.
Yeah your right this is music !
And thx to called me "young people" i appreciate that
I picked trip hop only because it's a slow tempo and get lot's of atmosphere stuff
on FLY featuring Mr Shammi by WhisperWisba by WhisperWisba
I'm familiar with his stuff and have tried touse his lyrics but never been happy with the reults so they've been binned.
You've insppired me!
Might give it another crack having heard this.
Great work.
thank you for your post! Well.....and thank you also for your inspiring word´s ;)
I like to work with Mr. Shammis vocals...it´s always a bit of a holiday-feeling listening to him :)
So, get your stuff ready and give me a pm when your songs ready, would like to check it out!
Keep on going man!
on Jeden Tag - version 2017 by joecramer
This is superb.
My wife came in and said it's years since we listened to Kraftwerk but I don't remember this one!
I really hope you're going to release an album one day Joe I'm sure it would sell well over here.
If there is anyone around who wants to make an album with me and try to sell it, in GB or anywhere else, just call me.
Thanks for your friendly words Mr Silverman
I wish you both all the best
stay tuned
joe
on SupErNovA by BLEEP
Faved it a couple of days ago but wasn't up to leaving a comment.
Very smooth and moody.
Really glad to see you back again here ;)
I let a comment on your last track too (really brilliant song)
Bleep
on Silence - Live from the rehearsal room by mrwolf14
The standard of stuff on here is so high!
Me I'm just an old fart (64) who messes about as a hobby and I know I'm never going to reach such dizzy hights.
We are hobbyists as well and playing music is fun: that's the main purpose of it!
So, keep rocking man!
Ciao, Domenico
on Fly preview by Kargalar
You broke the thingy up top!
Hehe, thanks my friend !
on The End by TrippyHippyCrew
I actually faved this a few days ago.
on Ben Phipps Mr Mrs Feat Lizzy Land STK REMIX by NateJMusic
on Ben Phipps Mr Mrs Feat Lizzy Land STK REMIX by NateJMusic
Wow!
Superb stuff.
on Risin Up by Spivkurl
http://sharing.mayoclinic.org/2010/08/10/hearing-bells-at-mayo-clinic-in-rochester-its-the-carillon/
We hear this everyday from our house.
on Lazor Fist by thelastmonte
I think it could be fattened up a little with some base or a drone.
It's a bit thin and stringy at the moment.
on One Night by Enzotic
You're on the verge of cinematic or documentary here.