I had to pop back to listen some more to this.
This track marks you out as A producer.
This is just so pro.
Fantastic moody piece.
I want to fave it again but I'm only allowed the one.
Hope you're coping with the weather.
I'm snowed in and don't mind at all especially when I can pop in here and listen to productions of this quality.
May be we all have the same feeling when we finished a track: the moment when you post it and you think: is it enough good? does it need more work?
And the comments arrive, the smile too (in this present case)
I'm so much relieved by reading your compliments! I shall have been hardly bothered to massacre a so beautiful voice and I saw your comments as the real delivery thus thank you, thank you and thank you again! i spent many hours on this track.
Lol... I know right me too. I use logic and just use there some of their canned master settings. I know that mixing and mastering your self to get the right sound is better but I am not skilled on that front. So that is why I just hit the logic pro x "master pop wide" and it makes things sound a little better.
I really enjoyed this but then I read the comment ... yeah spent ages on this about four hours.
I'm doing something very wrong as I spen days doing my hobby stuff.
Very few tracks apart from the very obvious ones have taken les than day with maybe a total of twenty thirty hours.
I'm going to start timing the actual hours because so many of you seem to jus niot really good tunes out on an afternoon!
I want to know where I'm going wrong.
I really like this.
I can imagine my favourite artist of all time (Tom Waits) doing this.
Sounds excellent.
The only bit I'm not keen on is the tantrum toward the end ... I've lost nothing!Nothing nothing nothing!
Doesn't suit the very emotional and masculine vibe.
Thank you, silverman. Please tell Mr. Tom to give me a call, he can sing it all day if he wants. I will consider that tantrum at the end and probably give that part another go for a little different vibe there. I appreciate the feedback a lot. Thank you!
Absolutely fabulous!
As usual the genre thing is pretty much meaningless to me.
This could be cinematic.
Electronic Gemray late 70's.
The vocalist and the music were made for each other.
Fantastic job on this Bleep.
Dieter Meier and Boris Blank come to mind here.
I think you may have changed the bpm from your usual style and that's what is doing it?
Fantastic in every way.
The sounds are brilliant and very well put together.
Your voice as always is one of the main instruments.
You need to be puttin an album together and hoiking it around the distributers I'm convinced you'll sell very many.
Superb and thank you for the pleasure.
Hello Mr. Silverman :)
I am pleased that you like this song so much. I can only thank you for all the friendly words. And since you have repeatedly pointed out that I should sell my things, I have taken that in attack.
My plan for 2018 is finally to record all the tracks and to save it sensibly. Both versions, really dry and wet. So far, somehow, some tracks/steems/wavs have always disappeared into nirvana. So I could not really bring most of my tracks to the stage as - music in cd quality. So now the ultimate attempt for 2018.
And if the plan works out this time (the same plan already existed earlier) then there is a good chance to get a "real" Joe Cramer CD at the end of the year
Not sure I agree with the add base comments.
Simply because you're in danger of turning it into just another tune.
As it is it sounds to me like a haunted fairground machine.
There's a feeling to this beyond what it sounds like to the ear.
The feeling is spooky interesting lonely deep.
I think you could lose that and turn it into just another wee tune.
Wow!
I have never heard or felt anything quite like this.
This has to have commercial possibilities in the music tv film world.
Absolutely fantastic experience.
My one criticism is this could go on for a lot longer.
Mate..the whole EP is brilliant...My co producer Defay and I have studying African Culture...and we are working on tons of projects with based on that culture....the EP contains 9 tracks..all good fun and cultural.
Thanks Silve. To tell the truth I really didn't put that much effort into this. I ran across eviltwinzedds forum post with a request for some guitar over his loop. I liked the loop so I took a few minutes and recorded a few runs. I figured he was wanting it to use with his own project track that would utilize the loop at some point. Anyhow, glad you like it.
Hello Jack,
Thank you very much for your feedback mate.
Well Jack, someone has to hold the fort until you’re ready mate.
I hope you’re keeping well.
Jamid
Enjoyable driving piece.
Driving as in nighttime car run along the coast.
Very well put together.
There's a minimalist approach here that gives it great depth.
Really enjoyed that.
Very nice piece of music.
Crap ending but I think you know that and will be polishing it off.
Great piece though.
Very moody and deep.
A little mysterious.
Interesting stuff.
Don't think I've heard anything on here quite like it.
Couldn't make out the lyrics could be my ears.
But most songs since about 1970 couldn't make iout the lyrics.
You're right it's not done yet.
Be sure to let us know when it is because it's a great little number this.
I know nothing about what makes a tune a trap tune.
I cannot really give any technical advice.
What I can say is this is a really interesting piece and I easily listened to the track.
I'm going to listen again.
To me it's just music and this sound like damn good music from here.
Thanks a lot for nice words silverman, since I'm a fan of very diverse music genres other stuff i might upload won't necessarily be electroswing, but hopefully will be even better.
This is really good.
So you used technology to hide the realit of your voice.
It worked a treat.
I use technology to help with every moment of a production with no shame!
You are quite right, Silverman. No shame in using the tools we have available to us. Still, I'd love to find some decent vocalists. I've got tracks that need English singers (or Welsh!), German, French, and Spanish. I have a great love for traditional Scottish music, but haven't written anything like that at all. But, am a big fan of Paolo Nutini and he's a Scot. Does that count?
on Melancholy Pattern ft Esoreni by BLEEP
This track marks you out as A producer.
This is just so pro.
Fantastic moody piece.
I want to fave it again but I'm only allowed the one.
Hope you're coping with the weather.
I'm snowed in and don't mind at all especially when I can pop in here and listen to productions of this quality.
May be we all have the same feeling when we finished a track: the moment when you post it and you think: is it enough good? does it need more work?
And the comments arrive, the smile too (in this present case)
I'm so much relieved by reading your compliments! I shall have been hardly bothered to massacre a so beautiful voice and I saw your comments as the real delivery thus thank you, thank you and thank you again! i spent many hours on this track.
Friendly
Bleep
on I Dont Mind If I Do by ronabo
on I Dont Mind If I Do by ronabo
I'm doing something very wrong as I spen days doing my hobby stuff.
Very few tracks apart from the very obvious ones have taken les than day with maybe a total of twenty thirty hours.
I'm going to start timing the actual hours because so many of you seem to jus niot really good tunes out on an afternoon!
I want to know where I'm going wrong.
on NOTHING by CitizenMofo
I can imagine my favourite artist of all time (Tom Waits) doing this.
Sounds excellent.
The only bit I'm not keen on is the tantrum toward the end ... I've lost nothing!Nothing nothing nothing!
Doesn't suit the very emotional and masculine vibe.
on Melancholy Pattern ft Esoreni by BLEEP
As usual the genre thing is pretty much meaningless to me.
This could be cinematic.
Electronic Gemray late 70's.
The vocalist and the music were made for each other.
Fantastic job on this Bleep.
great to read you! always appreciate to have a feedback from you :)
TY
Friendly
bleep :)
on For Glenda by Orlando51
Superb.
It needs a film.
Thanks alot dear friend____Orlando
on halt mich - hold me by joecramer
I think you may have changed the bpm from your usual style and that's what is doing it?
Fantastic in every way.
The sounds are brilliant and very well put together.
Your voice as always is one of the main instruments.
You need to be puttin an album together and hoiking it around the distributers I'm convinced you'll sell very many.
Superb and thank you for the pleasure.
I am pleased that you like this song so much. I can only thank you for all the friendly words. And since you have repeatedly pointed out that I should sell my things, I have taken that in attack.
My plan for 2018 is finally to record all the tracks and to save it sensibly. Both versions, really dry and wet. So far, somehow, some tracks/steems/wavs have always disappeared into nirvana. So I could not really bring most of my tracks to the stage as - music in cd quality. So now the ultimate attempt for 2018.
And if the plan works out this time (the same plan already existed earlier) then there is a good chance to get a "real" Joe Cramer CD at the end of the year
stay tuned
joe
on Heavily Medicated by neuromancer56
Not quite dark.
Has a lot of visual quaity for me this one.
Belongs on the tv.
Very well put together.
on Jolly Dance by Ludwigbroo
This really is an uplifting piece amidst the gloom of the world.
Stuck i my head now. . ....
on Eudaimonia by EXANofficial
Simply because you're in danger of turning it into just another tune.
As it is it sounds to me like a haunted fairground machine.
There's a feeling to this beyond what it sounds like to the ear.
The feeling is spooky interesting lonely deep.
I think you could lose that and turn it into just another wee tune.
on Le Motel And DJ Arloph-Lukum by JCJMusic
I have never heard or felt anything quite like this.
This has to have commercial possibilities in the music tv film world.
Absolutely fantastic experience.
My one criticism is this could go on for a lot longer.
on JazZedd by Neomorpheus
Late night radio.
A scene from a film.
Very dreamy.
Beautifully put together.
on Infinity by DijamMusic
Nice and gentle with a tense edge.
I have none up at the moment just listening for now.
Thank you very much for your feedback mate.
Well Jack, someone has to hold the fort until you’re ready mate.
I hope you’re keeping well.
Jamid
on The LasT One by GoTyBeaTs
Hypnotic repetitive but never boring.
Keep on PLAY!!!
on Ride with me by MightyMemphis
Great sound.
A sound that had me in a tv cop series scene!
Thanks for the tie-in.
- Memphis
on Cool Geist by Nodog
Powerful yet gentle.
Excellently mixed.
on Consume Carbon by adamms
Driving as in nighttime car run along the coast.
Very well put together.
There's a minimalist approach here that gives it great depth.
on Vintage Prod by Escarcha Beatz and GoTy BeaTs by GoTyBeaTs
Very nice piece of music.
Crap ending but I think you know that and will be polishing it off.
Great piece though.
Very moody and deep.
A little mysterious.
on Waking World final version by sheensheep
Held my attention easily.
Sounds very well put together.
TV stuff this.
on M0SH P1T by kingmadi
Don't think I've heard anything on here quite like it.
Couldn't make out the lyrics could be my ears.
But most songs since about 1970 couldn't make iout the lyrics.
You're right it's not done yet.
Be sure to let us know when it is because it's a great little number this.
on Austinmusic Paul End- What It Was Like by paulend
You've put a lot of effort into this.
Lot of soul lot of emotion.
Your heart is in this.
Faved.
on Austinmusic Paul End- What It Was Like by paulend
I cannot really give any technical advice.
What I can say is this is a really interesting piece and I easily listened to the track.
I'm going to listen again.
To me it's just music and this sound like damn good music from here.
on I Remain King by Tfury1976
on WSKooper - To The Moon by Perko93
Has a live show feel to it.
You've mixed this top notch.
Sounds very professional to my ears.
Very enjoyable listen.
on Silent Whispers by EricMilligan
So you used technology to hide the realit of your voice.
It worked a treat.
I use technology to help with every moment of a production with no shame!