well dear Staticproject,Hi,and as U know I'm not expert in no genre and specially hardcore ,but i enjoyed this track of yours too much and it won't be false if I say this was best or one of the bests hardcore traX that i have listened so far .
best wishes.__Behnam
considered cinematic membranophonic line & thoughtfull composition . a serious cinematic track, I'm agreee with Domenico about timing it's a but lonG buT a worthy of greatest respects idea & good execution of that idea which convinces me to mark as Fav.best wishes .___Behnam
Carole it's great and worthy of greatest adoration and respects & for sure your love will love iT .I can say musicallY it's great to change center of tonality each 2 measure , & this graduallY would be known for your listener as a tarrent of your compositions ,and in fact as your self style and particulary according to loving 12tones system in music , I enjoy this tarrent of your composition .just in seconds @21'' when Franco's guitar loop is heared , U've mixed 2 guitar loops (both by Franco)which are sounding
a bit dissonance if U pay a good attention .for gaining that note(I can underestand U'd meanT that Tonic note to be played by guitar behind your meldy vocal)U can change the pitch of both loops to 2 differenT interval which don't sound dissonance buT give U that first note of that measure for your vocal .hope U'll underestand the waY I've told U.anyway We'll talk..take care.____Behnam
Hi Behnam :D
Well, I hope that beyond the poor quality of this thingy, he will listen with his heart .
You're perfectly right about Ferryterry's guitars . As I told Domenico, I didn't use the original tempo and I should have . My ears didn't hear that dissonance but I'm glad your experienced ones had and that you told me about it . I'll be more careful next time .
Thx a lot for your pointed advice and analysis, Sir . Much appreciated .
Take care,
xoxo
for sure as U know a better qualitY had shown your soothing playing more clear . but the same what is rightnow too is interesting,respectable & cool.best wishes,__Behnam
Super Thanks Benham! I appreciate your time to comment and I agree my recording could be better. Because of the environment I spueeze it in where I can and make do with what time and ingenuital arrangements I can create to get a sound of something I like. I'm stubborn and lack certain characteristics that may be considered normal. Life is Brutal! Sometimes...
& again I forgot to say , Mina maybe it can be better if U upload it as a ethnic track , U're playing an acoustic traditional instrument and that's not what is called Classical in music .althought in the end ,never mind worX better than anything about the genres in music.
Mina sorry if I'm discovering this newone a bit late .
buT U can be sure if like my good & lovely friend Jowe whom I see U haven't answered her still , U want to answer me later than 2 day , then U know I would easilY kill U .haha.
Mina this was a storyteller music , it's written as an ethnic , but sounds like a cinematic too .and such expressions usualy have differenT dimensions as U know & this tarrenT is good ( I think ) .
meanwhile , have U ever thaught ? (kollan migama aslan fekr ham karde i ta hala Mina ? miduni fekr chi hast ? hahahha) any way I think if U make & share some Tar & Setar loops with people in looperman , U've presented persian instruments in a pragmatic manner .
take care to yourself.best wishes of mine for U , our planet , our motherhood country & its tallents & that word....the libertY .___B
Here you go, my reply to your comment I hope I'm not too late:)
Wow!!! storyteller music .... You just left me tongue-tied with this discription and I got really happy because it really was a story in my mind which was retold by my setar strings.
About my thinking skills I must confess I do think sometimes but recently I found out that I should better do something else rather than wasting the moments and making up stupid ideas in my head.... serıously!!!
Maybe I should replace my daydreaming and thinking with reading more books, or listening to more looperman tracks.
I will take your advice about loop sharing more serıously although I don't feel confident enough. You are right its better to do more ''hands on'' stuff.
My dear friend, take good care please and smile
Best wishes
Mina
dear planetjazzbass,excuse me if I have discovered this just todaY , buT it's about 6months I want to write a comment for U & my wacky mind forgets everyday. just wanted to say I've listened this(and many other traX of yours )several times,and I've enjoyed ,learned form them & again listened them . it's great to see there are such masters like U here .best wishes.__Behnam
cool in all respects Jurgen . wished all hiphop traX had such structure & composition by such Guitars & beats .this was very better than what I've used to except from common hiphop traX.best wishes.__Behnam
dear Doug I have no guess how & why seems everybody ( but Charlene & that other colleague ) have missed this ! this is brilianT , gold , this is real art doug. considered & thaughtfull,gentle and patient , but groovY & warm .fav is obvious for iT .best wishes.___Behnam
for sure a great collab . my fav mark will talk instead of me.
I enjoyed alot , and cogratulate (athout it's late) to both U good friends of mine .__Behnam
oops I forget to write I don't know Milana Zilink buT
as I listened track seems she is tallented too...althought untold is obvoius that here all except the same from collaborator feat Savino to be a great tallent as He is.again the same best wishes U know.___B
Savino my friend , I have no guess how I hadn't found this none so far !buT it's soooooooo Savinoian (in Savino's style ) & sooo interesting for me . Carole has an innovative mind & nice lyriX and poems and feat Dudei who is one of the best here it can sound amazing as I'm listening .
verywelldone...Savino seems I can mark as fav before listening your traX all .best wishes__Behnam
glad to see U again man . as I excepT , this was another beautifulll one of your traX ,by all respects . also that past week I listened a heavymetal for Holloween & that one too was so interesting . best wishes for U kind father .__Behnam
very welldone man ! I'm agree to Steve Crucethus about the genre buT no matter whaT genre includes it I was convinced for Fav mark . I had listened your Rock traX before too , and as I remember U were always very good in rock & heavY ,& meanwhile I like your loops too,buT according to I have listened tallented Static traX and yours too , I can underestand your nice description and anyway it's great what U've done.best wishes.___Behnam
Thanks for the kind words and for taking them time to give a listen a drop a comment. I can hear Wayne Static singing over this so I think that is the main reason I say Static X inspired. Again, I appreciate you taking the time to listen.
Steve , that Fav mark is saying :
''wished my finger hadn't broken last weeK..!''
very welldone as usual man ...Steve excuse me I don'T underestand the reason why U don't publush a srious album !!
by the waay wish everything is fine there beyond vacUUmed
for U.___Behnam
hey I was lucky to push play button beside this track !
what a nice atmospher & considered composition !the way U've used those cello in an electronic track was adorable.
Vocal's voice too is so impressive & totalY a perfect package.
best wishes.___Behnam
well I know I've commented before for this , but just wanted to say yesterday I was listening to many traX I have from U and thaught this is my favorite between them (althought t's so hard ti can choose one between many amazing nice traX of yours).I really like this theme Chris .best wishes.___Behnam
Sorry for my late reply,but sometimes we have to go do things like pay bills lol.
Im fine just short on PC TIME.
As always im very greatful that my music gets so much love.!
If there's one thing in life i love the mosts.
Its giving Free with Love what i create!.
They are my thoughts n feelings all rapped up in parcels of sound........No training required,just real life experiences that make me look n think outside the box!.
Thank you for your kind comments behnam...sending you loving vibes.!
SJ I should confess this was instructive for me abut the form!
considered and thoughtfull devemopmenT of track in
ParT A(mysterius theme )turnes to a groovy house by adding those beats in that way ( for example I call that parT B __and this part workd as a bridge betwwen parts A & C ) and
most interesting is how after parT B and with a nice alterasion ,We come to Part C in which scale changes to major and mystrious & suspended theme comes to a grooy & energetic one .
by the way , this admirable tarrenT in which music ( insrumental) and singer's voice was tuned well & set very good is . another notable point of this track of yours .verywell done SJ. best wishes.___Behnam
It's always so interesting to read your comments, I'm learning things about Music theory every time when reading them!
I really didn't build this song in a considered way at all, it just became this way merely relying on my intuition.
And I'm glad to hear that it worked anyway.
Thanks for the kind words Behnam and take care!
Groovy & energizer .and I'm agree to SeriouslyJoking about 2':45'' and turning to better and better & amazing..
and as johny i have listened U can compose in various genres .
this is great & rare talent man !
best wishes.___Behnam
Thank you very much behnam ;) I am glad you could enjoy it and it became better thorough the song.
I think being able to compose in various genres is something everyone can do as long as they are willing to open up to a genre, but fitting parts can be hard still so it's wise to listen to some songs in the genre to get an idea how to compose it.
Carole after reading your mail , I can't be serious hahaha while writing for U buT Ok ..oh oh ! ..ok ok !.. as everybody has told here ,this is a beautifull track & in facT your voice animates each track & this rule includes thisone too , as usual your mind's skill and ability of continuing vocal with several times of Modulation is adorable( in fact this IQ is adorable in U ) ,and in this one there are many groovy moments in which I really enjoyed & sung with U..meanwhile as usual U're a good lyricisT(this one was so nice) and this is greaT and the rest the same there in mail...take care ___Behnam
Hey ,I was thinking to Franco master and wanted to send him an email and ask if he is better or noT ...and that otherone drum master was in my mind cause I wanted to send him 2 trials of mine to ask him about drum line ..buT I told by myself Behnam ,shame on U , and because one time scott told if U need help U can ask him U're not free to want to take his time ...anyway wish U both are fine ...
my fav mark talks about all instruments in this track and personalY I enjoyed cool chracter of singer's voice too...as I guessed after seeing your avatar , ''very well done'' is the phrase that I shall write in the end ..best wishes.___B
Hi Behnam, This is Scott. If you will contact me through Looperman and send me what you have, I will try to help with a nice drum line for your track, or you can send me a link of your tracks and I will download it and work on some drums for you.
appology for this second comment .
buT may I ask U what do U want from collaborator abouT this ?
not for collab , because perception behind and sensible sensation in your track , U can count on me if U may think I can do anything .
that piano is such impressive which hypnotise me...
U sing by your hearT ...I'm not if there's soul in our existance or noT ..buT U're singng by your sprit...
and this make this package perfecT ..
just as a suggestion , I think , that beautifull pianO desreves to be heard alone and withouT vocal for a while...
accompaniment of that pianO with a Cello in the middle of this track only for 10 seconds ( for example ) can express depth of this beautifull lyriX too more ..
althoughT , this track is verywelldone rightnow too.
althought I'm no expert in no genre and speciallY RnB..buT my fav mark is waving his hand to describe U instead of me , this was one of the ever best RnB traX which I heared now..
best wishes.___Behnam
Well , Paulo it's a great work U've done .
I liked everything in this . speciallY drum line was
very good in this one .as Kevin have told in first commenT various changes about drum makes listener don't feel tired & this give a varietY to track .also Domenico has been a heavy metal serious player in a Band (if U may know ) & I'm agree abouT more distotion for lead guitar ,also some kind of delaY can make it more groovY.
also I personalY think U can increase tempo .
I guess your Power chord progressio would sound more agressive & impressive if U increase tempo .
best wishes in the end for U my dear friend.
__Behnam
on King Everything by StaticProjekt
best wishes.__Behnam
on Call of the Wolf by truegrit
and will have to stop getting carried away with time.
Thanks again
Truegrit
on Those hands by janis71
a bit dissonance if U pay a good attention .for gaining that note(I can underestand U'd meanT that Tonic note to be played by guitar behind your meldy vocal)U can change the pitch of both loops to 2 differenT interval which don't sound dissonance buT give U that first note of that measure for your vocal .hope U'll underestand the waY I've told U.anyway We'll talk..take care.____Behnam
Well, I hope that beyond the poor quality of this thingy, he will listen with his heart .
You're perfectly right about Ferryterry's guitars . As I told Domenico, I didn't use the original tempo and I should have . My ears didn't hear that dissonance but I'm glad your experienced ones had and that you told me about it . I'll be more careful next time .
Thx a lot for your pointed advice and analysis, Sir . Much appreciated .
Take care,
xoxo
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on Longing by Samina
Cheers :)
on Longing by Samina
buT U can be sure if like my good & lovely friend Jowe whom I see U haven't answered her still , U want to answer me later than 2 day , then U know I would easilY kill U .haha.
Mina this was a storyteller music , it's written as an ethnic , but sounds like a cinematic too .and such expressions usualy have differenT dimensions as U know & this tarrenT is good ( I think ) .
meanwhile , have U ever thaught ? (kollan migama aslan fekr ham karde i ta hala Mina ? miduni fekr chi hast ? hahahha) any way I think if U make & share some Tar & Setar loops with people in looperman , U've presented persian instruments in a pragmatic manner .
take care to yourself.best wishes of mine for U , our planet , our motherhood country & its tallents & that word....the libertY .___B
Here you go, my reply to your comment I hope I'm not too late:)
Wow!!! storyteller music .... You just left me tongue-tied with this discription and I got really happy because it really was a story in my mind which was retold by my setar strings.
About my thinking skills I must confess I do think sometimes but recently I found out that I should better do something else rather than wasting the moments and making up stupid ideas in my head.... serıously!!!
Maybe I should replace my daydreaming and thinking with reading more books, or listening to more looperman tracks.
I will take your advice about loop sharing more serıously although I don't feel confident enough. You are right its better to do more ''hands on'' stuff.
My dear friend, take good care please and smile
Best wishes
Mina
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I enjoyed alot , and cogratulate (athout it's late) to both U good friends of mine .__Behnam
on Exodus feat Milana Zilnik and Janis71 by doudei
as I listened track seems she is tallented too...althought untold is obvoius that here all except the same from collaborator feat Savino to be a great tallent as He is.again the same best wishes U know.___B
on Exodus feat Milana Zilnik and Janis71 by doudei
verywelldone...Savino seems I can mark as fav before listening your traX all .best wishes__Behnam
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on Never Healed by srbrown7
''wished my finger hadn't broken last weeK..!''
very welldone as usual man ...Steve excuse me I don'T underestand the reason why U don't publush a srious album !!
by the waay wish everything is fine there beyond vacUUmed
for U.___Behnam
on Rain Of Love by beerling1970
what a nice atmospher & considered composition !the way U've used those cello in an electronic track was adorable.
Vocal's voice too is so impressive & totalY a perfect package.
best wishes.___Behnam
on Child Of The Matrix by brillbilly
Sorry for my late reply,but sometimes we have to go do things like pay bills lol.
Im fine just short on PC TIME.
As always im very greatful that my music gets so much love.!
If there's one thing in life i love the mosts.
Its giving Free with Love what i create!.
They are my thoughts n feelings all rapped up in parcels of sound........No training required,just real life experiences that make me look n think outside the box!.
Thank you for your kind comments behnam...sending you loving vibes.!
***chris***
on Take Me Away Ft Nacole and Stephanie Kay by SeriouslyJoking
considered and thoughtfull devemopmenT of track in
ParT A(mysterius theme )turnes to a groovy house by adding those beats in that way ( for example I call that parT B __and this part workd as a bridge betwwen parts A & C ) and
most interesting is how after parT B and with a nice alterasion ,We come to Part C in which scale changes to major and mystrious & suspended theme comes to a grooy & energetic one .
by the way , this admirable tarrenT in which music ( insrumental) and singer's voice was tuned well & set very good is . another notable point of this track of yours .verywell done SJ. best wishes.___Behnam
It's always so interesting to read your comments, I'm learning things about Music theory every time when reading them!
I really didn't build this song in a considered way at all, it just became this way merely relying on my intuition.
And I'm glad to hear that it worked anyway.
Thanks for the kind words Behnam and take care!
on Project epsilon by johnnyproducing
and as johny i have listened U can compose in various genres .
this is great & rare talent man !
best wishes.___Behnam
I think being able to compose in various genres is something everyone can do as long as they are willing to open up to a genre, but fitting parts can be hard still so it's wise to listen to some songs in the genre to get an idea how to compose it.
Thanks again ;)
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on Turpitudes by janis71
Merci for your encouraging words, Behnam . You know they mean a lot to me .
You sang with me, really ? Well maybe it's time we make a duet, Sir ! ( this is a serious offer ) .
Happy you liked the lyrics ;)
Take care, deary
xoxoxo
on Una Caricia De Sol - Featuring Carlos by ScottFranco
my fav mark talks about all instruments in this track and personalY I enjoyed cool chracter of singer's voice too...as I guessed after seeing your avatar , ''very well done'' is the phrase that I shall write in the end ..best wishes.___B
Cheers,
Scott
on Sik Style - No More Sorrow by SikStyle1
buT may I ask U what do U want from collaborator abouT this ?
not for collab , because perception behind and sensible sensation in your track , U can count on me if U may think I can do anything .
on Sik Style - No More Sorrow by SikStyle1
U sing by your hearT ...I'm not if there's soul in our existance or noT ..buT U're singng by your sprit...
and this make this package perfecT ..
just as a suggestion , I think , that beautifull pianO desreves to be heard alone and withouT vocal for a while...
accompaniment of that pianO with a Cello in the middle of this track only for 10 seconds ( for example ) can express depth of this beautifull lyriX too more ..
althoughT , this track is verywelldone rightnow too.
althought I'm no expert in no genre and speciallY RnB..buT my fav mark is waving his hand to describe U instead of me , this was one of the ever best RnB traX which I heared now..
best wishes.___Behnam
on Oriental Opression by XmafaX
I liked everything in this . speciallY drum line was
very good in this one .as Kevin have told in first commenT various changes about drum makes listener don't feel tired & this give a varietY to track .also Domenico has been a heavy metal serious player in a Band (if U may know ) & I'm agree abouT more distotion for lead guitar ,also some kind of delaY can make it more groovY.
also I personalY think U can increase tempo .
I guess your Power chord progressio would sound more agressive & impressive if U increase tempo .
best wishes in the end for U my dear friend.
__Behnam
And thanks for your sugestion. YOur comments are very important to improve the tracks
your friend
Paulo