Tore My Heart - Kriebel17

13th Oct 2012 01:58 - 13 years ago
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Description : I tried hard on this song, tried to record something id listen to and i think it came out good, if you like mainstream rock then give this a listen and please let me know what you think, thanks in advance. (comment to download)

Comments (8)

If you have time take a listen and give kriebel17 some feedback.

RAHUL9066249845
RAHUL9066249845 24th Aug 2016 09:33 - 10 years ago
VERY NICE TRACK
kriebel17
kriebel17 replied 26th Aug 2016 - 10 years ago
Thanks for giving it a listen!
rolanddturner
rolanddturner 4th Mar 2014 00:28 - 12 years ago
very nice track
kriebel17
kriebel17 replied 18th Mar 2014 - 12 years ago
thank you very much.
clindsay
clindsay 3rd Mar 2014 23:20 - 12 years ago
Good tune - needs arrangement and modulation of the vocals as well as a bridge. The song holds up just needs some tunesmithing. I concur with JJWeeks.
-clindsay
brivim
brivim 23rd Feb 2014 12:20 - 12 years ago
Its Really Tore mt heart
Orlando51
Orlando51 23rd Feb 2014 06:18 - 12 years ago
Really pleasing guitar work!

All the best___Orlando
ImproveWithError
ImproveWithError 23rd Feb 2014 02:45 - 12 years ago
Good tune man, reminds me a lot of something I would write. Good job!!

Kyle
kriebel17
kriebel17 replied 18th Mar 2014 - 12 years ago
thank you.
deciBel
deciBel 5th Oct 2013 01:25 - 12 years ago
marvelous guitar arpeggio , considered usage of strings & frets of guitars ,and that Pad which comes and go & makes this package warm an warmer ..very welldone kriebel17 .respects.___Behnam
JJWeekz
JJWeekz 13th Oct 2012 02:26 - 13 years ago
You did a wonderful job!

Did you record your vocals while you played or separately?

This song would be even more neat with some harmony layers added to it as well!

There's a lot of emotion in your voice, it's clear, and you poured your heart into this (even if it may be broken?)- but I'm not convinced this is the final product. I encourage you to think of ways to add over it in layers, go deeper in that emotion!!!

Great job, Kriebel17!!
kriebel17
kriebel17 replied 13th Oct 2012 - 13 years ago
the music was someone elses and my vocals were recorded on 3 takes and just kinda meshed together, thank you for your kind words , i vermy much appreciate it.

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