Cinema - LightAs1Feather

2nd Oct 2013 04:34 - 12 years ago
Description : This track was in the cinematic genre, and it reminded me of the novel I'm working on. I wrote some lyrics, and here you have it.

*I'm leaving the track in it's original genre.

Let me know what you think! I'm not sure if I'll add to it or not yet.

Soluna-Loop 3
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/129204

Behnam made a statement earlier that made me want to clear something up. It was specific to this song, hence why I'm putting this here. I'll also be adding this to my profile.

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When it comes to my singing in "Cinema," that's not a finished work. It is what I would use to build my composition around, so it's a potential song. I may finish it as i like the song, but it isn't composed at all. It only has lyrics ( and not even all of the lyrics).

When I first began to sing, it was more emotion and expression of MY words. The thing that I find beautiful about my songs is that when you listen to my uploads, you hear me writing the song. No warm-up. No practice. No written music (sometimes even lyrics on the spot).

IF I feel like I really like what I end up with, then I begin to structure it and possibly re-upload (if anyone wants it).

That's why I ask for feedback :)

Usually, I just keep most of what I do to myself.

Comments (8)

If you have time take a listen and give LightAs1Feather some feedback.

deciBel
deciBel 3rd Oct 2013 10:31 - 12 years ago
dear LighT ,I just wanted to say, as I told U no doubt it has great potential , and just if U can correct some ntoes which are not exactly tuned , this would be more awesome . meanwhile , I want to say thanX for made me remember Omo ( Soluna ) that lovely and humbled man whose absence is a pitty in these recetly months here between us .else and beside, light I don't know if U may know or noT , buT as I know ,dear Omo has a tape Album with his friends which name is "Spass by Saite" . not sure if this track is in that album too or noT ( buT as I remember I think no ),buT this one too is a really beautifull one ...totally Soluna was a phenomen as a musician I think ...thnx for sharing this and best wishes.___Behnam
LightAs1Feather
LightAs1Feather replied 3rd Oct 2013 - 12 years ago
It's always nice to hear from you :)
Billydragon1
Billydragon1 3rd Oct 2013 09:33 - 12 years ago
Awesome idea and work. Like your track description and i can relate to it. Yes, engineers would call it laying down the 'scratch' vocal so that the singer who sings the eventual track has a rough idea of what to do. All my tracks are just that 'scratch vocal' but i prefer to call them spoken word. Blessings to you. - Mr.B
LightAs1Feather
LightAs1Feather replied 3rd Oct 2013 - 12 years ago
Thanks for that bit of info, Mr. B. I'm no where near a professional :)

Blessings to you as well
Cestevens1783
Cestevens1783 3rd Oct 2013 00:13 - 12 years ago
This is nice. You have a powerful, dramatic voice, very fitting with the music I think. I like! :)
LightAs1Feather
LightAs1Feather replied 3rd Oct 2013 - 12 years ago
Thanks! That's so nice of you to say :)
DesignedImpression
DesignedImpression 2nd Oct 2013 21:06 - 12 years ago
Interesting story. The lyrics got my thoughts painting the scenes to this movie. Creative and attractive approach. I really don't hear much of any problems except for what NWG mentioned about the vocal range on some of the notes your singing . For example around 0:19 into the song where you say "Action behind the camera" if you sang "Behind" like you do "Camera" I think might smooth out the feeling of whats being sung because "behind" doesn't sound in tune with music like "camera" sounds just my opinion. For the most part your voice fits the feeling of the music and it holds interest locked in. I did like the expressive direction with the vocals. Good use of Solunas instrumental and thank you for sharing. Peace.
LightAs1Feather
LightAs1Feather replied 2nd Oct 2013 - 12 years ago
Thank you for listening :)
RahulChandra
RahulChandra 2nd Oct 2013 20:44 - 12 years ago
You can check my latest uploads on my profile.You can get the idea of how to work on it. :)
Thanks for taking interest.
RahulChandra
RahulChandra 2nd Oct 2013 11:17 - 12 years ago
Amazing Track :) Voice is amazing I Also Need Some Vocals for some of my tracks for progressive house genre :)
LightAs1Feather
LightAs1Feather replied 2nd Oct 2013 - 12 years ago
Thanx for the comment.

I'm not really sure how to work with your sound, but if you want to message me privately, we can see what we come up with.
dansjoy4
dansjoy4 2nd Oct 2013 08:05 - 12 years ago
Nice work. ^____^
LightAs1Feather
LightAs1Feather replied 2nd Oct 2013 - 12 years ago
Thanx
TheNewWaveGroup
TheNewWaveGroup 2nd Oct 2013 05:50 - 12 years ago
Wow! I liked it so nice I listened twice! I love your voice - in fact you're making me pant! :-P Wanna get married? Haha! That all said, I do hafta critique you a little - you seem to have slightly exceeded your vocal range on a note or two here and there. Work it a little bit - maybe double track some of the more challenging part. Overall sweet. Better than my singing, that's for sure. :-)

NWG
LightAs1Feather
LightAs1Feather replied 2nd Oct 2013 - 12 years ago
Aww...you're sweet :)
I do not mind criticism, not one bit. As a matter of fact, I welcome it.

Thank you for commenting.

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