Behnam made a statement earlier that made me want to clear something up. It was specific to this song, hence why I'm putting this here. I'll also be adding this to my profile.
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When it comes to my singing in "Cinema," that's not a finished work. It is what I would use to build my composition around, so it's a potential song. I may finish it as i like the song, but it isn't composed at all. It only has lyrics ( and not even all of the lyrics).
When I first began to sing, it was more emotion and expression of MY words. The thing that I find beautiful about my songs is that when you listen to my uploads, you hear me writing the song. No warm-up. No practice. No written music (sometimes even lyrics on the spot).
IF I feel like I really like what I end up with, then I begin to structure it and possibly re-upload (if anyone wants it).
That's why I ask for feedback :)
Usually, I just keep most of what I do to myself.
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Comments (8)
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dear LighT ,I just wanted to say, as I told U no doubt it has great potential , and just if U can correct some ntoes which are not exactly tuned , this would be more awesome . meanwhile , I want to say thanX for made me remember Omo ( Soluna ) that lovely and humbled man whose absence is a pitty in these recetly months here between us .else and beside, light I don't know if U may know or noT , buT as I know ,dear Omo has a tape Album with his friends which name is "Spass by Saite" . not sure if this track is in that album too or noT ( buT as I remember I think no ),buT this one too is a really beautifull one ...totally Soluna was a phenomen as a musician I think ...thnx for sharing this and best wishes.___Behnam
Awesome idea and work. Like your track description and i can relate to it. Yes, engineers would call it laying down the 'scratch' vocal so that the singer who sings the eventual track has a rough idea of what to do. All my tracks are just that 'scratch vocal' but i prefer to call them spoken word. Blessings to you. - Mr.B
Interesting story. The lyrics got my thoughts painting the scenes to this movie. Creative and attractive approach. I really don't hear much of any problems except for what NWG mentioned about the vocal range on some of the notes your singing . For example around 0:19 into the song where you say "Action behind the camera" if you sang "Behind" like you do "Camera" I think might smooth out the feeling of whats being sung because "behind" doesn't sound in tune with music like "camera" sounds just my opinion. For the most part your voice fits the feeling of the music and it holds interest locked in. I did like the expressive direction with the vocals. Good use of Solunas instrumental and thank you for sharing. Peace.
Wow! I liked it so nice I listened twice! I love your voice - in fact you're making me pant! :-P Wanna get married? Haha! That all said, I do hafta critique you a little - you seem to have slightly exceeded your vocal range on a note or two here and there. Work it a little bit - maybe double track some of the more challenging part. Overall sweet. Better than my singing, that's for sure. :-)
Description : First off, a big thank you to Condybeats for his guitar and Rasputin for the Rhodes. As soon as I heard the guitar, I had immediate imagery. Play the track all the way through to unfold the story. Very cinematic!
Production and Mastering by Oli (who had goosebumps this time), all lyrics, vocals and owl impersonations by Kay. Please find us also at kayos2.bandcamp.com
Description : Banda sonora de un videoclip que acabo de producir.Cuenta la experiencia de una pareja de astronautas y los recuerdos de ella al perder a su compañero. Espero que os guste. Animo y suerte para todos.
Description : Ok...here it is! Another colab with maestro Tumbleweed! Ed provided the unfinished, basic track...I composed and recorded the long intro using different synths and then added piano (well to the fore) and some brass arrangements along the rest of the track (no violin this time...hehe) and then did the final mixing to wrap it up as it is presented now. I hope you will enjoy it and we both appreciate your listening time and your valuable comments:) Otherwise all thanks to Ed!
Description : Just send me the link where you use that, please
Anyway, I'm looking for artists, especially doing melodic techno, deep house etc... to work in my music label called Chick Records
Description : Treated field recordings of bells and thumping big stainless steel sculptures and synth. Inspired by a trip to the sub-Antarctic Islands.
Description : There are a lot of talented people :
Ft Ankit Sharda for the mantra,
Ft Xelaplus for the choirs,
Ft jjweekz for the voice effect,
Drums :
AcidPro on darbuka
Danke on big cymbals
Loopfreak on indian percussions
Anubis on big drums
Tell me what this track made to you ^^'
Thank you.
Description : Dark, slow, ambient, cinematic jazz with funereal piano turning into something much funkier, psychedelic and beautiful in the second half. Out of the darkness and into the light, you could say. Instruments: electric guitar + bass, lots of synth sounds, including a horn, double bass, another big legato bass, pizzicato strings, two types of piano, a heavily delayed slide guitar instrument, zither, synth arp, one brushy drum loop, kettle drum rolls and 4 programmed acoustic drum kits. This is quite a special track for me and is only the second I've put in the cinematic genre. The more you listen, the more it changes (it even has key changes) and the last three minutes are really quite far out and should probably be longer. Best track I've made for a few months. Interesting thoughts and reflections appreciated. Free sex for the best reviews...
This track is an elaboration of dgalantic’s track “Starting Over 0172257.” It is almost entirely comprised of loops by other artists on looperman. The newsreel in the intro section is from public domain footage of the Vietnam War. Prince Fatty chimes later in with some words of wisdom. The track was sequenced with Mixtikl and edited in Audacity.
Loops from the following artists are included:
1. ThatJeffCarter’s guitar “feedback 197765”
2. three of Nightingale’s harmonica trills: “angels 0088377, inner light 0088361 and never and never 0088366”
3. Heavily fx’ed vocal excerpts from Eshar’s “7th Dimension 0002644”
4. Dcmack’s rhythm loops “2 bass drums 1- 0085449, 2- 0085446, and 4- 0085448.”
5. Steelyvibe’s choral wash “luno frunezo 0005719”
6. Nightingale’s guitar loop “diving deep 0043488”
7. Rasputin1963’s chorals “ soul ladies gospel riff 0088641 and reggae soul girls choir 0087693”
Genre: Cinematic
Tags: papico, Cinematic, Piano, feedback, choral washes, choir, harmonica, guitar, dgalantic- starting over, thatjeffcarter-feedback, dcmack- 2 bass drums 1,2 and 4, nightingale-angels, inner light, never and never, diving deep, eshar-7th dimension, steelyvibe- luno frunezo, rasputin1963-soul ladies gospel riff, reggae soul girls choir, Vietnam War newsreel
Description : So a new track for everyone. Im pretty impressed by this one, and would even place it higher than one of my best tracks, Angel And A Demon. However, I'm trying to decide whether or not I should put vocals to it. I have some in mjnd, but idk if itd be better to leave as is and keep it instrumental or not. Take a listen and let me know! Also, let me know if anything is too loud, still working on my mastering.
Description : NEVER STOP DREAMING!
Love what you do and do what you love.
Made out of Looperman Loops!
Made in 2 Hours!
I was bored and was thinking about a epic movie sooo...yeah...here u got it a full Cinematic Movie Soundtrack...Say what u think..........A NEED FEEDBAK ! A know...its just mixing loops together but it was really , really big fun to make this!
Blessings to you as well
Thanks for taking interest.
I'm not really sure how to work with your sound, but if you want to message me privately, we can see what we come up with.
NWG
I do not mind criticism, not one bit. As a matter of fact, I welcome it.
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