As usual, great opera! Goin' on this way, you risk i set as fav every new track w/out listening it, by trust! Don't know why, on this needs some harmonized vocals, to make something sounds as "Midnight" by Coldplay... (aaah, if i was able to put some vocals.... aaah, if i can....)
Ehi Jamid, i'm sure i listened a part of this song in a video of youtube about funny cats playing instruments! Is that a tribute you made about a famous song which i don't know? In any case, your tracks are surprising,i love your style!
So wonderfully '80s!!! (Which is my land!) Maybe deserved some legendary synth drums, the Alesis Hr16 or the Linn9000 drum sets.... obviously lack a vocal, anyway i like it so much, absolutely definitely fav!
Hello Henri,
Thank you very much for the feedback, my dear friend.
I made this track for Orlando 51 who is a nice person like you are.
Thanks for the faves too mate.
Much appreciated.
Jamid
Mon ami, vos compositions sont toujours surprenantes ... même si je dois reconnaître une certaine inspiration de Papaoutai de Stromae. J'aime beaucoup l'idée d'utiliser d'autres langues dans les versets, c'est quelque chose que je devrais essayer aussi! En parlant de commentaires constructifs, à mon humble avis, la partie rap Servilious devait être insérée dans un "spécial" dans lequel varier un peu la musique (ce qui est très beau, félicitations!). Votre flow pourrait alors être divisé en deux parties, en laissant les strophes en anglais et en espagnol à la fin. De plus, votre voix est très basse, vous devez amplifier les fréquences mi-aiguës et, en général, augmenter légèrement le volume pour qu'elles se sentent mieux. Je suis vraiment désolé que vous n'autorisiez pas le download! Continua così, stai facendo un ottimo lavoro!
Ciao HenryPascal!
Grazie per il tuo commento molto costruttivo! Sono contento che, nel complesso, ti piaccia questa canzone. Capisco quando parli di papaoutai, anche se ti ammiro, che non me ne sono reso conto prima ancora di parlarne. È vero che come molti, amo Stromaë e che doveva ispirarmi senza che io lo sapessi :)
Prendo atto del tuo consiglio, per i distici e il mescolamento della mia voce. Il missaggio è un'area in cui cerco costantemente di migliorarmi in un modo o nell'altro! Per il download, non l'ho permesso perché non ero completamente soddisfatto, ma lo permetterò se, come te, gli altri vogliono sentirlo in macchina :)
Grazie mille per il tuo tempo!
A presto
Oh wow, tha kind of freaky (It's a compliment, believe me!) tunes i like!!! The final mastering is so good, light-year far from first hardcorey one i've listened to! I really like the pumpy kick, gives something more to this, it adds more horror to the background sound. Maybe the play-around vocals deserves to be raised up, in some part optional adding some low-pitching or horror fx. It's so freaky, i dig!
Thanks henry appreciate it, I was thinking the same thing with the vocals needing to go up in the heavier parts, it sounded alright on headphones but too quiet on my speakers, I will def see about adding some fx in there. I had fun making this track. Thanks for dropping some feedback.
Set as a fav! I really like all the work, except for vocal treatment... not so bad, you have to fix the volume (in some parts too high), then cut some mid frequencies, to get the sound of your voice less fat (and kill the contrast with the instrumentals background).
Not so bad as i thought! As Danke said, mix should be pumped a little. Start from basics, listen million times to your mix, you'll be surprised how much improvement you can do!
Like I said before I don't have time to stop to learn that aspect atm my creativity is flowing and I will learn later, I have some crazy music to show and it's nice for ppl to actually listen and give feedback, if you have any suggestions on this track let me know, much appreciated.
Life is eternal, the only thing changes is the form. Even at the end of our journey on Earth, something of us remains to keep us alive. Think to the musicians and their music... well, our community maybe does not include artists who have become famous and have changed the way world perceive music, but, if at least one of who listen to our music appreciated it and was glad to have listened to it, we have left our own trace in the world, a small glimpse that will lead us to life after life.
I'm glad to pay attention to this opera, mio caro amico Jamid, you made me feel so good just listening, then you leave your trace in my feelings, like every musician do.
Hello Henri
Thank you very much for your wonderful feedback and enlightening thoughts.
I find it very interesting and I do hope that we will meet after our death.
Do you really believe that?
It is interesting what you say and I do believe it too.
One only can hope my friend.
Thanks again.
Jamid
I got the name hardkore from listening to a lot of crazy metal music when I was younger, this track i think could be decent with a bit more love, I have a track for tomorrow that I think turned out really nice and I'm trying to get as many ears and speakers on it as possible, as I might be putting it in a competition, I have 2 to choose from for the comp I will put out the next 2 days, then I will put up my crazy stuff after that. if you could pop by in the next cpl days any feedback would be much appreciated. Thanks for stopping by, have a good one.
I played twice, trying to understand the way you dressed the track. You did a nice, nice, niiiiceeee job! In the second listening (technical one) i found something you can fix: bassline needs some energy (the driving one is too light, add a fretless guitar bassline in mono, one octave down, set it as mono), here needs some adding pads (the existing ones are too little, add some orchestral with high frequency cut filter, then set as stereo, optional a subtle flanging/phasing) last (but not least)raise the vocals just a bit (some parts are difficult to understand, you can add a vocals compression, in the chorused parts optional a ultra thin flanging). I set this as fav, Farisha is one of the best singers here on Looperman, it's been a long time i want to do something with her voice, then you came with this masterpiece! Gran bel lavoro!
SUPER helpful comment, I used some not-up-to-par headphones to do all the mixing and editing, but got the first listen from another medium today. I appreciate the feedback! I really didn't want to overdo a lot of the sounds, so I cut some of the sound from the orchestral pad I have running in the back and also cut the bass of my Saw lead. I will adjust them and bring the voice forward a bit more. Thank you, thank you again!
Cazzo che bella! Tu cosa ci hai messo del tuo? La traccia vocale? Fa molto TheGiornalisti, sia come impostazione che come testo (e, per inciso, io li seguivo già dai tempi di "Fuoricampo"). Tecnicamente parlando, ci sono delle sistemazioni da fare nel mix, ma l'idea è molto bella. Impostata come preferita! Bravo zio!
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Thanks for the faves, my friend.
Henri, any of my track you don't need to ask me just go for it and let me know.
See you.
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I made this track for a short movie for my friend son in 2015.
I don't know maybe he did it.
Thanks anyway.
Jamid
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Thank you very much for the feedback, my dear friend.
I made this track for Orlando 51 who is a nice person like you are.
Thanks for the faves too mate.
Much appreciated.
Jamid
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Grazie per il tuo commento molto costruttivo! Sono contento che, nel complesso, ti piaccia questa canzone. Capisco quando parli di papaoutai, anche se ti ammiro, che non me ne sono reso conto prima ancora di parlarne. È vero che come molti, amo Stromaë e che doveva ispirarmi senza che io lo sapessi :)
Prendo atto del tuo consiglio, per i distici e il mescolamento della mia voce. Il missaggio è un'area in cui cerco costantemente di migliorarmi in un modo o nell'altro! Per il download, non l'ho permesso perché non ero completamente soddisfatto, ma lo permetterò se, come te, gli altri vogliono sentirlo in macchina :)
Grazie mille per il tuo tempo!
A presto
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I'm glad to pay attention to this opera, mio caro amico Jamid, you made me feel so good just listening, then you leave your trace in my feelings, like every musician do.
Can a feeling, a memory, be a form of life?
Sure, my friend.
Thank you very much for your wonderful feedback and enlightening thoughts.
I find it very interesting and I do hope that we will meet after our death.
Do you really believe that?
It is interesting what you say and I do believe it too.
One only can hope my friend.
Thanks again.
Jamid
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