I used to give honest feedback, so there are many thing to fix here: -Drums are too loud (but maybe is the dnb purpose) and almost bury all the sounds. -The bassline needs more power (i hear it on start and finish, not in the middle) -Treat the vocals: add 4:1 ratio compression, then kill the bass a bit and increase the mid just a bit too.
In any case: no variations, repeating the same lines (and the mono-tonal vocals too) is really boring.
Very good track, the vocals lead all the song through, but there's a lack of variations, maybe you can put some special or synth or something on this, to make ears not bored after just half song. Just my honest opinion. By the way, i really love how the sound is so pro-clear, i just pick some distortion on vocals in some spots (but it could be just my headset...)
Hola querido amigo, te agradezco tu atencin y tus consejos, Tienes razn en que no hay mucha variacin, lo que no suele ser muy habitual en mi, como podrs comprobar si escuchas alguna otra de mis pista, ya que soy ms electrnico y no suelo poner muchas voces, pero en esta ocasin me gust la voz de la chica y esa sensacin de atmsfera, de ensoacin que desprenda, por lo que mantuve toda la acapela sin interrupciones, en una sola linea, solo le puse un ritmo y una base electrnica pero tambin densa, y un poco saturada para acompaar a la voz. Gracias amigo por tus comentarios. Paz y salud.
My usual honest feedback: very good line for the music and the atmosphere but i hate so much that shreds you put on it. I find it completely pointless. But this is just my personal taste.
Joe ha ragione, sostanzialmente l'unico vero "errore" quello sull'hi-hat, io ne avrei usato uno pi "noisey" a volume pi ridotto.
E' una produzione da club, e devo essere sincero, per me non stato facile ascoltarla fino all'ultimo, ma solo a causa della lunghezza. Intendiamoci, di per s non c' nulla di sbagliato, solo mio gusto personale. Per ho gradito molto l'atmosfera vintage che si respira lungo tutto il brano. Sempre per mio gusto personale, l'arrangiamento troppo minimale, di certo non pretendevo l'orchestra completa, ma trovo che... "manchi qualcosa". Cinonostante, tutto sommato il brano promosso! Bravo!
In efetti anche io penso che sia troppo lunga/ manca qualcosa. Penso che in totale la canzone deve durare max 6 o 7 min. Al momento di composizione non mi rendevo conto. Non sono sicuro che cosa manca pero .. qualche idea?
This is not Edm, this is a new unexplored wonderful way to make electronic music!
Absolutely love the choice to keep at a low level the drums (less love about trappy hi-hat slapping, but is just a personal taste, nothing wrong itself).
Thanks for the flowers Nicolo! You make me a very happy man :-) Its great to hear you enjoy it. I wasnt much confident as i cant stand listen to my own voice. ;-)
Hi Friend, in fact it is just a strange alchemical mixture of sounds. I wanted to achieve an effect of immobile chaos but at the same time in malignant evolution. Best wishes
As soon as I started listening, I thought "no, it's not for me" ... but then I still wanted to continue to the end, and I must say that it's not as bad as I thought.
The rhythm is definitely interesting, nothing to dispute about the mix / mast, which is of good quality as you used to it.
The only thing that didn't satisfy me completely is the arrangement, a little too minimal for my taste. I understand that it is the vocal track that guides the whole song, but also that has no significant variations.
I really like sax, it is an instrument that if well used is ... orgasmic!
Henry, your comments are always welcome, I'll explain why. You are a very observant and very sincere guy, so when I look at a comment from you on a song of mine I immediately think: good, I will get a free consultation lol It's great to be able to count on an additional point of view, most people are a little afraid to be as sincere as you are, I include myself in that hehehe but your criticisms are always constructive. As for the arrangement, I saw the other remixes of the song and I wanted to do something a little more different, so I decided to bet on the percussions, and I think the sax lines break the monotony in a very interesting way, but that's the musical taste... A big hug and thanks for the free consultation lol
It's a nice idea, but I think its development is incomplete.
First of all because the music in the background has no significant variations, then it has few outline elements. (but maybe that's how you conceived it)
Turn down the vocal track volume, it's too loud.
Also you have to touch up the volumes of the individual patterns, as they are there is no dynamism in the sound.
thanks for your comment. Yes it is incomplete. It's hard for me to stick to a track and finish it. After 20 times listening to the same tune I get bored ;-)
I'll try to work in your advices, I think you are right.
Hello and thank you for your very flattering comment. The guitar actually sounds really good, it's the work of Discipline who is a high level musician in my opinion. I begin to be rather archaic, this year I was 52 years old and my children all outnumber me. Thanks and a warm greeting
Tiny clicks and pops are audible on vocals... despite this, you create something wonderful here... live instruments, wich is heavenly good, super audio quality...
A technical listening reveals that the singer was "virtual"... but, about the general quality sound, the concept... i can just clean your shoes. Maybe.
Hello HenryPascal and thank you for the very gentle comment. You're absolutely right about the "clicks" on vocals... I think it's not only on vocal parts! I have to mix this tune again! And no worry for my shoes... I don't have shoes. Cheers and beats. Laurent
Well i invit you to check the original version one of this days. thx for your feedback about mix and master it's always a hard work and a real fight to be honest so i'm glad it sound well in a other space than on my home studio speakers !
Commented on OskrThaGreat Long Way Remix Dubjoka by dubjoka
I used to give honest feedback, so there are many thing to fix here:
-Drums are too loud (but maybe is the dnb purpose) and almost bury all the sounds.
-The bassline needs more power (i hear it on start and finish, not in the middle)
-Treat the vocals: add 4:1 ratio compression, then kill the bass a bit and increase the mid just a bit too.
In any case: no variations, repeating the same lines (and the mono-tonal vocals too) is really boring.
Commented on A million words by sirefox
Very good track, the vocals lead all the song through, but there's a lack of variations, maybe you can put some special or synth or something on this, to make ears not bored after just half song. Just my honest opinion. By the way, i really love how the sound is so pro-clear, i just pick some distortion on vocals in some spots (but it could be just my headset...)
Commented on A Nullbody Clinch by ioncewas
My usual honest feedback: very good line for the music and the atmosphere but i hate so much that shreds you put on it. I find it completely pointless. But this is just my personal taste.
Commented on Not Today Ooh Nah by PatriciaEdwards
Well, after a... century?.. i'm finally back here on LM, and... what's better than a new Only-She-Can Queen of singers new track?
Not your style? Not agree. You are Universal, so you can fit any kind of music, so every style belongs to you.
Commented on The King by PatriciaEdwards
My only King is... STEPHEN KING!
But there's no Queen but YOU, not even Betty from England!
So, the answere is: now that the soundtrack is done, when the next Disney movie's released?
Commented on Nature of Moonlight by giuliomusic
Ciao Giulio.
Joe ha ragione, sostanzialmente l'unico vero "errore" quello sull'hi-hat, io ne avrei usato uno pi "noisey" a volume pi ridotto.
E' una produzione da club, e devo essere sincero, per me non stato facile ascoltarla fino all'ultimo, ma solo a causa della lunghezza. Intendiamoci, di per s non c' nulla di sbagliato, solo mio gusto personale. Per ho gradito molto l'atmosfera vintage che si respira lungo tutto il brano. Sempre per mio gusto personale, l'arrangiamento troppo minimale, di certo non pretendevo l'orchestra completa, ma trovo che... "manchi qualcosa". Cinonostante, tutto sommato il brano promosso! Bravo!
Commented on In Memory Of Florian Schneider by Stereonomicon
Goodbye Florian, thanks for all.
Beautiful dynamics, deserve more room to expand.
Now, unfortunately, you have to pay trbute to Albert One, which passed away too.
Commented on Wave Goodbye To Me by TheJinni
What a fresh new air here! Awesome audio quality, rapping is not so throttling, which is the best way i appreciate it!
(I'm still waiting for your verses on my theme "Rossella" ahahah)
Commented on The Sound Of Calm by DsideK
This is not Edm, this is a new unexplored wonderful way to make electronic music!
Absolutely love the choice to keep at a low level the drums (less love about trappy hi-hat slapping, but is just a personal taste, nothing wrong itself).
Future atmosphere... makes me fly!
Not so much the songs i set as fav, you made it!
10/10
Commented on Cant Be With You by felixamodeo
Wow, that's why is raining now in my town! This is the second wonderful track i pleased to listen today!
It's to shoooort! What a pity....
Please, ask him to get back and do other wonderful stuff like this!
Commented on just lies by imola80
Oh my gosh!!! Wonderful vibe, absolutely amazing, leave me speechless! Definitely fav!
Is a kind of mix between "Midnight" by Coldplay and the M83's "Hurry up, we're dreaming" album feels and atmospheres.... wowowowowowo!
I can't found anything to argue about, even if i use a magnifying glass!
Commented on Azathoth by Stereonomicon
Sounds so... seventies experimental psychedelic electronic and much more thing but weird ahahahahha
It is so particular in its own way, is impossible find any flaw, because of the perception stands in listener's ears.
Is kinda melting crucible where everything is possible and everything is ok ahahha
Commented on Knock Knock - AAP - Leo Valentine - Julio Oliveira by Juliooliveira
Honest feedback, as usual.
As soon as I started listening, I thought "no, it's not for me" ... but then I still wanted to continue to the end, and I must say that it's not as bad as I thought.
The rhythm is definitely interesting, nothing to dispute about the mix / mast, which is of good quality as you used to it.
The only thing that didn't satisfy me completely is the arrangement, a little too minimal for my taste. I understand that it is the vocal track that guides the whole song, but also that has no significant variations.
I really like sax, it is an instrument that if well used is ... orgasmic!
Commented on Ready Now Remix feat Paasche Fredrik by imola80
It's a nice idea, but I think its development is incomplete.
First of all because the music in the background has no significant variations, then it has few outline elements. (but maybe that's how you conceived it)
Turn down the vocal track volume, it's too loud.
Also you have to touch up the volumes of the individual patterns, as they are there is no dynamism in the sound.
Commented on Set Us Free Featuring DJ Samples by ClickbaitCabaret
So nineties-emo!
Well, i don't know what trip hop is, i expected something else... but i dig this, surprisingly!
Commented on Lockdown by BCVProductions
wowowowowowowowowowowoowow amazing in every point of view, this track has absolutely no flaw at aaaalllll!
Commented on Starfighter by HeathAlexander
I red EDM, i didn't expect this!
However, i'm late to say something not yet said... so...BRAVO!
Commented on The Idol of Cthulhu -Discipline and Stereonomicon by Stereonomicon
Marco! This sounds so seventies in its own way... some parts Tangerine Dream, some parts Giorgio Moroder, some parts Kraftwerk....
Super audio quality, that guitar is the nicest touch!
And so, you have a 19yo son??? I always thought you were much younger ahahahah
Commented on DJ Arlph-Black Smokes by NaejMusic
Hey, old friend o' mine!
Wow, sound so cinematic in its way... when the movie's released??
Commented on ANY WAY YOU WANT IT featuring Patricia Edwards by laurentwirz
Tiny clicks and pops are audible on vocals... despite this, you create something wonderful here... live instruments, wich is heavenly good, super audio quality...
A technical listening reveals that the singer was "virtual"... but, about the general quality sound, the concept... i can just clean your shoes. Maybe.
Absolutely wonderful!
Commented on Tighten up Vol 88 Cover by Indieground
I don't know the original track, but i listen to this to the last second... despite is not my thing, i really enjoyed!
Well mix/mast, no tecnical thing to argue about...
Very well done!
Commented on 02 Youll be Alive ft LeoValentine by Eighteen
Oh man... so much upgrades but still audio quality lacks!
"My version is so much better than yours" ahahahhahahahhaha
Wait for tomorrow and get surprised!
Commented on Scared to be lonely by MichaelMayo
Whoa!
Finally a track with nothing to argue about!
Commented on HARD TIMES Featuring Patricia Edwards by laurentwirz
Hats off, guys.
Simply amazing, other words are pointless...
Commented on Love Love Love by PatriciaEdwards
I love ya too!