HenryPascal

Really love that horror atmosphere here!

What a wonderful orchestral!!! Try to add some gongs or orchestral rolling percussion somwhere in the mix, it gives a perfect mix between orchestral and electronics! Very good man, i dig!

Very well, excellent!

Very sad atmosphere, my element!

Yoooooo!

You can do better!! Keep down the volume of the music, vocals are still a bit buried. Anyway quality of vocals get better than before. Remember the automation clip for the volume of the voice? you can decide where pump and where not. To improve quality, add some effects, as reverb, echo, and it maybe fits some subtle flanging. You have to raise the high frequencies too, 'cause now voice seems to be recorded in the shower box! ahahha. Another tip: set the drums in mono and add a small default reverb, best to 3% (this is how it works on FL Studio). Last tip: don't be in a hurry to release your track. I did da same mistake in the past, and the fixing i had to do was too much, the final quality was unsatisfying. Take your time, listen to the mix million times, you'll be surprised how much improvement and fixing you can do on your job!

De plus, je fais ma propre musique, je ne voulais pas être simplement une mauvaise critique, j'aime être honnête et écrire ce que je pense vraiment sans mensonges. Je ne suis pas non plus un professionnel, ma philosophie est que nous devons nous entraider pour pouvoir apprendre et améliorer notre travail. (Pardonnez mon français, tout est traduit par google;))

Two things: one good, one not.

Good one: music! I really like, very happy, bassline is on point!

Bad one: vocals.... je suis désolé but it doesn't fit in no way! Not in tone with the rest of the song and unsync too. S'il vous plaît ne soyez pas offensé, but you can do so much better and i'm sure you'll do!

I really enjoyed the intro (and outro) part and the feelings you put in, is my natural element! The drone sound around half is awesome, maybe deserves more evidence. A small part of the rolly build up snare reminds me the one used in "Voodoo People" by The Prodigy. (RIP Keith Flint)

Here is some suggestions: vocals are too buried under the sound, and their compression (and general quality) not exactly the best. So, this is a trick i've learnt recently: put the vocal track (the same) in several channels in the mixer and for each one change frequencies to get a better sound, then play them all together. Use compression to get an equal waveform, (allow to raise the lowest volume parts and, at same time, kills the parts that sounds too strong), last thing, eventually, create a volume automation clip for last fixing.

I like the job on vocals, a bit less the acoustic. Here is my suggestion: keep the drum part and try to dress the song using some guitars, you can create kinda counTRap!!!

92 minutes of applause!!!! This is MUSIC!!!!

Not my thing, but i like the atmosphere, maybe deserve to develope this track and adding some vocals!

close your eyes and begin to dream........

Yeah man, it could be a sin let this piece unused!

Something strange here, the kind o' things i like! Bravo!

Love that cymbals and their phazing! Bel lavoro amico!

Not bad at all!!! Maybe you can do better in mixing the volume of some elements... in some part low volume, in other parts too strong... as starting theme you did a gooood job, here are wide margins for improvement! Maybe diversify the music, adding othere elements and, as DjLeeMFW said, try some acapella. My tip is: do not be in a hurry to release tracks here, take your time, listen million times and fix the fixable. Don't make my same mistake, if you listen to my previous tracks, you can see big differencies in sound quality, sample choosen and other stuff. So, take your time until you find your personal style.

Bravo bravo bravo bravo bravooooooooooo! I don't know why, but i imagine this remixed by Skrillex, a sort of Christ-Step, christian people go hardcore!!!! double thumbs up, chapeau!

Woo hoo, i love it... the variations in this songs works awesome....

I fell in love with this song a few seconds after start!!! Thank god you shared it here.... this track deserve an hall, a complete orchestra and people clapping hands and asking for BIIIISSSSSS!!!! Definitely set as FAV!

Woooooooo.... this track brings back in time!!! Sounds sooo goood, well done, i love it!!!

Yeah!!! i like the way you dress this track, simple and relaxing, another vision of trance music! The pads (or all the sounds used as) need to be stereoized to give some depth to compression of entire track, and maybe fits a ultra thin flanging on the their highest frequencies. Generally, use some compressions in the other sounds too, then pump up the volume (not extremely) to give some pro-touch to the entire work!

Wow, i like it! Sounds as a old-style rapping! These are my tips: on the drums, set the default "for drums" compression, then add a slight reverb compression (the "default" one) and set the reverb to 10%. Then create an automation clip on the reverb, to give amplitude on kicks and snares where it works, to give more ambient and more.... horror sensation? In the end, pump up the volume of the entire track, the waveform here is to short. If not, all the reverb stuff... doesn't work! :) well done man, despite is not my stile i love it!

Oh yeeeeeessssss! Magic intro, i love the drumming, how the guitars turn it around... magic bassline! This track is full of compliment, what can i say more, but that one day i would like to use some real guitars in my songs and not vst ones!!! Magic!