Mahloo13

Ohh boy! I was expecting bass when I came to your profile and that's what I got!

This could easily replace the definition of dub so you could contact Wikipedia to wipe the page and post a link to this song.

Nice, very nice sound on those drums and the bass is fabulous. Very trippy!

This is a great job from all of you guys involved. Now go get Damian on it.

This has a very catchy vibe as well.

I must say however that the drums sound doesn't work for the track and you could've had a better result with other drum sounds.

It reminds me a bit or Swedish House Mafia, but it definitely has it's own sound.

With a bit of production work this could also become a bit more professional.

Cheers!

Very nice use of the vocals in the intro, however the vocals sound way to scratchy, you've boosted way to much the high end.

Otherwise the track evolves pretty well and has a really addictive vibe going on.

It could also work better if you'd make the track a bit wider to embrace those vocals and make it more impressive.

Could have also cut the vocals here and there as the first bit is just to much vocals.

Anyways a pretty cool effort.

Well let me put it this way...Get a microphone, find a songwriter and record an album. Although this song is simple it's very trendy if we can use that word and it would do great with a bit of production work.

I'm gonna keep my ears on you (well you get the point).

Now this is how it should be done. Nice work! The mix sounds pretty darn good as well! You might not have to wait to reach 43 years to take the industry by surprise like Guetta! Lol!

Loving the changes in there and the arrangement is really cool! Would be killer with a rapper in there as well to change the sound a bit. This is going in the favs!

Now from a musical point of view this sets a new standard of quality. The phrasing is interesting and the instrumentation helps the song evolve really well. This really proves how sometimes 4-5 instruments can go a long way in creating a moving piece.

Now from the point of view of someone who has the job of finding flaws in audio recordings and fix them I'd like to add a couple of advises...

The reverb on the vocals....use the pre-delay setting and make that reverb longer(at the moment it sounds mono to me so a stereo one will work better) as it will widen the vocals and by using a longer pre-delay (above 30ms) you will have a nice lush sound that will create a smooth glue around the vocals (think India Arie - Ready for love....for a lack of a better explanation)

Overall I'd guess that I'm gonna say that reverb is needed a bit more on instrumentation as well as everything is a bit dry at the moment and reverb gels like nothing else.

So that was the technical review...

You obviously have a great set of songwriting skills and the quality standard of your work is quite high which always get's me wondering why didn't you follow a music career, you could've had a great career.

All the best!

Whoah! The harmonies in this are amazing. The way the musical elements interplay with the vocals melodic line is fantastic. This is a true representation of folk music and a really good lesson on how to use modern elements and yet create something that takes you so far back in time.

Excellent choice of instrumentation and a great delivery. I must agree with Dave it can easily be played as part of a large concert.

All the best!

Ahh yeah! It's about time you get some vocals on your tracks. The vocals sound a bit thin! Maybe because they are so centered or maybe just lack a bit of body.

The delivery is great an the track supports the rap really well.

Very nice approach on the sample.

I'm gonna be on the lookout for new stuff.

Cheers!

Ahhh now this is pretty cool! The intro is really cool but when that synth comes in it sounds out of tune. It might be the synths own sound but it doesn't really song good on the breaks.

I like the way you've worked the track otherwise and this is a very professional sounding track otherwise.

Keep up the good work.

Aah! Now that nylon is something! Very smooth! I loved the bass sound and what's going on with the ride's and cymbals is fantastic, now that's some attention to detail I'd like to hear more often.

The overall sound was a bit dark for my taste but it works extremely well by setting the listener in a pub where there is a live performance going on.

I don't know if you have latin roots of you've just had a glass of red wine but that acoustic is smooth and intimate as it should be.

Really enjoyed this one!

Ohh that start was awesome. Had a nice vibe! I would've loved it to continue that way but the change was a nice addition after all and it turned out pretty cool.

Some cool guitar thrills in there would have worked wonders, some interplay with your vocals, always works well with blues.

You both did a great work.

Sounds a bit familiar! Maybe the chord progression is overused nowadays.

Anyways pretty cool and grimy! Would be nice to hear it with some vocals.

This is actually quite nice!

Try rolling of some of the low end on those vocals (go as high as you need) and don't boost so much highs as it sounds bad.

With a bit of work on the timing and the pitch of the vocals this could be pretty good. It has a nice feel and vibe (Ryan Leslie/Drake comes to mind). The instrumental is fabulous I really like it.

Once again the track is really great and has a nice lounge vibe to it.

The same thing about the vocals. Not really on time and in tune. Some editing would be beneficial for the tune as the track has a fabulous quality and with proper vocals it would be great.

Hope you rework it!

Cheers!

I'm not sure the vocals are in tune with the song, at places it just sounds a bit of. They also sound way to filtered, to me at least.

I would have loved them a bit more upfront and more defined to be honest.

The backing track has some potential if some transitions would be present. It sounds a bit repetitive at the moment which is a surprise as there are enough elements in there to build something great.

Catchy vibe though!

The intro is fabulous! The song could easily go as a soundtrack in a movie, maybe something like CSI since you added the percussive elements as well.

I like the strange percussion, well not strange but wet (effected) and the vocals really make it memorable. Very well put together and arranged. The changes is mood are awesome.

Great job!

OOHHH! Turn down that boom. My speakers nearly exploded.

Well I'll be.......! Clutz! How's the movie going on? Nice dark elements going on in here, will wait for this one to get some lyrics and then listen to it in it's full potential.

All the best!

Nice! Very nice! Vocals and make it pronto! This has potential and quite serious potential.

On the verses you could go with a slightly less distorted guitar and maybe play some chords to emphasize the emotion, I don't know it's just an idea.

The snare sounds nice and smacky and there is a pretty good balance in the track.

A job well done.

Now this is hardcore mate! Techno on steroids! Nice effects on the vocals and that lofi effect got me checking my speakers if they've had be blown by the track.

You could add some variation to make it a bit more complex or mainly just add a couple of transitions.

Regardless of what instrument plays a latin variation it's never going to sound as soulful and warm as a guitar.

Very impressive and full of emotional charge. I can hear a lot of influences in your playing style and how you manage to combine them every time is amazing.

The first part is incredible, not that the rest is not as good as that particular part but I just feel every note in that part.

Outstanding!

I seem to be stumbling upon smooth tunes today and this one ain't no exception.

Fabulous work on the guitar and the percussive elements work so well with the tune. The strings really gave it a different vibe and once that percussion came it it was just the twist the track needed.

Very good effort! I love that guitar.

So when will you guys be releasing this album?

You've got some great collabs going on and this is smooth and jazzy. That Wah-Wah works amazingly well.

The track is well orchestrated and arranged and the vocal performance is up there as well.

Props to both of you!

Now this is something different! Very well performed and arranged. This could easily be aired on the radio.

It's to hear you branching out towards different challenges.

I enjoyed the driving vibe of the guitars, I think they really added a nice touch and worked really well with your voice.

Props to both of you!

You're sure you don't have Jamaican roots? Lol!

Love that bass line! The drums are amazing and the percussive elements give it a nice ethnic vibe. You've got a certain sound, your sound that's for sure.