Mahloo13

thanks for your input man, glad you like it... ive just uploaded a fix now, where ive added a level to the bass, fixed the first drum and toned down the vocals, let me now if its any better :)
seatream

I get what you are saying and I definately need a producer and some assistance on the songwriting won't hurt. I'm glad you like the vocals and I'm assuming you like the melody...these are raw tracks inspired by loops, samples and tracks I have played with on looperman and I truly believe it is the beginning of something amazing...so I agree that you should keep your ears on me lolI

Thanks man :D

If I get half the success David Guetta's had, I'll die a very happy man lol..

A rapper *would* be a great idea. If/When I turn it into an original song I'll be sure to put the word out.. Just need to find the right singer with the right lyrics first.

As for the mix, I'm glad it has your seal of approval! If you get bored/have nothing better to do - you can have the stems if you like? Just lemme know :)

Thanks again man

Wow thanks Mahloo. I can tell you must be a real lover of any kind of music. Just from review, I can tell by you have keen ears. The song is over 150 years old. I guess a writer can definately make a song timeless. I wish I could do the same heheh. Cheers and thanks again ! - Bill (Bilbozo)

vocals being thick, i agree. i thought it was too much at the high end frequency boost. but i cut too much on the low end either. the first rapper has not bass at all in his voice.
hopping to get better after some subsequent releases.
thnx for the comment man. i appreciate it

Thanks, You are right the synth are sounds like that that's why.

Hey Malu thanks man!..actually I do have 1% Latin(Spanish) blood from my Grandmother's side I've been told.hehe.....You know it's interesting,when I start a project I'm visualising it in a particular setting and obviously attempt to make it sound so......However I've pretty much come to the conclusion that musicians don't make the best sound engineers!lol..that is unless they've been successful enough to employ professionals and learnt the ropes from them through association over the years....thanks mate,I always appreciate your insightful comments!..cheers Dave :)

Richie and I don't interplay much, he's pretty busy hehe, j/k. I hear what you're saying though.

Note to self: Interplay more...haha

Thank you Malu!!

i hear ya, had the main loop in a file for a long time...doing some cleaning and i found it liked the way it sounded...think thats why i only did 2 16s on it though. and i cant ever find anyone to spit on my stuff. or if they do, i dont hear it.

Thanks man..appreciate the feedback..Definetly understand what your talkin about..I figured if I got positive feedback on it..id remove the tags and record in a real studio..

Thanks again for your comments. DJ Malook took my original acapella and tried for a different feel. We agree that it is more off beat as I recorded in different bpm. I'll see if DJ Malook wants to rework this with me. :)

Hey Mahloo13.

Thanks for commenting mate. Great to hear from you. It was my first experiment with doing an acapella so I'm still learning. I wanted to add some effects to my voice for my first few experimental tracks so I could compare them to when I sing a bit more exposed on a dance track. The next upload I do, I'll give it a go and take effects off.

Hope you have a good one!

Thanyou very much…. it was a bit of a shot in the dark, as my voice was really not recovered from a bout of flu. I love the idea of it being a soundtrack..I appreciate your positivity and thank you for your time.

mahloo man how you doing man! good i hope. well ya def some dark element. been going off the deep end last few years and we broke up after 14 years so been real down and this was acually made with the beat, when im gone" by eminem. its what i used to write the lyrics too and what i was going for as far as a kind of feel. i just need to record it. beet is 75 beets per min same as ems beet. so ill get back as soon as i can get a decent mic at the moment i need a ubs because my reg mic inputs are shot so just waiting on crazy chris. hopefully later in the week.ill check out some of your tracks as soon as i get a min bro. cant wait to hear what you been working on. im not really up and running yet my main pac kinda bit the dust so this is a recovery attempt at best on a laptop fron a desk top, honestly im hating it. lol. be easy man. will get back with you. :)

I couldn't agree more. i only made this because i was hanging around waiting for some stems for another track. Now this one seems to be doing alright and i've lost the plot with the other one for the minute. Funny how things work out sometimes huh.
Thanks for stopping by.
Did you watch the Chinese goose stepping video? I'm sure i can grab an idea or two from that. ha ha
FR

Thank you.I'm humbled and I hope you can tell how much I love playing guitar to these guys song.
I never got to play these styles with such inspiration until joining this site and meeting so many talented people.

Thanks again!
Allen

Hi Mahloo

An album of songs with Patricia Edwards would be good. We almost have enough songs too! She is such an immense talent. Glad you liked this track and thanks for stopping by to comment. Much appreciated.

Richie

This one is in the works as we speak, since posting it I've solicited the awesome work of TZA1800 and Bill for "live" instrumentation.

Thanks Malu!

thanks Malu...working toward that 'certain sound', but the goal line keeps moving away faster, LOL

ahahaha thanks Malu, can't go wrong if you
appreciate a track ;) ahahahahhaa

looks like imma have to look for Nas' number
now AHAHAHAHAHA :D

Peace from LA

Hey thanks man....I'm a huge Duduk fan,I know a lot of Turkish people in Oz and really enjoy their weddings,parties and (bands),they call it something a little different but essentially it's the same instrument,pity Evrim isn't still active on the Loop she's someone I always wanted to collab with...thanks again mate...cheers Dave