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The lyrics speak well with this type of instrumental that backs it up full in my opinion. The sung and flowed vocals sink in get one thinking putting the sorrow aside to hear a soul wanting to rearrange. I thought you did good with this expression. Style is sikwitit and message delievered with interest. Good for anyone anywhere, still frame work displayed. A broken tune is seems but hopeful it breathes. Thank you for sharing with us, always keep your head held high. Peace.

Excellent instrumental jdbeats. Instant chill mode for me. Piano and drums compliment one another while the bass shines in the spot where darkness stares. Vocal piece completes the package with the theme of the music. Enjoyable listen, like this a lot. Thanks for sharing, Peace.

The piano and pad plays well together. Nice add with the synth. Neat effect usage. But the drums could use some more parts for this idea. Interesting listen, thanks for sharing with us. Still unsure what VIP means. Peace.

This is coo. Good topic and expressed stamping. Like the flows, the hook goes nice with music. Deep thoughts, diggin it. Thanks for sharing, Peace.

I think youre onto something good here. Liking the mixture, the topic of vocals and the feeling of the instrumental blend interestingly, enjoyable to chill down a bit, thinking lit. Dont hear anything wrong sounds good as is to me. Thanks for sharing, peace.

This is refreshing from reggaeton that Ive heard. Sounding good to me, I cant hear any problems with this song. Vocals are very good for the music. Has the questioning lost feeling in the chillness of the overall sound. Enjoyable listen Zahr. Thanks for sharing. Peace.

You're very creative Carole. I liked how you put this one together. Excellent use of the selected loops. Vocals sing smoothly to the ears and the lyrics talk truth to the heart. A well suited song for a loved one and agree it is a meaningful metaphor. I like the mixture of languages and musical sections. You've captured ways of past and modern somehow and an enjoyable listen it turned out. Your voice is lovely here at 3:18 to 3:26, sounds like sunshine peaking through the rain. I enjoyed this by you. Thank you for sharing. Peace.

Interesting story. The lyrics got my thoughts painting the scenes to this movie. Creative and attractive approach. I really don't hear much of any problems except for what NWG mentioned about the vocal range on some of the notes your singing . For example around 0:19 into the song where you say "Action behind the camera" if you sang "Behind" like you do "Camera" I think might smooth out the feeling of whats being sung because "behind" doesn't sound in tune with music like "camera" sounds just my opinion. For the most part your voice fits the feeling of the music and it holds interest locked in. I did like the expressive direction with the vocals. Good use of Solunas instrumental and thank you for sharing. Peace.

Its got the energy, I can almost hear a voice, the instruments are singing man! Really dig how the drums and guitar keep this moving, the simple things travel far here. Thought a good job done with this idea Xpekt, the guitar is great but the drums are what pulled me through. The way its layered and whats being played got the mind on a hook. Holding on just to let it go is what I get from listening. Did enjoy it, Thank you for sharing Peace.

Hello JJW, fresh air longing for I hear in this. You say not very good, this is great! It appears dark but I've never heard anything lighter. I saw a house with a downhill driveway, sun beating rays burn the floor, a woman walking down the driveway barefoot. She appears to look cold while all around is burning up. Eyes didn't lie. Very interesting piece and good loop usage. Your layering is just right. You should do more when time is available. Thank you for sharing. Peace.

Neat instrumental Staggerman. Interesting grooves throughout and the instruments sound great together. I think back to MKR days. Entertaining Jazz works. Thank you for sharing. Peace.

Very interesting WIP! You're doing real good, reaching listeners from different planets and bringing them to this dark side of the moon. From start to finish kept the listen fun. Thank you for sharing and keep going when time is available. Peace.

Diggin the flows here!. I got the wild style -sick scratchin- always been a foul child, that was a very good idea and I thought it worked well for this song. The instrumental is really nice, got a lot of feeling in your songs and is enjoyable to listen to. Good for different scenes. Thanks for sharing, keep doing what you guys do. Peace.

This is real cool. A lot of the lyrics I understand in a sense which allowed me to visualize the story vividly. The instrumental is perfect for the topic. Its feeding the comfort of a mind in lost confusion. Hocus Pocus, demons in the bed of my head surrounding me wanting me dead, how those lines stay after the song is done playing. Really enjoyed this. THE UNBEATABLES! Thanks for sharing, Peace.

The percussion here is excellent. The way they play with the pad gives a deep view. Like lifting out of body as the title describes other side. The synth pops smoothly and finds a place inside thoughts. It is interesting how you put this together, did enjoy this share, thank you. Peace.

hateful but I can believe the concept. The instrumental really compliments those releasing lyrics. Like how its put together, reminded me of a song called black dhalia. Anyways, thanks for sharing with us. Making some interesting progress, Peace.

Nice idea here, it plays good when I add more bass. How long you work on this one? Thank you for sharing. Upload another. Peace.

Never really got into the whole dubstep style but this one is nice like that! Interests me with all that crazy digital sounds and fx. Like the pauses in there really amps up the mix. I think this is Good stuff edzwood, thank you for sharing. Peace.

I like your jams evil army. Freeing oneself thru that rockin guitar. Sick. Enjoyed what this did for me. Thank you for sharing. This is perfect for my morning, ruff night about the friends of my enemies. You rock. Peace.

Haha, I hear you make strange music too! What you got here is not failure, some parts sound interesting. Sometimes the synths get to be a little too much in my own opinion. Thats the only thing I can notice that loses me at parts while listening. Some dance rap fuse. Keep going! Peace.

Now thats a great harp track. The feeling is chill and open that flows from one side to the other. Has that never ending speaking. Simply best of listening enjoyment for this night. Thanks for sharing your work, you got a great feel for the sounds and how they go. Keep telling your stories, Peace.

I think you did a good job. For that special her, she will like. The instrumental is talking some experience shared. Them holding on moments within the piano. The flute of journeys. Pads that bring spacial orbit round a thoughtful image of her face in light. Vivid music. Thank you for sharing this with us. Enjoyed the peace here.

Oh wow, that completely twisted up when it kicks off. Dig how you brought the pace back to zoomed in with that guitar. I hear no problems, all pieces sounding real good. Gotta agree about the guitar work as others have said, a good feature in this idea. The pads really make that guitar feel good inside the mind. enjoy this kind of connection. True Blue. Thanks for sharing with us. Peace.

Can picture just chillin in the box one too many to drink. Homies talkin in the background of the scene and im somewhere lost in a good 1. Interesting beat and thanks for sharing with us. Peace.

Interesting spin to that instrumental. I thought it sounded good, clear quality no trouble hearing everything and how it works. Makes me think about the fam and the missions that go down. Hope you find that collab for this one. Thanks for sharing with us. Peace.