Oh Girl - Nikonthaicon

22nd Jul 2013 10:00 - 13 years ago
Description : Got this beat earlier from Looperman's Very own DjRymZ, thanks fer the go bro... it was a really quick make, half of it was freestyle the other half was an attempt to write something, for being so quickly made I am proud of the final product.. maybe Ill come back and redo it later, but this one I really want to hear some feedback, I dont usually do anything like this so I wanna if it sounds good..

Comments (7)

If you have time take a listen and give Nikonthaicon some feedback.

Enzotic
Enzotic 3rd Aug 2013 01:16 - 13 years ago
The instrumental is nice. I think that the vocals on the hook need more work, maybe some back up vocals will make it stick out more. Nice track!
ReadyRockN
ReadyRockN 26th Jul 2013 17:37 - 13 years ago
It's a coo song and the vocals aren't that bad. I record out of adobe audition CS5 and I tweak the sound with effects from fl studio 11. The final mix is recorded is Adobe though. Here is a tutorial where the guy is using different effects and coming out with a real nice mix. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p3dHwxjVYBo
ElectronBlue
ElectronBlue 26th Jul 2013 17:04 - 13 years ago
sounds great to me. Slight echo doubling effect. I like it.
mrwolf14
mrwolf14 26th Jul 2013 12:49 - 13 years ago
I definitely like what we have here.
This is a very good starting point.
I think you need some minor changes to get it really flying. As others already suggested, try to "enforce" your vocals by adding a doubling vocal part. Or you could try to stress the melody with an instrument in background: it does not have to play exactly the same melody, but you choose some "key notes" and keep the background instrument moving around these notes.
Looking forward to see this song completed.
Domenico
kikimarie
kikimarie 25th Jul 2013 08:44 - 13 years ago
Sounds pretty alright..definitely have potential..something sounds ..off.not ur norm style..but tis ok.think u need a girl to sing in with u in this one
Nikonthaicon
Nikonthaicon replied 25th Jul 2013 - 13 years ago
no definitely not my normal style, haha, I know what you mean tho, I did think bout trying to find a girl to add to it, but I kno not of one..
DesignedImpression
DesignedImpression 22nd Jul 2013 14:08 - 13 years ago
Its got potential to expand on. Not too familiar from your usual style but this aint bad for a quick run. The idea you applied I think can mix with the beat real good but the same as Rymz said, get some backup vocals or your own dubbing in there. Even though the timing seems off some parts it still shared a cool vibe and able to follow along. I understand the situation of this track and great start. The instrumental is catchy and thoughts wrap around it ez. One of those up down mix. Thanks for sharing, keep it going man. Peace.
DjRymZ
DjRymZ 22nd Jul 2013 12:17 - 13 years ago
Nice peace dhoe..u're using FL ryt?...check out the metronome...& backup vol..
Nikonthaicon
Nikonthaicon replied 25th Jul 2013 - 13 years ago
naw, FL I usually use to produce the loops/beats, but I aint dont that in a grip, I've been using Magix for the Recording.. tho I think I need to upgrade to different software

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