Oh Girl - Nikonthaicon
22nd Jul 2013 10:00 - 13 years ago
Description : Got this beat earlier from Looperman's Very own DjRymZ, thanks fer the go bro... it was a really quick make, half of it was freestyle the other half was an attempt to write something, for being so quickly made I am proud of the final product.. maybe Ill come back and redo it later, but this one I really want to hear some feedback, I dont usually do anything like this so I wanna if it sounds good..
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This is a very good starting point.
I think you need some minor changes to get it really flying. As others already suggested, try to "enforce" your vocals by adding a doubling vocal part. Or you could try to stress the melody with an instrument in background: it does not have to play exactly the same melody, but you choose some "key notes" and keep the background instrument moving around these notes.
Looking forward to see this song completed.
Domenico