Description : UPDATE: I fixed my panning issue and the strings
Alright, after some helpful advice from my fellow loopermen(and women) I have attempted to fix the mixing issue I was having. As before, this was supposed to be like dreaming on a rainy day; one of those dreams that makes you reflect on life. PLEASE feel free to add vocals,they can make this track even better.
As usual, please give any criticisms you see fit. You won't hurt my feelings. Please comment a link if you wind up making something with this. I'd love to hear it.
TIP: The hook/chorus is the best part (and the part I fixed)
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ilike this one! someone should def hop on this one! i would say just a bit of mixing required and it should be even better. but otherwise good skills on incorporating the different sounds! i do that on some of beats too, but try not to make it too complex..
Very imaginative intro that leads into a smooth opening with the deep drums and that rev. orgran type sound. In fact those strings, expressive, do provide a reflective feel. Can get lost for awhile just in thoughts about it all. I sensed a smile after seeing all the madness one has been through. Made it thru the storm I heard a soft voice gently singing near the ending. I'm no good with levels but, to me seems good and it works for this moment. Thank you for the share, good ideas here. Keep at it man, Peace.
Glad you liked the track! I've had this one in my head for a while so it was good to finally get it out. I do indeed write weird music, but i like it. And i appreciate the listen and your review. Thanks man.
I appreciate your comment. I noticed the strings issue during production, but couldn't figure out how to fix it. I'll try panning and mixing some more. I'm glad you liked it... for the most part. Ha.
That's it! You, my friend, are a genius. This is why I love looperman. I noticed the whole strings issue during production, but I couldn't figure out how to fix it. I tried to fix it in my mixing and EQ'ing but it didn't fix the problem. I forgot all about panning. Thank you so much.
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you need to work on your panning...everything sounds to centered...panning will give it a wider sound
when the strings come in at the hook..it just a bit to loud
it's drowning the rest of the instruments.
nice mix tho
Jody