ShortBusMusic

ShortBusMusic

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ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 19th Apr 2011 07:17 - 14 years ago

on Thai Girls fake it by Planetjazzbass
Oh my, Dave you have officially gone over to the dark side, hahaha. This is outstanding. If Pink Floyd put together hip hop beats, this is what they would sound like. Terrific mix, and Dolawhite is one of a kind. Man, I think you guys have created funk/fusion/hip hop. Best track I've heard in the past week.

Definitely added to favorites. Now that you have dipped your toe in the pool, you just might be inundated with requests for collaborations and personal messages asking for beats :)

Outstanding effort and my hat is off to two of my favorite peeps.

Bear

PS, I love the title to this track. But it ain't just Thai girls who fake it, hahahaha.
Planetjazzbass
Planetjazzbass replied Unknown
Hehe..and I have to put up with wearing this big German type helmet and gas mask whenever I go outside!...well at least dressing is easy everything's black! lol..thanks for the thumbs up Bear...you old homie you!..cheers Dave :)
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 19th Apr 2011 03:23 - 14 years ago

on A Tale Of Misfortune by Steinaa
Oh man, this is so good.....I swear I am going to lobby Looperman to give you another 50 slots for more tracks from you. It would be a crying shame to delete anything you have posted, but I crave more, haha.

This one is perfect, absolutely perfect. I hit the favorite button in 2 seconds, hahaha.

FABULOUS!!!!!!

Bear
Steinaa
Steinaa replied Unknown
Hey ShortBus!
50 more slots would be so awesome! Then I wouldnt have to delete a song everytime I finish a new one, haha. Thank you so much for an amazing review buddy - this is what makes me wanna post more songs..! Awesome review man, awesome.. I really, really appreciate your words! Thanks a bunch!
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 19th Apr 2011 03:15 - 14 years ago

on OnlyOne by bbelle
Another nice effort. This one has a nice build to it. Very nice mix with the elements sitting right where they are supposed to be. I am surprised some of the RnB singers on this site haven't jumped on this one yet....

maybe they just haven't heard it yet.

Great job and a stellar track.

Bear
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 19th Apr 2011 03:12 - 14 years ago

on Oliver by bbelle
This is one hell of a good start to what could be an exceptional track. I'd say you could use this as the verse, so all you need now is a chorus and bridge. Don't give up on this one. Dust it off, look for inspiration, and finish it off.

Probably the best 38 seconds I've had in a few days :)

Bear
bbelle
bbelle replied Unknown
Thank you for your comment. I wish I could finish it but these days I can't seem to get inspired to finish anything.
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 17th Apr 2011 16:06 - 14 years ago

on Malfunction by Upright
Nicely chilled. What a great way to start my day....just wish it was about 4 minutes longer, haha. If the rest of this ends up being this chilled, you just might have a hit on your hands. I really like the synth you added and it's got a great beat on it. Let me know when you get it finished and I'll head back over for another listen.

Great work so far!!!

Bear
Upright
Upright replied Unknown
They thanks Bear :)

You captured a great mood with the chord progression in that loop! I do want to add a bassline, and a few other sections...needs a touch of mixing work in the high range. I'll keep you posted!
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 16th Apr 2011 01:38 - 14 years ago

on rEvolution - The Ancestral Taunts by n0mad23
Yes, I have to agree with John, if this is dub, then sign me up. I also agree with you with the use of tags instead of genres. This is outstanding, but all of your work is, so that is no surprise. Absolutely a perfect job to this point. I'm not sure what else you can do to it, but you never disappoint.

You really have a way of constructing great percussion. Freaking genius!!!!!!!!

Off to favorites with this one.
n0mad23
n0mad23 replied Unknown
I got the critique/review I've been waiting for via email, so the next version will really undertake some major revisions. Going to try redoing both the beginning and end of this, and change the break a bit, too. I think it'll be equally groovy, but a bit more "powerful" by the time we're both satisfied with it. Thanks for the encouragement, as well as for the brilliant loops that made much of this possible. But using your loops and Planetjazzbass loops, how could we possibly go wrong? Thanks for the fave. Feeling really good about that thumbs up!
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 11th Apr 2011 16:15 - 14 years ago

on Substance Abuse part2 by 67Ecosse
Hey Craig,

As I told you in the email, this really is a great remix. You thought of many angles I missed, thus making this one much better than the original. Now, combining what you have created with Nuada could really be interesting :)

This is a stellar effort. You can remix anything of mine whenever you want, haha. It would be a pleasure to hear what you could come up with.

Thanks for dusting this one off and taking it to another level. Well done.

Bear
67Ecosse
67Ecosse replied Unknown
Thanks Bear, I really enjoyed working on this track...can't wait to hear nuada's part on this...

as mentioned to nuada I'd would be seriously honored to work with you both on any collabs....bring 'em on!!
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 10th Apr 2011 16:34 - 14 years ago

on You and I by Brent88
Wow, this is stellar work. Great chord progression, great melody, great dynamics and the mix is just about flawless. The change at the 1:15 mark was one of those "goose bump" moments......sheer genius.

This is as good as it gets. Absolutely top notch work and I had to fave this one.

Bear
Brent88
Brent88 replied Unknown
Glad you enjoyed the track Bear! i'm definitely a fan of your work and i appreciate the feedback!
All the best
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 7th Apr 2011 18:05 - 14 years ago

on Jungle Urbaine by Valii
Very, very smooth. Great vocal delivery and I like the effects you've put on the vox as well. Great mix. Song has almost a 007 feel to it, really epic.

Great work sir. Nicely done.

Bear
Valii
Valii replied Unknown
Thanks my friend.

I like your work me too.

Would you know work on my acapella " Je descends dans la discotheque"? English title is I go down the disco.
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 7th Apr 2011 07:42 - 14 years ago

on untitled by nacole
Smooth as silk. Love that piano, it is fabulous. I would love to hear your vocals a bit more forward in the mix because you have a wonderful voice. Other than that, this is flawless work.

Bravo young lady.

Bear
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 7th Apr 2011 07:36 - 14 years ago

on Taking A Second To Breath by YoungWisdom
Hey my friend, really nice job on this one. You have done a masterful job composing around the two different loops, not an easy thing to do. Great percussion on this track as well as a really nice mix and master.

I can imagine you will have several people asking if they can add vocals to this. It will interesting to see what happens. Again, great job.

Bear
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 7th Apr 2011 05:49 - 14 years ago

on We are in Love (DeepProg mix) by Daniboi
I've spent some time on ccMixter and I've heard a few songs using this pella, but I have to say, your interpretation is the best I've heard. Stellar instrumentation and your mix is just about flawless.

Outstanding effort DB. One of the best I've heard in a while. The bass is an 11/10. Great work.

Bear
Daniboi
Daniboi replied Unknown
Thank u o so vry much! Cant wait 2 hear ur beat again wen u put e finishing touches on your beat man, e intro z amazing!!!

Peace!!
d(-_-)b
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 3rd Apr 2011 03:33 - 14 years ago

on Masterpiece by Twanna1
After listening to your other song, I had to have at least one more listen, and I am just amazed at your gift.

I'm trying to figure out who you may sound like...all of the greats come to mind, but I believe you have your own distinct sound and it is incredible.

Another reviewer wondered why you are on Looperman? I concur, but I am also thankful that you have decided to be part of this community.

Another beautiful effort, and another added to my favorites.

Bear
Twanna1
Twanna1 replied Unknown
Again, I am humbled by your kind words of appreciation.

Thank you again Bear.

Blessings,

Twanna
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 3rd Apr 2011 03:28 - 14 years ago

on My Lament by Twanna1
So, at this stage of my life there isn't a lot that leaves me speechless....

but this track has done exactly that. I'm seriously at a loss for words to describe this.

So I hope my standing and giving you a few minutes of applause will suffice.

WOW!!!!!!!

I had to download this one. Thank you for your generosity :)

Bear
Twanna1
Twanna1 replied Unknown
Thank you Bear for you very kind words and appreciation. Creating music has always been an outlet for me to convey where I am at that time. I love your mantra "I only have one life, so what you see is what you get." That would have been a great one for my father to live by.

Thank you again.

Twanna
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 3rd Apr 2011 00:33 - 14 years ago

on it is ever Weekend by zappo
Listening to your music is like attending a master's class in performance and production.

Everything in this one is spot on, beginning with a fabulous bass line and then, like a giant musical cake, adding all of the other ingredients to make this fabulous dish.

Immediately added to favs. Zappo rules the Looperman airwaves.

Bear
zappo
zappo replied Unknown
Thank you for your contribution
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 1st Apr 2011 16:21 - 14 years ago

on Damn by koko761
Nicely done! This one has a "Godfather" feel to it. It would be good for a movie about mobsters. Very nice mix on it as well, crisp production. Outstanding work!!

Bear
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 1st Apr 2011 16:08 - 14 years ago

on I wanna be a super star (Instrumental) by Valii
Very nicely done. I really like the different percussive elements you have combined on this one. Pretty cool synth work too.

Well done.

Bear
Valii
Valii replied Unknown
Thanks.
I'll still work.
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 1st Apr 2011 16:00 - 14 years ago

on April Chill by LarzCreative
Well, you've done it again. The bass is tremendous...while the song is chill, the bass still gives it the impetus it needs to bring the listener in. You mixing and mastering skills keep improving exponentially along with your compositional abilities.

You are rapidly mastering a pretty difficult medium. This is a great track with lots of emotion, but plenty of breathing room as well.

Beautiful work and definitely one I had to add to the favorites :)

Bear
LarzCreative
LarzCreative replied Unknown
Thanks again Bear! Thanks for taking the time to write down your thoughts! Appreciate it! I really like this one a lot! This is my favorite so far. Has a real natural flow to it. Something I've been striving for in my compositions.

Cheers,
Larz
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 29th Mar 2011 22:34 - 14 years ago

on Battle of Castle Fairfield by InsaneSmilie
Really nice cinematic piece and the addition of the vocals is really a great touch. This one brings forth images of great battle scenes and epic struggles. Wonderful work.

Bear
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 29th Mar 2011 22:31 - 14 years ago

on Rocket dbsdott produced by aaron brandon by dbsdott
Well done, really interesting backing track. I enjoyed it. Keep them coming.

Bear
dbsdott
dbsdott replied Unknown
thanks and if u got a youtube check my page out it's dbsdott
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 29th Mar 2011 18:16 - 14 years ago

on Full of Culture by LarzCreative
Very nice. I really like your attention to detail. The mistake a lot of people make with music is they don't look closely enough at the little things. You pay attention and it shows in your music.

You really are gifted. Just keep doing what you are doing. Each song is an incremental step up from your last. It's scary to think how good you will be in a year or two, haha.

Outstanding effort and one of your best tracks.

Well done.

Bear
LarzCreative
LarzCreative replied Unknown
Thanks a lot Bear! I appreciate the comments! ;-) Just having a lot of fun creating different styles of music. This one was a lot of fun and a bit more challenging. I was thinking of how I could use these reggae elements. Let me try to double it up and see how it sounds with a dnb beat. It worked! ;-)

Take Care,
Larz
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 29th Mar 2011 16:54 - 14 years ago

on The Black in Blue by Planetjazzbass
Ear candy....that is what this is, ear candy.

My ears are constantly being assaulted via all forms of media by all sorts of "noise" claiming to be music....

so it is wonderful to know that there are places where one can still find real music. That's why the Loop is the place to be.

This is fantastic. Your bass is always so spot on, and Slap, well he is a freaking genius. But the best part on this was that last chord you played. One word to describe this one - AWESOME!!

Well done Dave (and Slap). Two of the best out there. Thanks for the soothing start to my day. Stay well.

Bear
Planetjazzbass
Planetjazzbass replied Unknown
Sorry for the late reply man!...My Looper housekeeping is never done! lol...Cheers Bear,any comment from you is always appreciated,not only do you understand music and the people making it, you look at life through 'reality' glasses. Dave :)
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 27th Mar 2011 19:15 - 14 years ago

on barry and ern by mrE
Hey Ern,

I forgot about this one....must be old age, haha. Wonderful treatment my friend. You have this marvelous way of taking songs to another level, and this one is no exception.

I hope all is well and thanks for remembering this one.

Bear
mrE
mrE replied Unknown
ur the man bear.thx for including me .
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 27th Mar 2011 18:44 - 14 years ago

on Hug The Bear To Sleep by DextDee
Dext, great job on this. All I did was supply a couple of loops, you did all the rest. Wonderful job and it would be great to hear some of the really good rappers lay some vox over this.

I think my favorite part of this is the bad azz bass you have added.

As usual, you produce some of the best beats on this site, and this one is no exception. Brilliant work. Thanks for the shout out and for allowing me to participate.

Bear
DextDee
DextDee replied Unknown
lol that bass huh, yea i like it too, the banjo, i can imagine myself with it pulling those C and G strings :p
lol thnx for the work man. more to come. much respect to u
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 25th Mar 2011 22:28 - 14 years ago

on Half A Foot Out The Door by Diabolos
Have to agree with simmerdown, sing this like you would sing it in your car. Also, Reaper would give you a much better recording platform, and it is free to use basically, unless you sell your music, then there is a fee. So, upgrade and get back in the recording studio. You have tons of potential, it will be fun to see you realize it. Best of luck.

And welcome to the Loop.

Bear
Diabolos
Diabolos replied Unknown
:) I appreciate it! I download that reaper program and it says it's a 30 day trial thingie. Maybe there's a 100% free download out there. I'll look... it's a little more complicated I noticed then audacity... but if I fiddle around with it and read faq's ... I'm sure it'll be well worth it. Thanks again! I'm going to give your stuff some listens now :)
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