Have you heard "Down On Me" by Jeremih ft. 50 Cent ... Very much like this; I know it's still in progress but it's looking good,
Me as well I rap but I wish I could rap as well as you, If you've got any tips I'd love to hear them...
wow being compared to 50 cent is a pretty big call thanks. the only tips i could really give you is practice. its taken me years to rap like i do now but i probably still got a long way to go to. also if you need help with writing there is a free program available called "verse perfect" its designed to help write tracks and gives you a syllable count per line but can help out with rhymes as well if you get stuck. hope this helps
You should have put this in hip-hop; you've certainly got flow...
I love this song... Me as well I rap and I wish I could rap as well as you;....
Hey I'd like to do a collaboration sometime and if you're interested I'd love to have you on one of my tracks!!
Please respond if you're interested....
As it is the song's a bit spooky... For it to agree with it's title I'd suggest you to add some brass at the chorus...
I like the beeping sound at the start though and I understand why you put the piano folowing that...
I don't get a spooky vibe from this at all, I'm a song writer as well. I usually name it according to what emotion I get from it.. but thanks for the review..
Reminds me of " Telephone " by Lady Gaga... strange beat but well done. For the synth you could maybe change it to strings to start of as an introduction but that doesn't matter much just a sugestion... It's interesting the way it changes and I'd never have imagined to put a guitar in...Nice combination of noise effects on a great melody...
You've got a brilliant beat but the starting synth was sort of deceiving but don't give up after a bit I got used to it: pure electro even though it's the same synth all the time it sounds like different voices in a group singing and rapping..
Dirty electro, not sure how to improve the track...maybe put a bit more force on the synth at some points where it might have been playing for so long you kind of forget about it...but I can asure you it's greattttttt...
Strange I don't see how this may contain adult content with no vocals in...love it all the same...my favourite part of it was the bass acompanyment with the ending synth...
Talking of which the ending synth was strange...it's sort of spooky...
This whole song has a dark sort of feel to it, like it.
Reminds me very much of "Blind" by Jason Derulo...A very uplifting feel to it...totaly enjoyed...The trumpet instrumentals were great...
And I loved your beat; how do you make beats like this cos at the moment I'm having problems making beats?
Never heard one of your things before but this seriously isn't bad ... Your voice is great for any type of hip-hop because it's inbetween rap and singing...
I've only got one suggestion: at the end don't make it fade out..
Strange stuff, it's got a political feel behind it....there's some weird random noises apearing at certain points... but it's nice and it works...though the ending needs changing...
Your avatar reminds me of Black eyed peas just like this song. Enjoyed a lot...this is a strengthening kind of track...love your beat...How do you make beats like this cos I'm awful at making them?!!
This is clear electro, but I suppose it could go in hip hop as well...I like it, I'd love to hear more for this track;
You could maybe rap a slowish rap on this track...
It reminds me of a black eyed peas track...there's potential:
I love your ending....
It needs to be a bit longer though;
I'll download it and think about it...though it might be a bit too raw to add vocals to...at the moment it sounds a bit metal, I might do one verse if I get time...though it's doing well I like the loop that starts at 1:30 If that could be used as a verse loop and maybe use the main melody before that as a chorus instrumental I might be able to rap on the verses....( just an idea )...
the main dubstep line wouldnt be rapped over itd be the hook, but the one straight wobble verse and then that 1:30 beat would be when someone would come in, if it works out let me know!
There's a raw sound behind this, it's a slight bit anthem like and some of it makes me think about a soildier march. Also a bit metal linked. I love your stop/start synth, the ending could maybe be prolonged a bit or made to fade out though..
Yeah I have a hard time pigeon-holing my work into any genres. Most of the time I don't know where it fits until someone tells me. Thanks for the listen.
Me as well I'd love to put some vocals in but I've got loads of other projects in mind; this track is very different from the other hip-hop tracks I hear on this site. It's kind of jazzy, cinematic and hip-hop all at the same time. Some nice percussion in. There's only one little thing: the ending piano note finishes a bit too soon. Make it last longer and fade out so the songs story stays in the listeners head.
Whatever this track is nicely done and not much improvement's needed for this to be agreat song.
I agree man. I was just so focused on showing everyone what I had done in the past few days I forgot about the ending melody. Anywho, I'm revising it as we speak and I feel like everyone will enjoy the revised version a little bit more. Thanks for your input man.
There's a sad piano feel to this, who did you collab with this for? Maybe the beat needs changing, the synth certainly does; I mean it fits perfectly but it's almost too happy for this theme. And the song is still a bit short but don't give up, it's on the right track and it's much better than the stuff I make!!!
An original kind of rap, and a great beat. Yeah, if this is just a demo I'll be interesting to hear the final. Why did you scream at the end, it was weird?
that wasn't me, that's my brother/ artist rapping. we we're just messing around in the studio so just for fun, i kept him laughin' in it. you should listen to the other freestyles
I didn't know you could make music on an ipod...and I didn't know you could make songs this well with it. Where did you find this studio? Me as well I say this isn't a first attempt, nice stuff.
I used nanostudio on the ipod, there is a free full version of nanostudio for the pc and mac but the advantages with the ipod is multi touch so you can press two keys at once,
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Hey I'd like to do a collaboration sometime and if you're interested I'd love to have you on one of my tracks!!
Please respond if you're interested....
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The beats seem a bit quite some of the time but apart from that this is very nice techno melody...
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I like the beeping sound at the start though and I understand why you put the piano folowing that...
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Talking of which the ending synth was strange...it's sort of spooky...
This whole song has a dark sort of feel to it, like it.
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And I loved your beat; how do you make beats like this cos at the moment I'm having problems making beats?
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I've only got one suggestion: at the end don't make it fade out..
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You could maybe rap a slowish rap on this track...
It reminds me of a black eyed peas track...there's potential:
I love your ending....
It needs to be a bit longer though;
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Whatever this track is nicely done and not much improvement's needed for this to be agreat song.
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