Dude what are you using to make the beat? Your drums don't even make sense, out of beat totally. I don't mean to be harsh, and you should not be offended. I take it you just starting out.
you understand how to use space/silence. i like the hesitating, tripping feel you create. it's so hard to make 4 beats in a bar stay fresh and you really get that. i like the orchestral hits and I like the scratching! neat track. all the best! Dan
i like how the beat evolves. that is something i work towards. something is staying the same and something is changing. it's a great technique. that 'scrapping' or 'scratching' sound that interrupts the beat now and then is a great touch. thoroughly enjoying your track my friend. peace.
I'm not a rapper but as a producer I would say that I would if it was me....go back to the drum loops and get everything in time..it seem off to me..I tried to follow the rhythm but I could not get a steady flow.
Being only 15, I think you might have exciting musical future in front of you. I guess you have a soft spot for inventiveness and experimentation which is an important phase in developing your own style and approach to music.Your execution of this particular musical idea shows a portion of good taste! Well done, James! We want to hear more from you.:)
don't mind at all! ^^ btw, talkin of loopradio I listen to it sometimes, when's ya hip-hop show? I'll be listening ;)
I tend to rap instead of making beats though. Feel free to use some of my raps as well :p my fav recent one is the remix to Story Of Our Lives w/ MW$ Flacko ^^
james I'm glad glad to find a new one from tallented U .
also I didn't know harry fraud & french montana & thnx for presenting this cool music & musicians to me . well I hadn't heared main version of track buT what I heared right now in your music was interesting & nice tunes & lovely for me . a terse track which has many potential to be mixed with many other musiX & I enjoyed..many thnx for sharing & all the best.___Behnam
Pretty good homie. The beat was nice,your flow was too, but like you said it was kinda short. If you want to get better at your freestyle then you should just grab a dictionary put a beat on and flip threw and stop and use the first word your eye catches. And just keep flipping threw the pages and using the words you land on, wile you spit. You will get a-lot better.
thanx for the advice and spending time to listen, yeah i think that's what i'll do. i remember doing better freestyles than this, next time i'll try making it a bit longer ^^ and i listened to some of ya joints: they're good!
yea, I guess that was my first attempt at making a beat. quite old this song - funny because I still use only audacity, but anyway: everybody's got to start somewhere. thanx, for your feedback...
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I tend to rap instead of making beats though. Feel free to use some of my raps as well :p my fav recent one is the remix to Story Of Our Lives w/ MW$ Flacko ^^
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also I didn't know harry fraud & french montana & thnx for presenting this cool music & musicians to me . well I hadn't heared main version of track buT what I heared right now in your music was interesting & nice tunes & lovely for me . a terse track which has many potential to be mixed with many other musiX & I enjoyed..many thnx for sharing & all the best.___Behnam
I appreciate ya feedback very much :)
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