This is clear electro, but I suppose it could go in hip hop as well...I like it, I'd love to hear more for this track;
You could maybe rap a slowish rap on this track...
It reminds me of a black eyed peas track...there's potential:
I love your ending....
It needs to be a bit longer though;
I'll download it and think about it...though it might be a bit too raw to add vocals to...at the moment it sounds a bit metal, I might do one verse if I get time...though it's doing well I like the loop that starts at 1:30 If that could be used as a verse loop and maybe use the main melody before that as a chorus instrumental I might be able to rap on the verses....( just an idea )...
the main dubstep line wouldnt be rapped over itd be the hook, but the one straight wobble verse and then that 1:30 beat would be when someone would come in, if it works out let me know!
There's a raw sound behind this, it's a slight bit anthem like and some of it makes me think about a soildier march. Also a bit metal linked. I love your stop/start synth, the ending could maybe be prolonged a bit or made to fade out though..
Yeah I have a hard time pigeon-holing my work into any genres. Most of the time I don't know where it fits until someone tells me. Thanks for the listen.
Me as well I'd love to put some vocals in but I've got loads of other projects in mind; this track is very different from the other hip-hop tracks I hear on this site. It's kind of jazzy, cinematic and hip-hop all at the same time. Some nice percussion in. There's only one little thing: the ending piano note finishes a bit too soon. Make it last longer and fade out so the songs story stays in the listeners head.
Whatever this track is nicely done and not much improvement's needed for this to be agreat song.
I agree man. I was just so focused on showing everyone what I had done in the past few days I forgot about the ending melody. Anywho, I'm revising it as we speak and I feel like everyone will enjoy the revised version a little bit more. Thanks for your input man.
There's a sad piano feel to this, who did you collab with this for? Maybe the beat needs changing, the synth certainly does; I mean it fits perfectly but it's almost too happy for this theme. And the song is still a bit short but don't give up, it's on the right track and it's much better than the stuff I make!!!
An original kind of rap, and a great beat. Yeah, if this is just a demo I'll be interesting to hear the final. Why did you scream at the end, it was weird?
that wasn't me, that's my brother/ artist rapping. we we're just messing around in the studio so just for fun, i kept him laughin' in it. you should listen to the other freestyles
I didn't know you could make music on an ipod...and I didn't know you could make songs this well with it. Where did you find this studio? Me as well I say this isn't a first attempt, nice stuff.
I used nanostudio on the ipod, there is a free full version of nanostudio for the pc and mac but the advantages with the ipod is multi touch so you can press two keys at once,
we can say that, country, is like root rock a mixture of country and rock, harmonica one of the instrumets i find appropriate for this special track , don t give up harmonica requires time of practice
Thnx 4 e review. Checkd ur beat earlier, cnt wait 2 hear wat t wl sound lyk wen ts dne. Hey, u shud kp pushng ur beats man, i startd ths beat making thng lyk wen i was 13 or 12 z wel nd yeah, t cn b quite frustrating at 1st. Bt i like e fact tht ur nt gving up nd u hv e guts 2 post ur work, regardles of lack of experience, nd wat ppl may thnk. I cn tel tht u gna b HUGE 1 dæ, nd t wl happen f u just kp experimenting nd find ur formula, nd frm there learn 2 use ur 'intuition', 2 create ur own artistc compositionz of ur own.
Me as well I'm not sure, I'd maybe have put it under ambient because of the dark magic scary feeling it brings to the listener, but then I'm not sure if it's abstract enough. Maybe with a few changes it could go under rock. Love your drums and that's what made me think about rock. Maybe metal.
There's some interesting background noises which make it sound like there's a crowd behind. In fact it's almost like you could lost in this. A realy scary track.
Nice thing a hip-hop kind of track based on a soaring rock melody. Me as well I've made a few rap tracks based on rap melodies. Certainly a great melody and a great acapella which perfectly fits with the guitar. Maybe a bit short but nonetheless well done.
One thing that's interesting about your tracks is the different sorts of culture involved. This track perfectly illustrates the chinese culture under a hip-hop form; this stuff might also have been put under traditional.
Nice chopsticks!!!
Thanks James. I see what you mean about traditional. Your are quite right there are different cultural themes in a lot of my tracks. Thanks for the review. Will be sure to review some more of your tracks also.
Some of this stuff sounds like a great theme for a catch ring. The electric guitar on the chorus sounds quite agressive. Nice stuff. This track might have also been able to be put under metal, it's slightly got that dark sort of feeling. I certainly agree with your title.
Great kicking bass, nice listening to. I did find there wasn't much beat but the synth that was very imposing almost erased that effect.
If anything it's a bit short but I suppose if it's just a little remix that doesn't matter much.
Nice stuff. A bit dance/hip-hop like. Can't wait for the vocal version. This is the second grime track I've listened to. Grime seems a bit like hip-hop.
Great feel for this, nice and party but which stillis taken a bit more in to rap by the strings. Well done for the beat. I'm awful at making beats and if you've got any tips I'd be grateful.
Yeah, love it. It's maybe a bit repetitive not sure.
Thanks for your advice on the microphone. Thinking of getting a different one and if you ever want to use one of my acapellas they're totaly free.
Reminded me of pirates of the caribean a lot. The whole is very well done and your synth is super. Maybe it's missing a bit of beat but not much else. I'd maybe have chosen a dfferent name but that ain't my choice. Your right though; it's a great track. I've faved.
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You could maybe rap a slowish rap on this track...
It reminds me of a black eyed peas track...there's potential:
I love your ending....
It needs to be a bit longer though;
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I am sure that will be cool.
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Whatever this track is nicely done and not much improvement's needed for this to be agreat song.
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Thnx 4 e review. Checkd ur beat earlier, cnt wait 2 hear wat t wl sound lyk wen ts dne. Hey, u shud kp pushng ur beats man, i startd ths beat making thng lyk wen i was 13 or 12 z wel nd yeah, t cn b quite frustrating at 1st. Bt i like e fact tht ur nt gving up nd u hv e guts 2 post ur work, regardles of lack of experience, nd wat ppl may thnk. I cn tel tht u gna b HUGE 1 dæ, nd t wl happen f u just kp experimenting nd find ur formula, nd frm there learn 2 use ur 'intuition', 2 create ur own artistc compositionz of ur own.
Best of luck Peace
d(^_^)b
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There's some interesting background noises which make it sound like there's a crowd behind. In fact it's almost like you could lost in this. A realy scary track.
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Nice chopsticks!!!
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If anything it's a bit short but I suppose if it's just a little remix that doesn't matter much.
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Thanks for your advice on the microphone. Thinking of getting a different one and if you ever want to use one of my acapellas they're totaly free.
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thx u got gd acapellas and sounds :)
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A very strange idea behind here but nonetheless that's worked, nice.