One of the best old school tracks I've heard. Nice feel of beat which goes nicely with the guitar. True I found it a bit short but deadly efficient to pass it's message.
Love it.
A bit of old school mixed with rock. Nice effect. I think the vocals play an essential part here. A simple but nice kicking beat. Continue making more robot noise.
Strange, I thought I'd get tired of listening to this after a while but I didn't. Me as well I feel it's a beautiful melody.
I suppose the beat is your adding but that just stops the listener from becoming bored. The strings as well probably.
It's realy beautiful. Well done.
Me as well sometimes when I'm playing the piano I feel as if my fingers are doing the talking, good luck...
Nice, yeah I was feeling this.
Were you inspired by william from black eyed peas because the voice on the chorus reminded me of him?
Yeah, this is pretty solid. Me as well I rap but I'm awful at writing lyrics. If you've got any tips on how to write lyrics like this please tell me.
Nice work though, keep on rapping.
Thanks man. The best tip I can give about writing is an honest one: Write what you know. If u try to write just to sound like everybody else, ur product will sound forced or fake. If you write what u know, the words come naturally.
Good luck man...
thanks James for that reveiw.I do know that my guitar had been sitting in my closet for a decade before i got her out.Shes an ole Cort strat so it does sort of ave that 70s sound to it doesnt it.Bless ya bro
I love these pop sounds. I'm able to make them but I find I find it hard recording them. The synth around it all makes it a bit ambient. I love it. The vocals also great, a bit quite but that didn't matter.
I'd love to rap and or sing on to this. The only problem is I'm not great on writing lyrics. I you've got any advice on that please tell me.
However I did download this so if I decide to I can have a go.
I suppose you refer to the lyrics. I'm sorry if you felt offended. That wasn't my intention.
However, I put the hint "May Contain Adult Content !!" when uploading this track.
A strange track. The beat is great.
What was weird though was the little guitar parts. They kind of gave an ambiance to the track, gave it some changes of melody here and there and made it interesting.
I'd probably have put it under rap but then rap and hip-hop are pretty much the same.
Yeah, I'd love to but I'm not great at writing lyrics:
If you have any help to give on this please tell me.
Anyway, I'm downloading this so I don't forget it and if I do find some lyrics I might have a go.
I certainly enjoyed listening to this and I hope you'll continue to make tracks like this.
ppreciate the feedback cuzo ... Im no lyrical writer so unfortunately I cant give ya any hints o ndat but Im sure youll find the right people here on looperman. keeepu up cheerz dusty
Very interesting inspiring track with some electronic melodies.
I did find there wasn't much beat but that's quite good because it leaves space for the beat to build up.
It realy felt like I was travelling through thousands of small holes in the ground at high speed.
On the whole a great production if you add that name to it.
You were absolutely right to choose this name.
You rap quite well, me as well I use audacity and I rap.
Do you do any other songs like this in which you rap?
If you wanna do a collaboration I'd love to do one.
I've only got one problem with lyrics, I'm not great at writing them.
Yeah, I certainly need the lyrics to understand the song.
I couldn't comment on your voice after all the comments I get on my own in my songs.
If anything your voice I thought should have been louder.
Interesting ending with the gunshot.
Yeah, I'd love to have you on one of my tracks; anyone my voice isn't already on: just pick one! There's only one problem I don't know if I've got anything your style. Maybe you could try New Generation: even though it says it's rap it could also sort of be Rock.
Anyway even if you don't want to, good luck all the same.
Why this so short? I mean I wish there was more. I was just getting used to the melody when it faded out.
Also at certain points I heard some vocals so I was hoping there'd be some rap.
I mean I'm not saying it was bad; on the contrary it's great. I just wish there was more.
I don't listen to much electronic music, so I wouldn't know if this is electronic or not but even if it isn't it's super.
I understand what you mean by it's quite old but it does all the same have some good ideas inside it.
The Synth fitted perfectly with the beat. At somes parts it might have been a bit repetitive but I couldn't realy judge.
After all I'm not super at making music myself.
Yeah, why you choose to rap in greek I don't know but it certaintly sounds interesting. Me personally I'm a fan of it. There's only one annoying thing: I can't understand the lyrics!
Nice, I enjoyed listening to the rapping and singing together on a track. Everything here has been well put together, from the vocals to the beat. I just wish it was a bit longer.
A quite sad track which sounded pretty real.
An interesting beat behind this and great poetry. The synth also was great.
I've never listened to a Spoken Word track before but I hope this won't be the last one listen to.
Sounded a bit short if anything but apart from that a very touching track.
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Love it.
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I suppose the beat is your adding but that just stops the listener from becoming bored. The strings as well probably.
It's realy beautiful. Well done.
Me as well sometimes when I'm playing the piano I feel as if my fingers are doing the talking, good luck...
on The Judgement by JcanSensation79
Were you inspired by william from black eyed peas because the voice on the chorus reminded me of him?
Yeah, this is pretty solid. Me as well I rap but I'm awful at writing lyrics. If you've got any tips on how to write lyrics like this please tell me.
Nice work though, keep on rapping.
Good luck man...
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Yeah, a nice surprise. A very unique track to my mind.
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However I did download this so if I decide to I can have a go.
on Blut by Hirogenium
However, I put the hint "May Contain Adult Content !!" when uploading this track.
Anyway, thank you for your opinion.
on Sardinia by HDMRecords
What was weird though was the little guitar parts. They kind of gave an ambiance to the track, gave it some changes of melody here and there and made it interesting.
I'd probably have put it under rap but then rap and hip-hop are pretty much the same.
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If you have any help to give on this please tell me.
Anyway, I'm downloading this so I don't forget it and if I do find some lyrics I might have a go.
I certainly enjoyed listening to this and I hope you'll continue to make tracks like this.
on Goin In by REDdro
I did find there wasn't much beat but that's quite good because it leaves space for the beat to build up.
on Digital Worm Hole by KenichiOhme
On the whole a great production if you add that name to it.
You were absolutely right to choose this name.
on Wake up by Benreu
Do you do any other songs like this in which you rap?
If you wanna do a collaboration I'd love to do one.
I've only got one problem with lyrics, I'm not great at writing them.
on Maniacal by Jtwitch
I might like to rap on to it there's only one problem: I'm awful at writing lyrics.
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I couldn't comment on your voice after all the comments I get on my own in my songs.
If anything your voice I thought should have been louder.
Interesting ending with the gunshot.
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Anyway even if you don't want to, good luck all the same.
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Also at certain points I heard some vocals so I was hoping there'd be some rap.
I mean I'm not saying it was bad; on the contrary it's great. I just wish there was more.
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I understand what you mean by it's quite old but it does all the same have some good ideas inside it.
The Synth fitted perfectly with the beat. At somes parts it might have been a bit repetitive but I couldn't realy judge.
After all I'm not super at making music myself.
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An interesting beat behind this and great poetry. The synth also was great.
I've never listened to a Spoken Word track before but I hope this won't be the last one listen to.
Sounded a bit short if anything but apart from that a very touching track.