A Better Place A Better Time UNFINISHED - Hoptix

21st Mar 2011 06:45 - 15 years ago
Description : So this is what I've created after actually spending more than a few hours on a song. I've been working this one for a couple days now and I'm pretty satisfied with how its going. I still have lots of editing to do on this but I was too excited to show you guys so I couldn't wait. So this is a preview of my song "A Better Place, A Better Time." The basic layout of the song is going to remain the same so if anyone would like to spit some lyrics over this that would be awesome. And as always give me a review if you liked it or didn't like it, its always appreciated.

Comments (7)

If you have time take a listen and give Hoptix some feedback.

Audain
Audain 23rd Apr 2011 14:41 - 15 years ago
This is an amazing track. really feeling this one. Was that the Party Next Door filter you used for the intro?
LeeVoorhees
LeeVoorhees 6th Apr 2011 02:12 - 15 years ago
Rough Draft of collab posted : https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/101601
JamesDavies
JamesDavies 2nd Apr 2011 06:53 - 15 years ago
Me as well I'd love to put some vocals in but I've got loads of other projects in mind; this track is very different from the other hip-hop tracks I hear on this site. It's kind of jazzy, cinematic and hip-hop all at the same time. Some nice percussion in. There's only one little thing: the ending piano note finishes a bit too soon. Make it last longer and fade out so the songs story stays in the listeners head.
Whatever this track is nicely done and not much improvement's needed for this to be agreat song.
Hoptix
Hoptix replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
I agree man. I was just so focused on showing everyone what I had done in the past few days I forgot about the ending melody. Anywho, I'm revising it as we speak and I feel like everyone will enjoy the revised version a little bit more. Thanks for your input man.
eenani
eenani 1st Apr 2011 22:56 - 15 years ago
can imagine this working well with a documentary. will let you know if it's ever a fit. cheers!
Hoptix
Hoptix replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
That would be awesome. I would love to see what this song is useful for. Let me know!
LeeVoorhees
LeeVoorhees 31st Mar 2011 23:46 - 15 years ago
I would love to spit on it , it has nice instrumentation and melody ... Heres the rough draft collab link https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/101601
Hoptix
Hoptix replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
That would be sick man. Post a link here if you decide too.
Rockym778
Rockym778 25th Mar 2011 21:30 - 15 years ago
love how you work the beat in, awesome sounds and great work. love it,love it,love it..
CFactor
CFactor 21st Mar 2011 07:05 - 15 years ago
Nice intro i like the piano and bass lines. good drum work. very solid track.

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