it is beautiful texture with sort of a ping pong effect i think going on in the bells between channels? seems complete in and of itself. thought for a minute the opening wanted something melodic in the bass. but then as the track built I understood that it should stay simple. so I don't know - are you looking for a collab still on this? peace.
The bass is rich. I guess u r looking for a lyric. boy workinmickey D's Tatoos on his arm diamond in his ear. workin his gig. Doing the right things. The beats are in his head. Dreeamin bout his production. Free association. Good luck with developing the neat feeling here. Cheers
Had another listen. Maybe a new synth fading in at the end and bringing in a new little section? Will give it a shot. I like the use of the drum in this. Peace.
at 1:42 I like how everything stops and you just get the bass for a second. you have a lot of interesting elements and they are def spooky and you put them together in a way that does give the nightmare feel. nice work. i guess you are looking for a rap on this, right?
hey hey hey...like a shovel my friend...lol....for it is indeed an awesome addition , for the blend of minds to share a common goal and message in the form of art is yet just another means to speak from the heart ..thank you so much for the share of your interests and talents...much peace be to thee..chill!!!!!!!!!
nice harmonies, nice playing also! new color at 1:05 is beautiful. might be some interesting ways to enhance transition to your new section at 1:50. thoroughly enjoy what you are doing here. all the best. Dan
interesting work with nice contrasting sections. that is a beautiful oboe sound you found. at the end what I hear is a fugue (of several voices of woodwinds that could develop and transition to a recap section. does that interest you? let me know. regards - Dan
Hello, Midisparks! First, thank you for the nice review. Feel free to the develop this last section to your liking. Let me know if anythink turns out. All the best, TinyFinger.
a beautiful meditation. a float in space. a walk on the moon. i think there is some interesting work to be done in mastering this neat ambient peace. there is certainly room for a few more samples. I like it a lot. I would enjoy working on this with you. let me know what you want to do. peace. Dan
THX a lot! it s apleasure to have a return from a self work!
you can do everything with this track, if you succeed in downloading it. Sorry for my english, i have a second fault, at the less, i begin, but i don't finish a lot of things..please do it for me!
peace. Law
thoughts of mystery has me by the gills, breathe cannot this link ,as try eye to no avail so onwards shall eye search until to listen to yon grand sound art of collaboration be fill mine ears with tune sanctum yea though eye extend many thanx indeed ....hopeful am eye that there may be others too whom may join along this mission to speak out a message with music, so call out doth eye to all speakers singers musicians of all walks so as to unite a voice to awaken the sleep of we in this lost existence....much peace friend
Awesome indeed .... truly to unite minds that Sparks chords in positive strides towards a better means of humanity to think is to Face less chance for positively sour grapes to grow hate in the Mid of mind....time to take a turn for the better as the worse requires no effort to be.......much peace indeed
you are doing a nice job with the string arranging/mixing. hats off with it. what program/sounds are you using? what are you mixing in? you are right about what to add - guitars, bass, drums, I hear it also. nice work so far. Dan
Actually I found these loops on Looperman (I cannot remember who was the original creators were, but there was at least 3 who I searched) and did a trial and error test run.
When placing them together in a song, I actually use Audacity and export it.
someone told me little Harrisburg, PA (my town) is beating Philadelphia in number of homicides, and that is crazy. so we have to hope for the boys to put the guns down somehow, someway.
what are you looking for in the collab? there is room for more going on in the bass I think, and there is room for some riffs. let me know. peace. Dan
First off....
How are you? eye do hope that all is well , and then with true appreciation many thanx for the listen in and intricate review , as breaks the heart of thought when the loss of life can become a competitor's stamp when statistics compare city to city and nation to nation's qualities of life and lack there of for that matter. As it seems terms spoken of politicians, staves at the president and govornment and justice vs citizens fail to speak into the deep ear of inner thought, this is from my hopes to perhaps speak through music in a way to prove to be sound candy yet at the same time prove nutricious for the heart and mind . So please where you feel to hear room for your imagination to share and flow please do take this as tool of means of hope that just maybe it can reach the shores of sanity love and regards of life to blossom unity and peace .....to spare humanity so that notions to use weapons can lay to rest and no longer continue allowance of weapons laying to rest the the individuals of humanity ....... again many thanx ... much respect
i'm the same. sometimes have to take a time out from the social media to focus deeply and create somethin' good. You have done that here in spades and big congrats. great synthwork at the beginning and throughout, and drops are all rave-worthy! cheeers!
awesome drumwork and rhythm groove. i am definitely transported to a smoky club on the wrong side of the tracks with this one! if you wanted to bring up the vocal in the mix I would not complain because the singing is awesome also. same with the solo I am listening to now. big congrats on your work! peace.
what i am liking is the transparent quality - all the parts are crystal clear and balanced. it's a very chill mood you create with the music and interesting contrast to the lyric which is not exactly chill! nice work. thoroughly enjoyed! peace.
i really marvel at how well you mix the lows. that is the hardest bit for me. your choice of loops and mixing of them is superb. thoroughly enjoying! i hope you are winning that age-old battle! cheers, Pat!
Hey, thank you for stopping in my friend, it's always good to hear from you! I'm happy that the bass side of things is leaving a good impression, as I've put a lot of effort into learning how to keep it sounding good. Between the loops I find on Looperman, and the others I've collected over time, I have a lot to chose from now. That really helps when limited to loops. Thank you for your well wishes, I think the old bastard is staying in his place now and not murdering that I can see. I appreciate the comment!
very sweet sound. pleasure to listen to. i like the phrasing of the vocalist - sweet - then at the end a few hard words. the way you bring the groove a little hotter, a little cooler throughout maintains nice interest. peace!
Thanx 4 lending your ear, the track was produced by LttleBrams....I added my skillz of riding the beat....my only other offer was a slight touch of mastering which only brightened his mix....LilB deserves the credit 4 that one..
sounds good to me. sometimes I just look at the wave form and can tell how interesting it is gonna be. I mean, there are discreet sections, and you can see that intensity levels change up. as for the sounds - it's very sophisticated and impressive from where I stand. peace.
it's nice how you transition into the mandolin solo. don't hear a solo like that very often. it should not be the last time you put mandolin in a track! regards. Dan
hey what's up Dan ? nice to meet U after awhile ..
many thnx Dan for attention & kind feedback about my mandolin playing .(ps:Dan I got your message, okay,soon I'll write a short autobiographic presentation for there ..just let me back home from mission...& many many thnx)___B
prophet of doom vocals! big like! mix is outrageously cool! always a new sound, something fresh coming up around the corner. super mix Pat! big congrats!
Hey friend, thanks for stopping in! Doom vocals, that's interesting, haven't heard that specific term before. I guess it fits what I've been doing lately. Cool! Happy you enjoyed the mix! Have almost TOO MANY ideas lately, so I just have to pick one and take it to it's conclusion, so expect something different next time. Appreciate the support!
beautiful string melody and perfect transition to your synths (drop). i like the use of plucked sounds in this second section. i wonder if you adjusted the volume of the singing since the comment about it being too loud because it sounds well-balanced now (and amazing high notes!). beautiful work. congratulations.
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hope you dig it.
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what are you looking for in the collab? there is room for more going on in the bass I think, and there is room for some riffs. let me know. peace. Dan
How are you? eye do hope that all is well , and then with true appreciation many thanx for the listen in and intricate review , as breaks the heart of thought when the loss of life can become a competitor's stamp when statistics compare city to city and nation to nation's qualities of life and lack there of for that matter. As it seems terms spoken of politicians, staves at the president and govornment and justice vs citizens fail to speak into the deep ear of inner thought, this is from my hopes to perhaps speak through music in a way to prove to be sound candy yet at the same time prove nutricious for the heart and mind . So please where you feel to hear room for your imagination to share and flow please do take this as tool of means of hope that just maybe it can reach the shores of sanity love and regards of life to blossom unity and peace .....to spare humanity so that notions to use weapons can lay to rest and no longer continue allowance of weapons laying to rest the the individuals of humanity ....... again many thanx ... much respect
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