I like it so far. Some suggestions would be to vary things up a bit as the beat gets a bit repetitive. Also try adding other synths and maybe an extra piano part at the middle of it will make it better. Good job so far, with the right amount of work, this track could be a really good one!

I must say that people that do this kind of stuff Drum and Bass are awesome! seems pretty hard to get everything right.... But i liked it very soft actually! ;)

Changing the chord scheme after a while is a good idea since it now gets a bit repetitive after a while

I like the bass line, but what happen to the beat around 0:45? it fades a little and then it never get back to the starting level. I'd try to work on the chords, maybe adding sounds in the harmonics... which chords it's up on you and the idea of tune that you have in mind :) Some soulful chord would fit very well, imho.

Keep it up!

Sounds pretty good so far and you could easily change the tempo and throw in some dubstep or orchestration or just continue this with some variation like a key change.

This could develop in many directions, so it's hard to suggest anything in particular. The basis is well done and produced and I think you don't need a new intro, because this fadein with raising brightness in the sound works extremely well and could be considered as a sort of an intro. For the rest of the track maybe some pads would come handy and perhaps an addition of a more distinctive solo instrument (like sax for example). All in all you have a good platform for further development...wish you successful continuation of your work!

All the best____Orlando

I like the fadein, where things are indistinct and then become a lot clearer.

Maybe have some sort of pad sound on top of that? Or some other lead so that the d'n'b fades in underneath.

Simple main keyboard line that works just fine and the drums sit well. Tiny bit of something like guiro there panned to the right.

Build and break just before 1:01 is a nice subtle touch and the track takes off a little bit more after that.

Good delayed piano (?) right at the end. Use more of that during the full track and let the delayed note spill out over the beat.

It's hard to know how to suggest you take this further.

But you could change to a different, maybe bigger bass later and move the drums more to the ride/crash. Those are just obvious things so not much real help there.

Good luck with it as it all sounds well produced so no criticism there.

For now I can say you are going in the right direction, I will think of how to continue this for a bit but can't tell you just yet ;)

it is a hot mix of percussion and you get all of the sounds coming through clearly in their proper place. no easy task. it is a subtle energy that you achieve - but there is great energy for sure. great start! don't let it go! all the best.