Not sure, I think its alright. The snare at times is a lil low, but then again I wasnt looking for the percussion to dominate in this, I did however want it to create a mellowdramatic feel and move the track along.
Thanks for the synth compliment, I really dig what came out of it this time as well. I try and make sure that i dont seq it, but rather play it out with feeling. That usually works out well.
Thanks for the listen.
lmao thanks for your time, and im sorry u feel
that way about a 6 year old track
but thats how a lot of tracks sounded on tape
b4 i got a computer!!! so if u wanna run thats fine
but i think u forgot u are a novice member, u will never be on my level no time soon with 30 songs posted and 180 reviews.....179 good ones with one hator (u).....also working thru three diffrent genres, u need to do your home work
and check out 20 of my tracks about you you you
hator, all my tracks are real keep negativity to yourself!!!
Hey Man! Thanks for the review! :) That was what I was going for as Venice is a very unique place so I wanted to pour that essence into a unique sounding track! Have a nice day! Glad you enjoyed it!
ONE i spoke clearly,and spoke slowly so you not knowing what im saying is completely your problem dude XD but i still needed to edit the vocals,im not goin 2 though cuz im suppose to do it over. what you meant by wrong category?
Hey thanks. I think it needs a vocal track to wrap the music around and give it a little more framework (and direction). Wish I knew a good rapper that had some words for it!
needs a bit more pop to even rock well in the clubs.
plus it needs a bit more build up and direction.
almost seemed like it was moving forward then it dropped off.
Yeah I figured I would give it a try. I'm still finding out what works for my voice. Always tricky when doing cover songs...they either work or they suck lol..no in between about it lol.
Thanks for the review... but I don't have the original anything, as it was recorded by a friend years ago. As I say in the description I'm looking to do a total overhaul of everything.
*edit I read some more of your reviews, and listened to some of your tracks which makes me feel better about this one...
As you say there's nothing wrong with being honest I think it's your lact of tact that upsets everyone.
Honestly, you p1ss people off cuz you come across as an arrogant pr1ck rather than someone offering helpful advice (which I now realize is what you were trying to do)
Learn some humility, show respect and half you're track reviews won't be people just responding to the fairly rude things you say. No hard feelings felt, or meant by this by the way, peace and love brother, you've given me a positive review before, just trying to help with all the hostility you seem to receive.
on Winter Ice by BrokenScythe
I don't think the timing on the drumming is on point.
but the keyboard work is awesome.
Thanks for the synth compliment, I really dig what came out of it this time as well. I try and make sure that i dont seq it, but rather play it out with feeling. That usually works out well.
Thanks for the listen.
on go harder mr carter by donmega
Whoever thought this vocal thing up it doesn't work for the song.
And why does the audio sound like you guys are tired from running around or something.
Get a better mic try again.
The more I hear this it makes me want to run.
that way about a 6 year old track
but thats how a lot of tracks sounded on tape
b4 i got a computer!!! so if u wanna run thats fine
but i think u forgot u are a novice member, u will never be on my level no time soon with 30 songs posted and 180 reviews.....179 good ones with one hator (u).....also working thru three diffrent genres, u need to do your home work
and check out 20 of my tracks about you you you
hator, all my tracks are real keep negativity to yourself!!!
on DJ DragoN-Un Giorno In Venezia by DJsDragoN
on Hell and back by BARBARASUN1019
I can bounce to this.
stay steady homie
on Dubstep 1 by Apieceoftofu
this thing has a life of its own.
on Im right Here by sincomai
Next the song sounds so mixed up I can't begin to play it all.
clean up the vocal track and lose some of the effects on them.
maybe people can hear it
on Looking for Meaning by ResistanceIsFutile
Thanks
on INTRODUCTION (dont trip) by notebookwarior
yeah the music is smooth
enuff said
on Lament by Tiltedbeats
nice work on this one... lets download it hint hint
on Change Of Thought by venture91
Keep this rolling man!!
on Evil Christmas by JaNgLz
You could go anywhere with this keep it smooth flowing.
on Goin Home by AllenV
I like what you have done with this I can't even begin to complain.
which is rare for me.
Allen
on Twelve by DJSchmeeJ
I see this can go somewhere - just get it there for us.
on GREAT TO BE BACK by OPENMINDSDB
plus it needs a bit more build up and direction.
almost seemed like it was moving forward then it dropped off.
on Take My Breath Away Cover Song by santiagosky
seems your talent is wasted on this song.
on DISCONNECT by MADVICKO
bump up the bassline a bit more
on Buddahmann Feat Farisha - Im rule the world by RBmusic
This effect is so over done its not even funny.
We might as well stop singing.
the track itself has strong points but like I said.
on The Next Gen by Se7enFX
a bit heavy handed with the "ping pong" effect
I can see this working for someone down the road.
on Melody by Becca
but I would still change the tempo.
hmmm
on I Treat my Girl With Respect by Thethanx
sounds like someone was pounding it.
The vocal work needs to be polished badly.
the music itself needs to be cleaned up and balanced out.
Work to be done here.
*edit I read some more of your reviews, and listened to some of your tracks which makes me feel better about this one...
As you say there's nothing wrong with being honest I think it's your lact of tact that upsets everyone.
Honestly, you p1ss people off cuz you come across as an arrogant pr1ck rather than someone offering helpful advice (which I now realize is what you were trying to do)
Learn some humility, show respect and half you're track reviews won't be people just responding to the fairly rude things you say. No hard feelings felt, or meant by this by the way, peace and love brother, you've given me a positive review before, just trying to help with all the hostility you seem to receive.
on electrix by shamas
I was bored till then.
YEAH good work
on Battle Of Will by DJFredrick
the volume of the whole mix is low.
Plus is seems to be lacking in a bit of the instrumentation.
overall it seems ok other than that.
on The Saga Continues by BluntsAndBeats
whole song.
Would I be wrong to say this is a bit too short?
Yeah keep it up nice n smooth flow.
you kinda inspired me to put a lil bit extra in there, uploaded a new version! hah so thanks
on Groove all nite by djnals
Yeah a dance beat thing for sure but it should be put together a bit better at least for replay value not just a test play here and there.
Polish this thing off.
on funtime at 4am by lazyboy
look forward to hearing more from you.