The Games You Play - Kriebel17

I like the track. Its great as is, but with bass and druums, a bit of production, this baby would kick.

Faved

John

Nice this one really call me my attention i love the guitar you have charming voice maybe with some drums and another instrument
will sound greater.
good work

all the best

silvestre

Love the guitars, the lyrics are telling its own story.

Yep i know that story too well, you sing it right dude!! this track could be made better with a bit of drums.

But hey, it's good.

Peace...

i actually really enjoyed this track, it's really relatable, and thats very important. the vocals are very powerful, but they're not really focused. now i dont consider myself the best singer, but i do know that if you were to take a little time and practice the pitches with an instrument, piano would be best if you have one or something similar. just to give them a real sturdy ground.

i also enjoyed the accoustic guitar. i thought it went well together with the lyrics and the vocals. it has a nice melody to it. my biggest thing here though, is that the Song doesn't take off. and if this is just your rough version i have no doupt that you can make something truely fantastic out of it.

now this is just me and you dont have to do this but i think it could pick the song of the ground.

introduce it the same way, but then make a small break, and bring in the drums on a crash, and a sustained guitar in the back ground coming in with the crash.
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then bring it back down a tid bit with your original guitar line, but with drums behind it that follow it and continue your song.
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i have many more idea's but i dont want to waste too much of your time. i saw the protential of this and i just couldn't resist
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However as is, this is a very protential track, the idea of it is perfect and the guitar is flawless. the lyrics cut pretty deep and your voice is very powerfull. Now i understand this is Your scene here, but in the case you wanted any help on this id be more than willing for a collaboration. and even help you out on the background vox, if your interested let me know, if you have any questions or concerns, contact me.

- Much respect Fayz

Sounds like this needs to be some sort of screamo rock tune.

I don't know if you feeling pain or about to burst out in joy.

maybe you need a lead man to do this and bring IT!!

Lyndon Jones used this backing track no? it's good.

nice picking pattern on this, keep it up