Man, youve got talent. This is a really good track. I honestly think that this is how a trance track should sound. With the buildup, bass, kicks and arps. Also the sweeps are pretty cool.
But when you switch the two arp melodies over at 1:47, it just dosent really work, and im afraid that the second melody really... isnt that good. I do not hate this song though, it just needs a little bit of work that all.
I am not going all negative on you, I am pointing out the parts I think are good and the parts I think are bad. But to end on a positive note, I think you did well.
Hey, I'm glad you could enjoy this track! It was fun to make. I can definitely see why this makes you think about factories, it must be that constructive caffiene energy. Thanks for the listen and the review!
on Always in had by Tranxce
But when you switch the two arp melodies over at 1:47, it just dosent really work, and im afraid that the second melody really... isnt that good. I do not hate this song though, it just needs a little bit of work that all.
I am not going all negative on you, I am pointing out the parts I think are good and the parts I think are bad. But to end on a positive note, I think you did well.
on Coffee Clamp by Spivkurl
Im not sure why.
Keep up the good work :D
on Blue Trance Project Remake by Afterglow
You were definatley right to revisit this song cos if you didnt well, this review wouldnt be here would it.
One thing I do dislike is the pitch changes in the arp. It just dosent work too well.
But overall, I think this is the meaning of trance. good job.