StephenPotter

This may well be *very old* but this thing sounds pretty good. The bass is the right pitch, and those riffs at 30 seconds are great. The buildup time is about the right, and there is certainly a lot goin on in this song.

Because I like this thing so much, im gonna favourite this song.

I dont know how you can improve this, so I wont put any points for improvement.

Great song!

another one of your amazing trance tracks favorited, another load of inspiration from you. Im very impressed with it all, the way the pads and the arp fit together.

I can see how you listened to above and beyond, because it does sound a bit like their work, but you havent stole anything off them.

I love the fact that its a good four minutes long, gives me something to listen to when Im goin somewhere. I love 3:41 the most out of all the amazing parts in this song.

I look forward to seeing more of your tracks!

Very good, I favorited it the second I heard it.

I honestly dont think you need to improve anything, except for one thing...

MAKE IT LONGER! :D

Cant wait to hear the full version of this song.

And is that arp at the beginning refx nexus?

Man, youve got talent. This is a really good track. I honestly think that this is how a trance track should sound. With the buildup, bass, kicks and arps. Also the sweeps are pretty cool.
But when you switch the two arp melodies over at 1:47, it just dosent really work, and im afraid that the second melody really... isnt that good. I do not hate this song though, it just needs a little bit of work that all.

I am not going all negative on you, I am pointing out the parts I think are good and the parts I think are bad. But to end on a positive note, I think you did well.

Lovin that aggressive synth and drum lines at the beggining, and how it slowly builds up. Kinda makes me think about factories...

Im not sure why.

Keep up the good work :D

simply incredible, I love the amazing pads followed by the arps which I love so much.

You were definatley right to revisit this song cos if you didnt well, this review wouldnt be here would it.

One thing I do dislike is the pitch changes in the arp. It just dosent work too well.

But overall, I think this is the meaning of trance. good job.