theHumps

Hmmmm, interesting. How complex can you get the sounds, prob depends on the amount of time you want to spend doing the math, huh?

Old scifi music, theramin sounding at times. Sure is different, but cool.

Wayne

Nice job with the vocals on this, pretty slick! Think they could be louder in the mix, maybe just move the keys to the side a bit, give the vox a little more room, just a suggestion. fav, very cool track

Wayne

My first track of the morning, just perfect to get my day going! Liked all the changes in this and the overall dymamics of the song. Very upbeat, positive vibe here. fav and dl, nice track!

Wayne

Firt off, this is a nice song and I think a good choice for you to cover, it fits your vocals. I like the way you arranged this, nice dynamics overall. You vocals seem to get a little lost when all the instruments increase, around 2 min. Sounds like the electric guitar you have is mixed too close to the vocals or may be a bit too loud.

What I like to do a lot with my rhythm guitar tracks is to widen the stereo field a bit(or a lot depending on the song)so they are mixed to the left and right of the vocals. I really try to leave the center open for just the vocals and try not to have any instrument with similar frequencies competing with it in it's place in the mix. Kick and bass are ok down the middle, they have lower freqs and don't clash with the vox's freqs.

I'll even widen the stereo field and then pan the guitar track quite a bit left or right. I do this a lot with songs that only have a couple instruments to fatten the tracks up and fill the entire panning range, left to right.

I'm babbling now, lol, hey nice song Chris, hope any of this helps! Nice vocals again.

Wayne

Nice guitar hook, would have liked to hear a few more guitar fills cuz that one was pretty cool. Drums were pretty well done as well, overall thought it to be a pretty decent track!

Wayne

Nice chillout track, very relaxing vibe to this one. Nice job with Kuokotsu's loops, she's great!

Wayne

Cool track guys, liked the whole thing! As it built up I got into it more and more. The dub change at the end was an unexpected transition. Well done man!

Wayne

I agree with what rawhead said for the most part. These types of songs are not only fun to make but are quite enjoyable for us, the listener, to get into and take a couple minutes to let the mind go someplace it often doesn't go to. Ambient as well. Cool track to listen to.

Wayne

Ya, this rocks, very cool! Like southern rock blues feel to this. The harp really works, great job!

Wayne

Great job man, not too shabby for 6 weeks!! Keep practicing and getting those fingers toughened up. I like the song, very cool!

Try adding another track or two, maybe some simple picking, go for it!!

Wayne

Somber subject matter but I think writing songs about our experiences in life that really cut deep is is nice artistic expression. It can also be good self therapy dealing with tough situations like the death of a friend. Cool tune T.

Wayne

Dude, this is sweet! Great bass lines, nice piano, excellent production, no complaints here!! Gonna fav, no dl :(

Wayne

Too bad Ronnie James Dio just passed away because he would be perfect for the vox for this track!! Nice changes in this, also liked the harmony leads, nice touch!

Wayne

Pretty sick drum track and some great metal guitar playing. Wish there was more music like this at the loop, nice job man!

Wayne

Whoa, what is this, lol!! Kinda short, kinda sick! Pretty intense for such a short piece, interesting track dude!

Wayne

Well alright!!! This sounds great man, nice crunchy guitars and a cool bass line to match. I really hope you can get some proper vocals on this, great as is but with the right vox this would kick some serious butt.

Wayne

Hey, nice track zappo, just a pleasure to listen to. I really liked the guitar work in this especially the lead, which I think could have been louder in the mix. Some nice changes in this too.

dl and fav, thanks bud!

Wayne

Oh yea!! Nice version of this song Chris, you really nailed it here. Great production and def plenty of emotion in your vocals.

Instant fav! any chance of a dl soon?

Wayne

I love when a good description is posted with a song, it can really put the listener in the composers frame of mind. Nice job with this song! I think I can actually feel the breeze blowin through the front yard of that old house, lol.

Gonna dl and fav, welcome to the loop!

Wayne

Nice track, enjoyed listening to it. I thought the drum track and percussion sounded great. Cool upbeat feel to this, well done!

Wayne

This was very cool to listen to, very nice production here. Nice into and build up and there is some nice dynamics in this as far as bringing in and fading out instruments. I'm pretty new at electronic music but this was very cool to listen to, enjoyed!

Wayne

It's always a joy to listen to your tracks, just love your voice.

Been a while since we talked, hope things are going great!

Wayne

I liked all the different changes in this one. The Riviera is sounding nice with a little phaser on it. Is that some tremelo on the lead fills or just the twang of the Riviera? It has a darker feel to it, nice production, sounds good!!

Wayne

Very nice song, excellent vocals, guitars and bass. Hats off to both of you! dl and fav, thanks guys!

Wayne

I see what you mean about what genre to put this in, there are a lot of different feels to this. A nice song to listen to though, nice changes, nice intro, liked the delay, great beat, nice production and mix. Cool track JW

Wayne